爱好— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 答题要更直接并注意句子简洁与语法。可以用一到两句概括爱好，然后用一到两句具体说明原因，注意动词形式、冠词和单复数，并使用连接词让句子更流畅。例如把“play type playing tennis”改成“playing tennis”，把“make me keeping healthy”改成“helps me stay healthy”。

範例: I enjoy playing tennis. It helps me stay healthy because I exercise regularly, and it also develops teamwork skills since doubles requires good cooperation with your partner.

建議: 回答要先给主题句，然后用1‑2个具体细节支持。注意时态一致（过去时），简化并纠正语法错误，如用“was often the fastest”替换“I always be the fast”。避免冗长重复。

範例: Yes, I enjoyed running as a child. I often performed well in PE class and my teacher praised me, which gave me a lot of confidence because I was usually the fastest in my class.

建議: 回答需要更清晰地表达‘riding’的含义（例如骑自行车或骑马），并使用正确时态和词形。结构上先说保持爱好的时间长度，然后说明具体原因与例子。避免不完整句子和重复词。

範例: Yes, I have loved cycling since childhood. I also keep a daily journal, which helps me remember important events and reflect on my day, so both activities are very useful to me.

建議: 答题应直接回应是否与家人有相同爱好，然后给出具体习惯或例子。注意句子语法、时态和连贯性，避免重复词（如“walking walking”）和不清楚的表达（如“不吃早饭就去工作”要明确）。可以说明频率和原因。

範例: Yes, my father and I both enjoy walking. We usually walk together in the mornings before breakfast, which helps us start the day actively and gives us time to talk.

× Yes I have I have lot of habits and my favorite is play type playing tennis because tennis make me keeping healthy and I can try every day to exercise and it also can help me to protect the teamwork because you need to cooperate with your team.

✓ Yes, I have a lot of hobbies and my favorite is playing tennis because tennis helps me keep healthy. I can practise every day, and it also helps me with teamwork because you need to cooperate with your team.

句中多处动词形式和动词后接 -ing 的使用不当： 1) “have lot of habits” 中应使用复数名词并加冠词，改为 “have a lot of hobbies”。 2) “my favorite is play type playing tennis” 动名词应作表语，改为 “my favorite is playing tennis”。 3) “tennis make me keeping healthy” 动词搭配错误，主语单数需用第三人称单数动词形式 “helps”，且动词 keep 不用进行式表示一般状态，改为 “helps me keep healthy”。 4) “try every day to exercise” 更自然的表达是 “practise every day” 或 “try to exercise every day”；我改为 “practise every day”。 5) “it also can help me to protect the teamwork” 表达不自然，使用动词短语 “help with teamwork” 更恰当，并用一般现在时第三人称单数 “helps”。 建议：注意动词后接 -ing（如表喜好时用 playing），注意第三人称单数现在时的动词变化（help → helps），以及常见动词搭配（keep healthy，不用 keeping）。

× Yes I like running in my childhood and because I am good I have good job in my PE class and my PE teacher always praised me and I get lots of confidence from PE and I like running the most because I always be the fast in my class.

✓ Yes, I liked running in my childhood because I was good at it. I did well in my PE class and my PE teacher always praised me. I gained a lot of confidence from PE, and I liked running the most because I was always the fastest in my class.

句子时态混用和现在时使用不当： 1) 谈过去的爱好应使用过去时，“I like running in my childhood” 改为 “I liked running in my childhood”。 2) “because I am good I have good job in my PE class” 不通顺且时态应为过去，改为 “because I was good at it. I did well in my PE class”。 3) “my PE teacher always praised me and I get lots of confidence” 两处时态需统一为过去：praised → "praised"（可保留），但 “get” 应为过去式 “got” 或更自然 “gained”。我改为 “gained”。 4) “I always be the fast in my class” 主语 + be 动词在过去应为 was，且比较级/最高级错误，应为 “the fastest”。 建议：描述过去经历时统一使用过去时，注意形容词与比较级的正确形式（fast → the fastest）。

× Yeah, I like riding since childhood because I always have a lot of think and I like to writing the daily routine and because it is can help me to remember everyday things in my life. It it is very useful you can.

✓ Yeah, I have liked riding since childhood because I always have a lot of thoughts and I like writing my daily routine, because it can help me remember everyday things in my life. It is very useful.

主要问题是动词形式和句子结构： 1) “I like riding since childhood” 表达从过去持续到现在应使用现在完成时或现在完成进行时，改为 “I have liked riding since childhood”。 2) “have a lot of think” 名词错误，改为复数名词 “thoughts”。 3) “I like to writing” 动词 to 后应接动词原形或将 like 后接动名词，两种形式不能混用，改为 “I like writing” 或 “I like to write”。我改为 “I like writing”。 4) “because it is can help me to remember” 不需要同时用 is 和 can，改为 “because it can help me remember”。 5) 末句残缺 “It it is very useful you can.” 改为 “It is very useful.” 建议：注意动词不定式与动名词的用法区别（like + -ing 或 like to + 原形），以及现在完成时表持续的用法。避免多余助动词（is can 不正确）。

× Yes, my dad and I like walking walking and we always have some time to working together such as the morning and we don't eat breakfast and just go to go to working when we get up and also we will working before the breakfast before the dinner.

✓ Yes, my dad and I like walking and we often have time to work together in the morning. We don't eat breakfast; we just go to work when we get up, and we also work before breakfast and before dinner.

句中多处介词和动词形式使用错误： 1) 重复词 “walking walking” 删除多余重复，改为 “like walking”。 2) “have some time to working together such as the morning” 动词不定式用法错误，should be “have time to work together in the morning”，此处介词应为 in the morning。 3) “we don't eat breakfast and just go to go to working when we get up” 动词短语顺序和不定式错误，改为 “we don't eat breakfast; we just go to work when we get up”。 4) “we will working before the breakfast before the dinner” 时态和介词错误，改为 “we also work before breakfast and before dinner”。 建议：注意介词短语的固定用法（in the morning, before breakfast），动词不定式不要写成 to + -ing（to working 不对），以及删除重复词和多余助动词。