爱好— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cevap doğrudan soruyu yanıtlıyor, ama dilbilgisi ve kelime seçimi hataları var. Cümleler çoğunlukla kısa ve bazen anlamsal bozulma var (ör. "I really interested football", "I start to primary football school"). Geliştirmek için: (1) Doğru fiil yapılarını kullanın (örn. "I became interested in football"), (2) Cümleleri bağlayan kısa bağlaçlar kullanın ("and", "so", "because") ve gereksiz tekrarları kaldırın, (3) En fazla 4-5 cümle içinde net bir konu cümlesi ve bir-iki destekleyici detay verin. Örnek olarak daha doğal bir yanıt gösterilmiştir.

範例: Yes, my favourite hobby is playing and watching football. I became interested in football when I was a child because my friends and I used to play every weekend. I also attended a local football school for a few years, which helped me improve my skills.

建議: Cevap konusunda fikir veriyor ama çok dağınık ve tereddütlü (çok "uh" kullanımı). Bazı ifadeler yanlış ("I was won several medals"). Geliştirmek için: (1) Tereddütleri azaltmak için cevabı zihninizde kısa bir planla hazırlayın; (2) Doğru zaman ve yapı kullanın (örn. "I won several medals"), (3) Bir ana hobi seçip bir-iki spesifik detay verin (ne zaman, nerede, ne kazandınız).

範例: Yes, I had several hobbies as a child, but the most important were badminton and table tennis. I played for my school team and won several medals in local competitions when I was about 10 to 12 years old.

建議: Cevap net ve ilgili, ancak dilbilgisi ve kelime akıcılığı sorunlu ("I start to play it FPS game", gereksiz tekrarlar). Geliştirmek için: (1) Doğru geçmiş zaman formlarını kullanın ("I started to play"), (2) Gereksiz duraksamaları ve tekrarları azaltın, (3) Bir neden veya kısa değerlendirme ekleyin (neden sevdiğinizi veya bunun üzerindeki etkisini).

範例: Yes, I have played video games since I was a child. I got my first personal computer when I was eight and started playing FPS games, which I still enjoy because they are challenging and improve my reaction time.

建議: Cevap aileyle ortak hobilere değiniyor fakat tekrarlar ("twin, twin"), dil bilgisi ve ifade bozuklukları ("we had to joystick") var. Geliştirmek için: (1) Kısa ve net cümleler kurun, (2) Tekrarları kaldırın, (3) Aileyle paylaştığınız hobinin nasıl birlikte yapıldığını ve bir örnek verin (ne sıklıkla, hangi oyunlar).

範例: Yes, I share hobbies with my twin brother. We often play video games together, especially football games using a joystick, and we usually play at weekends for a few hours.

× I really interested football when I was a child.

✓ I was really interested in football when I was a child.

The student omitted the auxiliary verb 'was' required for the past state and the preposition 'in' after 'interested'. Use the past form 'was interested' to match 'when I was a child' and 'interested in' is the correct collocation.

× I start to primary football school.

✓ I started at a primary football school.

The verb should be in the past tense 'started' to match the past timeframe. 'Start to' is awkward here; use 'started at' to indicate beginning attendance, and include the article 'a' before 'primary football school'.

× Of course I had, uh, the significant one, uh, for me is uh, blank and table tennis and uh, I was won several, uh, medals.

✓ Of course I did. The main ones for me were badminton and table tennis, and I won several medals.

Use the auxiliary 'did' to answer a past question ('Of course I did'). 'Significant one' should be plural 'main ones' because multiple hobbies follow. 'Blank' was likely 'badminton'. Use past plural 'were' to describe past hobbies and the verb 'won' does not need 'was' — 'I won several medals' is correct.

× I played for the, uh, my school.

✓ I played for my school.

Remove the redundant article 'the' before 'my school'. 'My' already specifies the noun so 'the' is unnecessary and ungrammatical here.

× When I was 8 uh, I got my uh, first personal computer. I start to play it FPS game and nowadays still I'm uh, playing FPS uh, video games.

✓ When I was eight, I got my first personal computer. I started to play FPS games on it and nowadays I'm still playing FPS video games.

Use past tense 'started' to describe when the activity began. Use plural 'games' and the preposition 'on' after 'play' for the device. 'Nowadays I'm still playing' is the correct present continuous form for ongoing activities.

× Yes, of course. I have a twin, twin brother, I'm one of them.

✓ Yes, of course. I have a twin brother; I'm one of the twins.

Say 'twin brother' (no repeated word) and refer to the pair as 'the twins' or 'one of the twins'. Using 'one of them' is vague; 'one of the twins' is clear and grammatical.

× And we were playing video games too and we had to joystick for the football games we were playing together and now we are playing.

✓ We used to play video games together; we had two joysticks for the football games, and we still play now.

Use 'used to' to describe a habitual past action. 'Had two joysticks' is the correct expression (not 'had to joystick'). For a current habit, use simple present 'we still play' rather than 'we are playing' in this general context.