聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời đã trả lời trực tiếp nhưng cần rõ ràng, mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ. Nên mở đầu bằng câu chủ đề ngắn gọn, sau đó giải thích lý do cụ thể hơn và dùng từ vựng phù hợp (ví dụ: "prefer texting" thay vì "chat"). Hạn chế những câu dài lặp âm như "actually" và "so" lặp lại; sửa vài lỗi ngữ pháp như "instead of call" → "instead of calling".

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends. As an introvert, I often prefer texting because I find phone calls stressful; texting lets me think before I reply and keeps conversations low-pressure.

建議: Câu trả lời có nội dung nhưng thiếu tính cụ thể và có nhiều lặp từ, ngập ngừng. Hãy dùng cấu trúc rõ ràng: nêu chủ đề chính rồi đưa 2–3 ví dụ cụ thể, kèm liên từ để kết nối. Tránh dùng từ mơ hồ như "some" quá nhiều và sửa thì động từ (present tense) "We talk" thay vì "We talked".

範例: We usually talk about a few things. For example, we discuss TV shows or online dramas I’m watching, share updates about homework and classes, and sometimes reminisce about funny moments we've had together.

建議: Câu trả lời thiếu rõ ràng, có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và ngập ngừng. Nên mở đầu trực tiếp ("I prefer..."), dùng số ít/phức hợp đúng ("one friend"), giải thích lý do ngắn gọn và có liên từ để liên kết ý. Tránh cụm từ lặp và sửa cấu trúc như "I don't belong to a close group" nếu ý đó đúng.

範例: I prefer chatting one-on-one with a close friend because conversations feel more personal and I can speak more freely. I’m not really part of a tight-knit group, so I usually avoid group chats.

建議: Câu trả lời rõ ràng và có lý do, nhưng cần sửa ngữ pháp và mạch câu để tự nhiên hơn ("communicate face to face" → "communicate face-to-face"; "make me feel better" → "makes me feel better"). Có thể thêm một chi tiết cụ thể để làm phong phú nội dung.

範例: I prefer face-to-face communication. Even though I’m introverted, meeting someone in person helps me connect better, and I often feel tired after long periods staring at screens.

建議: Câu trả lời ngắn, rõ ý và tự nhiên, nhưng có vài lỗi nhỏ về ngữ pháp và mạch câu. Nên mở rộng một chút với ví dụ hoặc cách bạn giải quyết mâu thuẫn, và sửa cấu trúc như "I want everyone around me to feel comfortable".

範例: Not often. I try to avoid arguments because I prefer a peaceful atmosphere; if disagreements do happen, I usually stay calm and talk things through to find a compromise.

× Yes, I really like chatting with friends because actually I'm an introvert so I'm a little bit afraid of calling.

✓ Yes, I really like chatting with friends because actually I'm an introvert, so I'm a little bit afraid of calling people.

The pronoun 'calling' needs an object; in English, 'call' as a verb requires a direct object (someone). Add 'people' or 'them' to complete the meaning. Suggestion: use 'calling people' or 'calling them' to clarify who you are afraid to call.

× So when I have some information that I want to talk to my friend, I often chat to them instead of call.

✓ So when I have some information that I want to tell my friend, I often chat with them instead of calling.

'Talk to my friend' is natural as 'tell my friend' for information; 'instead of' must be followed by a noun or gerund 'calling' not base form 'call'. Also use 'chat with' rather than 'chat to'. Suggestion: use gerund after 'instead of' and match preposition 'with'.

× We talked about many topics, like some drama I have seen in the Internet or like some information, some important information like, uh, homework or something like like that, or some, uh, story of ours.

✓ We talk about many topics, like some dramas I have seen on the internet, or important information like homework, or stories about us.

The question asks about usual habits so present simple 'talk' is appropriate. 'Drama' as a countable noun should be plural if referring to several shows. Use 'on the internet' not 'in the Internet'. Simplify repeated words. Suggestion: use present simple for routines, pluralize countable nouns and use correct preposition 'on'.

× So at a top before I'm an individual, I prefer to chat with just one friends and also I don't have a like a certain group of friends to like umm tells a story tell tell some story around me and just have.

✓ So at the top, before I am more of an individual; I prefer to chat with just one friend, and I don't have a certain group of friends to tell stories around me.

'Friends' should be singular 'friend' after 'one'. 'Tell' should be base form 'tell' after plural subject 'friends' or in this structure use 'to tell'. Remove redundant words and use 'am' full form. Suggestion: simplify the sentence, use singular after 'one' and correct verb form 'to tell'.

× Despite being an introvert, I still like to communicate face to face because I feel really tired when I see the screen too for a long time.

✓ Despite being an introvert, I still like to communicate face to face because I feel really tired when I look at a screen for a long time.

Use 'look at' or 'use' a screen rather than 'see the screen'. 'Too' is redundant; place time expression 'for a long time' directly after the verb phrase. Suggestion: use 'look at a screen' and relocate adverbial phrases for natural word order.

× So I think communicate face to face make me feel better.

✓ So I think communicating face to face makes me feel better.

After 'think' use a gerund 'communicating' as the subject of 'makes'. Also ensure subject-verb agreement: 'communicating ... makes' (third person singular). Suggestion: use gerund and correct verb agreement.

× Not often. I really agree with my friends because I always want everything, everyone around me feel comfortable, so I don't want to make them feel, uh, angry.

✓ Not often. I usually agree with my friends because I always want everyone around me to feel comfortable, so I don't want to make them angry.

Use 'usually' for frequency. Add 'to' before 'feel comfortable' to mark the infinitive purpose. 'Make them feel angry' is wordy; 'make them angry' is more natural. Suggestion: use 'usually' and 'to feel' for clarity and smoother phrasing.