爱好— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答自然且相关，但略显简短且信息重复（relax/express）。可以增加具体细节并用连接词扩展，避免超过五句。建议说明何时、在哪里或以何种方式唱歌，以及举例支持感受。

範例: Yes. I really enjoy singing in my free time because it helps me relax and express my emotions. For example, I often sing along to acoustic playlists at home after dinner, which helps me unwind and improves my mood. Sometimes I also record short covers and share them with friends.

建議: 回答有重复并且存在语言错误（’seeing’ 应为 ‘singing’），句子结构简单且缺乏具体细节。应直接回应过去的情况，使用过去时并加上具体例子（何时、和谁、怎样做）。

範例: Yes, I loved singing when I was a child. I used to join my school choir every year and sing at family gatherings, which made me feel confident. Those early experiences made me keep singing into adulthood.

建議: 回答与前一题几乎相同且重复错误（拼写/发音导致 ‘seeing’）。应更明确地用现在完成时或现在完成进行时说明持续性，并添加细节，如变化、频率或重要事件。

範例: Yes, I have been singing since I was a child and I still enjoy it. Over the years I have improved by taking online lessons and practicing weekly, so now I feel more confident performing in front of others.

建議: 回答清晰且相关，说明了影响来源，但可以更具体说明母亲如何影响（例如一起练习、参加活动）并用连接词增强连贯性。

範例: Yes, my hobby is definitely influenced by my mother because she is a primary school music teacher who loves singing. As a result, we often practice songs together at home and she encouraged me to join the school choir when I was young.

× Oh I enjoyed seeing when I was a kid and it's actually a hobby that I still really like now. I find it really relaxing and fun.

✓ Oh I enjoyed singing when I was a kid and it's actually a hobby that I still really enjoy now. I find it really relaxing and fun.

问题类型：过去时态（Past tense issue）。 错误说明：原句中把“singing”误写为“seeing”，是拼写错误导致意义错误；另外第二句用“like”虽然不是严格错误，但与第一句“enjoyed”搭配更自然的对应现在时态使用“enjoy”。 改进建议：注意拼写并保持时态一致性。第一句描述过去的爱好用过去时“enjoyed”；随后说明现在仍然喜欢时，用现在时“enjoy”或“still really enjoy”更清晰。多读音近词（sing/see）以避免拼写错误。

× Oh I enjoyed seeing when I was a kid and it's actually a hobby that I still really like now. I find it really relaxing and fun.

✓ Oh I enjoyed singing when I was a kid and it's actually a hobby that I still really enjoy now. I find it really relaxing and fun.

问题类型：过去时态（Past tense issue）。 错误说明：该句在第二次出现与上句完全相同，仍存在同样的拼写和时态选择问题。 改进建议：同上，确保将“seeing”改为“singing”，并在谈到现在持续的爱好时用“enjoy”或“still really enjoy”。

× Oh yes I do. I really enjoy singing, especially in my free time. It helps me relax and express myself.

✓ Oh yes, I do. I really enjoy singing, especially in my free time. It helps me relax and express myself.

问题类型：动词的 -ing 形式（Verb + -ing form）。 错误说明：原句整体正确，但缺少逗号（标点）会影响口语书写流畅性；“singing”作为动名词用法是正确的。 改进建议：保持“singing”作为动名词不变，注意在书面表达中加入适当标点使句子更清晰。

× Oh yes, actually my hobby is influenced by my mom. She's a primary school music teacher and she really loves singing.

✓ Oh yes. Actually, my hobby was influenced by my mom. She's a primary school music teacher and she really loves singing.

问题类型：代词/时态搭配（Incorrect use of pronouns / Past tense issue）。 错误说明：句子“my hobby is influenced by my mom”用现在时也可以，但在上下文中提到“since childhood”时，表明影响起于过去，用被动现在完成或过去更合适；此处改为“was influenced”更符合“从小就受影响”的含义。代词“She”使用正确，无需更改。 改进建议：根据上下文选择合适时态。若强调从过去开始并持续到现在，可用“has been influenced by my mom”；若强调过去的影响过程，使用“was influenced”。