爱好— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be concise and directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words and repetition, and provide one or two specific examples of hobbies. Use one or two linking words to show reason. Keep to 2–4 sentences.

範例: Yes, I have several hobbies. For example, I enjoy cycling and reading; cycling helps me exercise after work, and reading relaxes me and improves my English.

建議: Start with a clear topic sentence stating a childhood hobby, avoid unclear phrases and repetition, and give a specific detail or short reason using linking words. Correct tense and simple vocabulary help clarity.

範例: Yes, I did. As a child I loved listening to music because it helped me relax after school, and I often listened to songs while doing homework.

建議: Give a direct, grammatical answer naming the hobby you have continued since childhood. Avoid unclear or unrelated details and reduce hesitations. Provide one brief supporting detail about how you keep the hobby now.

範例: Yes, I have. I have enjoyed listening to music since I was a child, and I still listen to playlists every evening to relax and remember songs I loved before.

建議: Answer directly whether you share hobbies with family, use correct grammar for agreement, and give a specific example of an activity you do together plus a linking word to explain why it matters. Limit to 2–3 clear sentences.

範例: Yes, my mother and I both enjoy cooking. We often cook dinner together because it gives us time to talk about our day and try new recipes.

× I have a lot of hobbies, uh, because you knows at all as a office office employee.

✓ I have a lot of hobbies because you know, as an office employee.

The verb 'know' should be in base form 'know' with subject 'you' (no -s). Also article 'an' is required before 'office employee' and duplicate word 'office' removed. Suggestion: use 'you know' and 'an office employee'.

× So I need to relax and recharge my batteries after a long day. So I.

✓ So I need to relax and recharge my batteries after a long day.

The fragment 'So I.' is incomplete (no verb) and duplicates the previous idea. Remove the fragment to form a complete sentence. Ensure each sentence has a subject and verb.

× When I watch a choice, I very like listening to music because when I listening to music I have an opportunity to relax and recharge my batteries from a tiring from tiring range.

✓ When I was a child, I liked listening to music because when I listened to music I had an opportunity to relax and recharge my batteries after a tiring day.

The original mixes tenses and incorrect words. For past habits use past tense 'was' and 'liked' and 'listened.' 'When I listening' is incorrect; use 'when I listened.' 'From a tiring from tiring range' is meaningless; replace with 'after a tiring day.' Ensure consistent past tense for childhood descriptions.

× Umm, of course, when our childhoods, I uh, have lost a puppy such as Richmond listen music uh, uh, umm, uh, umm single and.

✓ Of course, since childhood I have loved listening to music; I also had a puppy named Richmond.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'When our childhoods' is incorrect; use 'since childhood' or 'when I was a child.' 'Have lost a puppy' likely intended 'had a puppy named Richmond.' 'Listen music' should be 'listening to music.' Break into two clear clauses and use correct verb forms.

× Umm, I think yes uh, I and my mother very like cooking up because when we cooking we can share stories about my daily life or uh umm.

✓ Yes, I think so. My mother and I really like cooking because when we cook we can share stories about our daily lives.

Use correct pronoun order 'My mother and I.' 'Very like' is incorrect; use 'really like.' 'Cooking up' is unnecessary; use 'cooking.' 'When we cooking' needs finite verb 'cook.' 'My daily life' should be plural 'our daily lives' when referring to both people.