聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific reason and a brief example. Avoid repetition and minor grammar errors (e.g., "applications" plural, "can't always connect").

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends, especially through apps like WeChat because it's quick and convenient. For example, we create group chats to plan meetups and share photos, which makes staying in touch much easier.

建議: Give a focused topic sentence and then two specific, well-linked examples. Avoid filler words and incorrect phrasing (e.g., "complain about about", "most greatest"). Use linking words such as "for example" or "also" to connect ideas.

範例: We usually talk about our shared hobbies and pop culture. For example, we discuss new music by our favourite idols, and we also vent about stressful days at school or work to support each other.

建議: This answer is clear and structured. Improve by making sentences more natural and reducing redundancy (e.g., "precise detailed information" is repetitive). Use one linking phrase like "however" appropriately and correct minor phrasing: "a friend" instead of "my friend" for general preference.

範例: It depends. I like group chats for coordinating plans because everyone can share information at once, but I prefer chatting one-on-one when I want to discuss something private.

建議: Be concise and avoid hesitations. Give one clear reason and a brief example of features you use. Correct small errors ("video cards" unclear — say "video calls"), and avoid repetition like "was that is".

範例: I prefer social media because it offers many options, such as text, emojis, stickers, and video calls, which make conversations more flexible and fun.

建議: Good content and coherence. Make sentences slightly more natural and grammatically correct: use "on most occasions" and "opinions that differ". Add a brief example of how you resolve disagreements to strengthen the response.

範例: On most occasions I don't argue with my friends. If our opinions differ, we talk calmly and try to understand each other's views — for instance, we explain our reasons and agree to disagree when needed.

× I like chatting with my friends, especially via social media application like my WeChat.

✓ I like chatting with my friends, especially via social media applications like WeChat.

The singular 'social media application' is awkward; use the plural 'social media applications' for a general category. Also, brand names like WeChat do not need a possessive 'my' when referring to the app itself. Use 'WeChat' without 'my'.

× We often chat by WeChat because we think this is the most convenient way for us, even though we sometimes couldn't connect with each other.

✓ We often chat on WeChat because we think it is the most convenient way for us, even though we sometimes can't connect with each other.

Use the preposition 'on' with platform names (on WeChat). Replace 'this' with 'it' to refer back to 'WeChat' and ensure present-tense consistency: 'think it is' and 'can't' instead of 'couldn't' because the sentence describes habitual actions. This fixes subject-verb agreement and tense consistency.

× Usually I like to chat with my friends about a lot of things like our shared hobbies, our favorite idols or something that we want to complain about about our life and this is the most greatest way to share our emotions and by that we can.

✓ Usually I like to chat with my friends about many things, such as our shared hobbies, our favorite idols, or things we want to complain about in our lives; it is a great way to share our emotions.

Multiple issues: 'a lot of things' is informal; use 'many things' or 'a lot of things' consistently. 'something that we want to complain about about our life' repeats 'about' and misuses prepositions; use 'things we want to complain about in our lives'. 'the most greatest' is incorrect; choose 'great' or 'the greatest' but not both. The original sentence also lacked clarity and proper punctuation; the corrected sentence uses proper prepositions and concise phrasing.

× It actually depends. Sometimes I prefer to chat with a group of people, especially when I'm in a group chat, because in this way we can share information at once and we can know all the precise detailed information with each other.

✓ It actually depends. Sometimes I prefer to chat with a group of people, especially in a group chat, because this way we can share information at once and know all the precise details with each other.

Use 'in a group chat' rather than 'when I'm in a group chat' for conciseness. 'We can know all the precise detailed information with each other' is awkward: replace 'know' with 'learn' or simply 'know' and 'precise detailed information' with 'precise details'. This fixes pronoun/reference clarity and awkward phrasing.

× However, if I want to share some private information, I usually prefer to chat with my friend.

✓ However, if I want to share some private information, I usually prefer to chat with a friend.

'My friend' implies a specific person; 'a friend' is more natural when speaking generally. This is a preposition/pronoun choice issue affecting meaning and naturalness.

× Actually, I prefer to chat through social media because by WeChat, Instagram or Facebook I can use different kinds of ways to chat with my friends like text, emoji, stickers, video cards, etcetera.

✓ Actually, I prefer to chat via social media because on WeChat, Instagram, or Facebook I can use different ways to chat with my friends, like text, emojis, stickers, and video messages.

Use 'via' or 'on' for platforms: 'via social media' and 'on WeChat'. 'Different kinds of ways' is redundant; use 'different ways'. 'Emoji' should be plural 'emojis' and 'video cards' is unclear; 'video messages' is more natural. This corrects prepositions and noun forms.

× And I think that was that is the most convenient way for me.

✓ And I think that is the most convenient way for me.

Mixes past 'was' with present 'is'. The rest of the response is present-tense preference, so use present tense 'is'. This fixes tense inconsistency.

× In most occasions, I don't usually argue with my friends directly.

✓ On most occasions, I don't usually argue with my friends directly.

Use the correct collocation 'on most occasions' rather than 'in most occasions'. This is a preposition/collocation issue related to quantifier phrase use.

× Even though we may have some opinion that is different from each other, we would discuss it in a calm way and it won't affect our relationships.

✓ Even though we may have opinions that are different from each other's, we discuss them calmly, and it doesn't affect our relationships.

'Some opinion' should be plural 'opinions' when referring to multiple views. 'Different from each other' should be 'different from each other's' or 'different from one another'. Use simple present 'discuss' and 'doesn't' for habitual actions rather than conditional 'would' and 'won't'. Also match plural 'opinions' with plural 'them'.