爱好— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答內容清楚並有細節，但語法與用詞有些小錯誤，句子可更自然且避免冗餘。例如：用複數或單數一致（a puzzle 或 puzzles），以及把兩句合併用連接詞會更流暢。嘗試把句子控制在五句以內並加入過渡詞。

範例: Yes, I enjoy doing jigsaw puzzles. Last week I completed a 2,000-piece puzzle, and afterwards I hung it on the wall of my bedroom. I find puzzles relaxing and satisfying because they improve my concentration and give me a sense of accomplishment.

建議: 回答包含有用資訊但有時態與單複數錯誤，且有重複與語氣詞（uh）。建議使用正確時態（過去式）和一致的單複數，精簡並用連接詞整理內容，最後提供一個具體例子。

範例: Yes, I had several hobbies as a child. I enjoyed reading and drawing, and I occasionally sang; in fact, I used to attend singing lessons for a year, which helped me build confidence performing in front of others.

建議: 回答方向正確且有原因，但有語法與用詞小錯誤（a good habits -> a good habit 或 good habits），以及時態與頻率表達可更自然。建議簡短明確的主句，接著用連接詞給出具體例子或影響。

範例: Yes, I still enjoy reading and have done so since childhood. I often go to the library to borrow books, which has improved my vocabulary and helped me a lot with my studies.

建議: 回答表達出家庭影響，但有語法錯誤（like -> likes, buy -> buys）和不完整或亂碼部分。建議修正動詞一致性，去掉不必要重複，並提供一具體例子說明母親如何鼓勵你。

範例: Yes, my mother also enjoys reading, and I think I inherited this habit from her. She consistently encouraged me to try new books and often bought novels and picture books for me, so I always had something interesting to read.

× Yes I do and my hobby is playing puzzle.

✓ Yes, I do. My hobby is solving jigsaw puzzles.

原句中“playing puzzle”用法不正确。英语中通常说“solve a puzzle”或“do a puzzle”，而“jigsaw puzzle”更常用于说明2000块拼图。建议用“solving jigsaw puzzles”或“doing puzzles”。另外加上适当的标点使句子更清晰。

× Last week I finished a puzzle with 2000 pieces and after that I hung it on my bedroom's wall.

✓ Last week I finished a 2,000-piece puzzle and afterwards I hung it on my bedroom wall.

原句中“with 2000 pieces”虽可理解，但更自然的表述是“a 2,000-piece puzzle”。此外“after that”可用“afterwards”或“after that”均可，省略所有格“bedroom's wall”更常用“bedroom wall”。“hung”为正确过去式（过去分词）形式，无需修改时态。

× Yes, I had a lot of hobby when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a lot of hobbies when I was a child.

原句中“a lot of hobby”在数量和单复数上错误。“a lot of”后面应接可数名词复数或不可数名词，因此应为“a lot of hobbies”。还可更自然地说“I had many hobbies”。

× I liked reading and drawing and sometimes I like singing.

✓ I liked reading and drawing, and sometimes I liked singing.

句子描述的是过去的爱好，时态应统一为过去式。原句中先用“liked”再用现在时“like”，造成时态不一致。将“like”改为“liked”以保持过去时态一致。

× And uh, I still remember I had a singing class when I was a child.

✓ And, uh, I still remember that I had singing classes when I was a child.

原句主要问题是可数名词“singing class”在泛指童年时期的课程时更自然用复数“singing classes”，并在“remember”后加从句连词“that”使句子更完整。时态（过去）是正确的。

× Yes I do, I still like reading now and I always go to the library to read books.

✓ Yes, I do. I still like reading, and I always go to the library to read books.

原句时态和内容大体正确，仅需标点和句子分割使表达更清楚。“still like reading now”中“still”和“now”二者积叠可省去“now”或调整为“still like reading”更自然。保持现在时正确。

× I think it is a good habits, it helps me a lot during my study.

✓ I think it is a good habit; it helps me a lot with my studies.

原句中“a good habits”主谓不一致，因“a”要求后接单数名词，应改为“a good habit”或直接“good habits”。“during my study”不太自然，应改为“with my studies”或“during my studies”。另外用分号或句号连接两部分更合适。

× Yes I do, my mother like reading too and I think I get these habits from her.

✓ Yes, I do. My mother likes reading too, and I think I got these habits from her.

原句中“my mother like”应为第三人称单数需要加-s，改为“likes”。“I think I get these habits from her”如果指已经形成的习惯，过去原因可用“got”或现在完成时“have gotten/have got”；在口语中用“got”或“inherited”都可以。保持时态一致更清晰。

× *** always encouraged me to read new books and she also buy me a lot of books so I can read whenever I want.

✓ She always encouraged me to read new books, and she also bought me a lot of books so I could read whenever I wanted.

此句存在多个问题：主句缺主语（用***代替），应补为“She”。动词时态需一致，过去时“encouraged”与“bought”保持一致。原句“buy”应为过去式“bought”。从句中“so I can read whenever I want”描述过去情况应使用过去时“so I could read whenever I wanted”。此外注意标点分隔句子。