聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy, and correct verb forms. Use one or two supporting details with linking words.

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends. For example, I often use social media to stay in touch with family and colleagues, which helps me share opinions and keep updated about their lives.

建議: Organize your answer: give a clear topic sentence, then two specific examples linked with connectors. Correct vocabulary and phrasing (e.g., "social media's impact" not "social media impacts").

範例: I usually chat about current issues and the impact of social media. For example, we discuss how social media affects people's behaviour, and we also talk about upcoming local events or plans.

建議: Give a direct preference first, then briefly explain reasons using linking words. Avoid awkward phrases and improve grammar (articles, prepositions). Limit to 2–3 sentences.

範例: I prefer chatting one-on-one with my best friend because conversations are deeper and more personal. However, I also use group chats to coordinate plans and share news with several friends at once.

建議: State a clear preference or balanced view, then give concise reasons with correct grammar. Use linking words like 'however' correctly and keep sentences short.

範例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it builds stronger personal connections. However, I also use social media for convenience when meeting in person is not possible.

建議: Answer directly, then give a brief specific example with correct tense and phrasing. Avoid vague expressions and ensure sentences are complete.

範例: Yes, I sometimes argue with friends. For example, last weekend my friend and I debated the advantages and disadvantages of social media, but we resolved it by listening to each other's points.

× Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my colleagues because it is a good activity for me and I share my opinion with my friends and family members.

✓ Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my colleagues because it is a good activity for me and I can share my opinions with my friends and family members.

The original sentence lacks agreement and uses singular 'opinion' where plural 'opinions' is more natural when referring to multiple people. Also adding 'can' clarifies ability. Suggestion: use 'can share my opinions' to express the action clearly.

× Apart from that, it's provide me a wider range for communicate with my loved ones easily.

✓ Apart from that, it provides me with a wider range for communicating with my loved ones easily.

Problems: 'it's provide' mixes contraction with incorrect verb form; correct present tense is 'it provides' (subject-verb agreement). 'for communicate' is incorrect; use the gerund 'communicating' after a prepositional phrase. Also include 'with' after 'provides me'. Suggestion: use 'it provides me with a wider range for communicating'.

× So really enjoy chatting with my friends on social media.

✓ So I really enjoy chatting with my friends on social media.

Sentence lacks a subject; add 'I' to form a complete sentence. Suggestion: always include subject in independent clauses.

× Well, most of the time I prefer to talk with my friends about social media impacts and current issues which is the biggest disadvantage for the community and popular friends like which events come in upcoming days.

✓ Well, most of the time I prefer to talk with my friends about the impacts of social media and current issues, such as upcoming events, which affect the community.

Original has multiple issues: 'social media impacts' is awkward — use 'the impacts of social media'; 'which is the biggest disadvantage' is unclear and mismatched; 'popular friends like which events come in upcoming days' is ungrammatical. Rephrase to 'such as upcoming events' and clarify meaning. Suggestion: simplify and separate ideas into clear phrases.

× So this type of chatting I like to do.

✓ So this type of chatting is what I like to do.

Original word order is awkward. Use 'this type of chatting is what I like to do' or 'I like this type of chatting' for natural English. Suggestion: prefer natural subject-verb order.

× To be brutally honest, I prefer to chat with my best friend and his name is Ankush.

✓ To be brutally honest, I prefer to chat with my best friend; his name is Ankush.

Sentence is grammatically acceptable but could be improved by separating into two clauses with a semicolon or period. No major grammatical error; minor punctuation and flow improvement.

× He's very intelligent guy and I really enjoy to talk with Ankush.

✓ He's a very intelligent guy and I really enjoy talking with Ankush.

Missing indefinite article 'a' before 'very intelligent guy'. Also 'enjoy to talk' is incorrect; use the gerund 'enjoy talking'. Suggestion: use 'a' + noun and gerund after 'enjoy'.

× Due to the other fact, sometimes I prefer to send messages in Group because it is a better way and by the range to share opinions to exchange various things to each other.

✓ Sometimes I prefer to send messages in a group because it is a better way to share opinions and exchange various things with each other.

'Due to the other fact' is awkward and unnecessary. 'in Group' should be 'in a group'. 'by the range' is incorrect and removed. Use 'to share opinions and exchange various things with each other' for correct prepositions and infinitive forms. Suggestion: remove unnecessary phrases and use standard prepositions 'in a group' and 'with each other'.

× To be honest, I like to communicate face to face or social media because both platforms provides more convenience and comfortable zone.

✓ To be honest, I like to communicate face to face or via social media because both platforms provide more convenience and a comfortable environment.

'Both platforms provides' has subject-verb agreement error; correct verb is 'provide'. Use 'via social media' for preposition. 'comfortable zone' is unnatural; use 'comfortable environment'. Suggestion: match plural subject with plural verb and choose natural collocations.

× Apart from that, when the social events make more deeply connection with each other, however face to face meeting more.

✓ Apart from that, social events can create deeper connections between people; however, face-to-face meetings are still better for this.

Original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear: 'make more deeply connection' should be 'create deeper connections'. 'face to face meeting more' is incomplete; use 'face-to-face meetings are still better'. Suggestion: rephrase using clear subjects and verbs and pluralize nouns appropriately.

× It is a human nature to argue with someone and I really conflict sometimes with my best friends.

✓ It is human nature to argue with someone, and I sometimes have conflicts with my best friends.

'It is a human nature' should be 'It is human nature' (no article). 'I really conflict sometimes with' is ungrammatical; use 'I sometimes have conflicts with'. Suggestion: place adverbs like 'sometimes' in natural positions and use correct noun 'conflicts'.

× However, I last weekend talked with my friend on the impact of social media then we argued about the advantages and disadvantages of.

✓ However, last weekend I talked with my friend about the impact of social media, and then we argued about its advantages and disadvantages.

Word order: place time expressions appropriately ('last weekend I talked...'). Use 'talked about' not 'talked with... on'. 'advantages and disadvantages of' is incomplete; specify 'its advantages and disadvantages'. Suggestion: order sentences as Time + Subject + Verb and use complete noun phrases.