爱好— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be concise and correct grammar: begin with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct grammar errors (article use, subject-verb agreement) and avoid repetition.

範例: I enjoy reading books in my free time. In particular, I like contemporary fiction because it helps me relax and improve my vocabulary, and I usually read for about an hour before bed.

建議: Give a clear, direct answer and correct vocabulary/grammar mistakes. Use a topic sentence, then one or two specific details with linking words. Replace incorrect words ("giant", "out day") and use past tense consistently.

範例: Yes, when I was a child I enjoyed playing outdoor games with my friends. For example, we often played football and tag in the park after school, which kept me active and helped me make friends.

建議: Start with a clear topic sentence and use correct grammar (plural/singular, relative clauses). Add a specific detail and a linking word to show continuity from past to present.

範例: Yes, outdoor games have been a hobby of mine since childhood. For instance, I used to play football with neighborhood children, and I still enjoy meeting friends for a game on weekends because it keeps me fit and social.

建議: Answer directly, then briefly explain differences using clear linking words and specific examples. Improve sentence structure and vocabulary (e.g. "some like", "others prefer").

範例: No, my hobbies are different from my family’s. For example, my sister prefers music and my father enjoys cooking, whereas I prefer outdoor games because I enjoy exercise and spending time with friends.

× This is one of my favorite hobby.

✓ This is one of my favorite hobbies.

The noun 'hobby' should be plural because 'one of my' refers to one item within a group; use the plural form 'hobbies'. Also 'favorite' correctly modifies the plural noun. Suggestion: use plural after 'one of my' (one of my + plural noun).

× It it relax my mind.

✓ It relaxes my mind.

There is a duplicated word 'it' and a wrong verb form. The subject 'It' requires third person singular present tense, so the verb should be 'relaxes'. Remove the extra 'it'. Suggestion: use correct subject-verb agreement and avoid accidental duplication.

× Yes, when I was a giant I like out day outdoor games playing with my friends.

✓ Yes, when I was a child I liked playing outdoor games with my friends.

Multiple issues: 'giant' is the wrong word for a young person; use 'child'. Tense should be past ('liked') to match 'when I was'. Word order and form: 'playing outdoor games' is correct; 'out day' is incorrect. Suggestion: use appropriate vocabulary ('child'), past tense for past habits, and proper verb + -ing order ('liked playing ...').

× Yes, outdoor games are one of my hobby which I played when I was a child.

✓ Yes, outdoor games are one of my hobbies which I played when I was a child.

'One of my' requires a plural noun 'hobbies' not 'hobby'. The rest of the sentence is acceptable though 'which I played' is better as 'that I played' or 'which I used to play'. Suggestion: change 'hobby' to 'hobbies' and consider 'that' for restrictive clauses.

× Now also I like this hobby which connect me with my friends.

✓ Now I also like this hobby which connects me with my friends.

Subject-verb agreement: 'which' refers to 'this hobby' (singular), so the verb should be 'connects' in present simple. Word order 'Now I also like' is more natural. Suggestion: use third person singular verb form with singular nouns and place adverbs ('also') after subject.

× No, as my family members, some people are like music, some are like reading books, some are like cooking.

✓ No, unlike my family members, some people like music, some like reading books, and some like cooking.

The phrase 'as my family members' is incorrect here; use 'unlike' to show difference. Also 'are like' is wrong for preferences — use 'like'. Add 'and' before the last item and parallel structure for clarity. Suggestion: use 'like' to express preferences and correct conjunctions/prepositions to show contrast.