聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be clearer and more concise. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using correct grammar and linking words. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases (e.g., “title on with the funny ones to how they behave”).

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends. We mainly use Instagram because we like sharing short reels and funny clips, which sparks quick reactions and jokes.

建議: Organize your answer: start with a general topic sentence, then give specific examples linked by connectors (for example, "for instance", "also"). Use correct verb forms and collocations (e.g., "we talk about what we are going to eat", "we play games", "we listen to music").

範例: We talk about a wide range of things. For instance, we discuss what we are going to eat, new movies we want to see, the games we play, and sometimes we reminisce about our school days.

建議: Give a clear preference and one reason with a correct expression. Avoid repetitions and unclear phrases like "know each other seated" and "quality over 20"—use the common phrase "quality over quantity."

範例: I prefer chatting with one close friend because I feel more comfortable and we can share personal things. I value quality over quantity in friendships.

建議: Be concise and use correct expressions. Start with your preference and give a clear reason. Use linking words to contrast (e.g., "because", "however"). Correct awkward phrases ("chat alone with the whole day" -> "chat online all day").

範例: I prefer communicating via social media because I'm introverted and find it easier to express myself online. Face-to-face or video calls make me feel uncomfortable, so I avoid them when possible.

建議: Answer directly and clearly. Fix grammar and vocabulary (e.g., "we are a group of three friends", "we argue about music, politics, news, and dreams"). Use one or two specific examples and avoid confusing phrases like "Bitter is it?" and repetitions.

範例: Yes, we sometimes argue. We are a group of three friends, and we often disagree about music or politics; for example, one of us prefers pop music while another likes rock, which leads to light arguments.

× We chat on Instagram, WhatsApp and also on Facebook.

✓ We chat on Instagram, WhatsApp and Facebook.

Using 'on' before each platform is unnecessary; list items after a single preposition are acceptable. Remove the extra 'and also on' to make it concise and grammatically correct.

× But we choose Instagram mostly because we send reels and title on with the funny ones to how they behave and that it's really funny.

✓ But we mostly choose Instagram because we send reels and funny clips showing how people behave, and they are really amusing.

The original sentence has unclear word order and incorrect noun choices ('title on', 'the funny ones to how they behave'). Reorder the sentence for clarity, use 'mostly choose' for adverb placement, 'funny clips' instead of 'the funny ones', and 'showing how people behave' to convey meaning clearly.

× We chat about everything from our daily lifestyles, we are going to eat, we are playing games, listening music, something new movie.

✓ We chat about everything: our daily lives, what we are going to eat, games we are playing, music we are listening to, and new movies.

The original mixes forms and has incorrect noun forms ('daily lifestyles' -> 'daily lives') and missing prepositions ('listening music' -> 'listening to music'). Use consistent parallel structures and correct collocations.

× We thought about everything.

✓ We talk about everything.

Tense is incorrect for habitual action. 'Thought' is past; the context requires present simple 'talk' to describe regular conversations.

× And sometimes we talk about our past, our school time.

✓ And sometimes we talk about our past and our school days.

Use 'school days' (common collocation) instead of 'school time'. The sentence itself is present, so 'talk' is correct; adjust noun phrase for natural expression.

× I chat with many friends but I am really comfortable with my with my only one friend and because we know each other seated and we share everything and that's much better.

✓ I chat with many friends, but I am most comfortable with my one close friend because we know each other well and share everything, which is much better.

Problems: 'only one friend' awkward—use 'one close friend'; 'with my with my' duplicated; 'seated' incorrect word choice—use 'well'. Also adjust commas and relative clause for clarity.

× As we say, quality over 20.

✓ As we say, quality over quantity.

Original '20' is incorrect and likely a mistaken number. The correct expression is 'quality over quantity'.

× I'm an introvert person.

✓ I'm an introvert.

'Introvert' functions as a noun or adjective; 'introvert person' is redundant and ungrammatical. Use 'I'm an introvert' or 'I'm introverted'.

× I prefer social media accounts.

✓ I prefer using social media.

'Social media accounts' is awkward in this context; 'using social media' or 'social media' is the natural collocation for preferring the medium of communication.

× Like I can chat alone with the whole day without getting that.

✓ I can chat alone the whole day without getting tired of it.

Original has wrong prepositions and missing adjective: 'with the whole day' -> 'the whole day', 'getting that' unclear; correct is 'getting tired of it'. Use gerund 'chatting' could also work: 'I can spend the whole day chatting alone'.

× But if I am on call or video chat or face to face it's really hard and it made me uncomfortable so I prefer social media accounts.

✓ But if I am on a call, video chat, or face to face, it's really hard and it makes me uncomfortable, so I prefer social media.

Use articles ('a call'), parallel noun forms, consistent tense ('makes' for present habitual), and commas to separate clauses. Replace 'made' with 'makes' to match present preference.

× Guess who? You argue a lot about everything because we have a three friends of group.

✓ Guess what? We argue a lot about everything because we are a group of three friends.

'Guess who?' is odd here; 'Guess what?' fits conversational tone. 'a three friends of group' is incorrect word order and articles—use 'a group of three friends'.

× So like we argue about music, political years, news, dreams and many other things.

✓ So we argue about music, politics, news, dreams and many other things.

'Political years' is incorrect; likely intended 'politics'. Remove filler 'like' for formality. Maintain parallel nouns.

× We argue about a little little things to a bit mess.

✓ We argue about little things which sometimes get a bit messy.

Reduce repetition ('little little'), fix preposition 'to' -> 'which', and use adjective 'messy' to describe situations, making sentence natural.

× Bitter is it?

✓ Isn't that right?

'Bitter is it?' is ungrammatical and unclear. A natural tag question or confirmation like 'Isn't that right?' or 'Isn't it?' fits the context better.