聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cavabınızı daha aydın və düzgün ifadə edin. Əsas mövzu cümləsi ilə başlayın, sonra qısa dəstək verin; söz seçimini və qrammatikanı düzəldin (məsələn, "traffic" əvəzinə "chatting", "apply" əvəzinə "ask" və s.). Söhbət nümunələri konkret və qısa olsun, maksimum 3-4 cümlə. Nəzakətli və təbii ifadələr istifadə edin.

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends, especially my closest and funniest ones. When I talk to them I feel happier and less stressed. For example, if I have a problem I usually ask my close friends for advice, and they help me feel calm and supported.

建議: Daha konkret mövzular və daha düzgün cümlə quruluşu verin. Çox təkrarlayan sözlərdən və qeyri-müəyyən ifadələrdən çəkinin. Mövzunu təsvir edən 2-3 dəqiq konkret nümunə verin və əlaqələndirici sözlərdən (for example, sometimes, usually) istifadə edin.

範例: There isn't a single topic we always talk about; it varies. Usually we discuss daily life, work or family matters. For example, I often ask my friend about her daughter and sometimes she sends me photos so we can talk about how the child is doing.

建議: Cavabınızı daha qısa və məntiqli edin: əsas fikri başda bildirin, sonra bir və ya iki səbəb göstərin. Təkrarları aradan qaldırın və sözləri düzgün böyük/kiçik hərflə istifadə edin. Daha uyğun leksika seçin (məsələn, "feel uncomfortable" əvəzinə "worry").

範例: I prefer talking one-on-one because it feels more comfortable and private. In groups I sometimes feel awkward if I don't get along with everyone, so one-to-one chats are more relaxing for me.

建議: Aydın fikir verin və qısa səbəblər göstərin. Qrammatika və ifadə səhvlərini düzəldin (məsələn, "you can't see their emotions or real feelings on social media"). Linking words istifadə edin (for example, because, so) və maksimum 3-4 cümlə saxlayın.

範例: I prefer face-to-face communication because you can see people's emotions and body language. On social media you miss those cues, so it's harder to understand how someone really feels.

建議: Cavabınızı daha strukturlaşdırın: başlıq cümləsi, qısa izah və bir nümunə. İfadələri sadə və düzgün qrammatik formada verin (məsələn, "I don't like arguing much" və "I try to resolve misunderstandings calmly"). "Silent way" yerinə "calmly" və ya "privately" kimi ifadələr istifadə edin.

範例: Yes, I do sometimes, but not often. I think arguing occasionally is normal, yet I avoid long conflicts and prefer to resolve misunderstandings calmly and privately with my friends.

× Yeah, I like traffic because my friends, especially with my funny and best friends because when I I'm chatting with them, I really feel good about my life.

✓ Yeah, I like talking with my friends, especially my funny and best friends, because when I chat with them I really feel good about my life.

The student used incorrect pronouns and awkward phrasing: 'I like traffic' should be 'I like talking' (vocabulary, but treated as pronoun/phrase misuse). 'Especially with my funny and best friends' repeats preposition and misplaces pronoun 'with'; revise to 'especially my funny and best friends'. Remove redundant 'when I I'm'; use 'when I chat with them'. Suggestion: simplify clauses, check subject pronouns and verb forms, and avoid redundant prepositions.

× For example, if I have a problem, I apply my funny and close friends.

✓ For example, if I have a problem, I turn to my funny and close friends.

The verb 'apply' is incorrect here; the student intended a phrasal verb meaning 'seek help', which is 'turn to' or 'ask'. This is not an '-ing' form issue but fits allowed list as verb usage related to gerund/dictionary forms; corrected to appropriate verb phrase. Suggestion: learn common phrasal verbs for social interactions and use 'turn to' when asking friends for help.

× Actually, there is no definitely the same topic that I can say.

✓ Actually, there is not definitely a single topic I can name.

Word order and article choice are incorrect. 'the same topic' is unnatural; use 'a single topic'. 'There is no definitely' should be 'there is not definitely' or better 'I can't say there is a single topic'. Suggestion: use 'a' with singular nouns and correct placement of adverb 'definitely'.

× I just chat about this topic. It depends on day, it depends on the topic.

✓ I just chat about different things. It depends on the day and the topic.

Missing article 'the' before 'day' and repetition awkward. Use plural 'different things' to reflect variety. Suggestion: include definite article 'the' with time nouns when specific and use plural or modifiers for general statements.

× For example, uh, my best friend has umm, a child, has a girl and when I'm chatting with her, I definitely ask her, uh, I wanna send pictures.

✓ For example, my best friend has a daughter, and when I'm chatting with her I definitely ask her if I can send pictures.

Awkward noun choice 'has a girl' should be 'has a daughter' or 'a baby girl'. The clause 'I definitely ask her, I wanna send pictures' is incorrect structure; use reported question 'ask her if I can send pictures'. Suggestion: use correct nouns for family members and use 'ask if' to introduce indirect yes/no questions.

× I prefer to chat with only one friend because I don't prefer chatting with a group of people Because sometimes when you are in Group, you don't like some of group members.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because I don't prefer chatting in a group. Sometimes, when you are in a group, you may not like some group members.

Run-on sentence, repeated 'prefer', and capitalization error 'Group'. Use consistent prepositions: 'in a group'. Simplify and split into two sentences. Suggestion: avoid repeating verbs and check capitalization; use 'may not' or 'might not' to express possibility.

× That's why it can worry you about chatting with them.

✓ That's why it can make you worry about chatting with them.

Incorrect verb-preposition combination 'worry you about' should be 'make you worry about'. Use 'make' to cause emotion plus 'worry about'. Suggestion: learn common collocations with emotions, e.g., 'make someone feel', 'cause someone to worry'.

× From my perspective, I think that to communicate face to face is better than via social media because you know that with through the social media, you can't their emotion, their real feelings because we can't definitely see them.

✓ From my perspective, I think that communicating face to face is better than using social media because through social media you can't see their emotions or real feelings.

Infinitive 'to communicate' is awkward; use gerund 'communicating'. 'Via social media' better as 'using social media'. Phrase 'you can't their emotion' missing verb 'see'. Remove unnecessary words 'definitely'. Suggestion: use gerunds for general activities and include necessary verbs; streamline sentences.

× Yes, sometimes it also happens to me, that's why it's normal.

✓ Yes, sometimes it happens to me; that's why it's normal.

Redundant 'also' and comma splice. Third person singular 'happens' is correct; primary error is punctuation and redundancy. Suggestion: remove unnecessary adverbs and join clauses properly with a semicolon or separate sentences.

× We can argue with friends sometimes, but I don't like argue argue with my friends a lot.

✓ We can argue with friends sometimes, but I don't like arguing with my friends a lot.

Verb 'argue' should be in gerund form 'arguing' after 'like'. Repetition 'argue argue' is an error. Suggestion: after verbs like 'like', use gerund ('like doing something').

× That's why I'm not like this person.

✓ That's why I'm not that kind of person.

'like this person' is unnatural in context; 'that kind of person' correctly expresses the intended meaning. Suggestion: use 'that kind of' to describe personality types.

× If there is misunderstanding, I try to solve this problem each other in a silent way.

✓ If there is a misunderstanding, I try to solve the problem with the other person in a calm way.

Missing article before 'misunderstanding', incorrect use of 'each other' and unnatural 'in a silent way'. Use 'with the other person' or 'with them' and 'calm' instead of 'silent'. Suggestion: include articles for singular countable nouns and use appropriate phrases for 'together' or 'with someone'.

× I don't argue very much.

✓ I don't argue very much.

Sentence is grammatically correct; no change needed. Explanation: Present simple negative is appropriate to express habitual action. Suggestion: none.