爱好— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be concise and grammatical: start with a clear topic sentence, group similar hobbies, and avoid repetition and small errors. Use linking words if you add details. Also correct collocations: say “going to the gym” or “gym workouts,” and “reading books and cooking/trying food” if you mean food-related hobbies.

範例: I do have several hobbies. I enjoy reading books, playing football and going to the gym for workouts. For example, I usually read fiction in the evenings and play football with friends twice a week.

建議: Use correct tense and articles, and give a clear topic sentence followed by specific supporting details. Use linking words (for example, also) correctly and avoid repetition. Correct to “When I was a child, I loved playing football” and give a brief example of frequency or a favourite memory.

範例: When I was a child, I loved playing football. I played every day with my friends after school, and we often organised small matches on the local pitch. I also enjoyed reading simple storybooks, especially adventure stories.

建議: Avoid fillers and unclear phrasing. Give a direct answer and then one or two specific details. Use correct grammar: “Yes, I have had two hobbies since childhood: playing football and reading books.” Then add a brief reason or memory. Keep it under five sentences.

範例: Yes, I have. Playing football and reading books have been my favourite hobbies since I was a child. I have fond memories of practising football with friends every weekend, and reading helped me relax and learn new words.

建議: Be grammatically correct and expand slightly with a specific detail or comparison using a linking word. For example, say “Yes. My sister also loves reading, but we have different tastes in books,” or mention another family member and a short reason.

範例: Yes. My sister also loves reading books like me, but she prefers romance novels while I prefer science fiction. We often recommend books to each other.

× Yes I have some hobbies, for example reading books and food, play football and and training on the gym.

✓ Yes, I have some hobbies. For example, reading books and cooking, playing football, and training at the gym.

Errors: missing commas, incorrect word choice 'food' for 'cooking', duplicated 'and', wrong preposition 'on' before 'the gym', and sentence run-on. Suggestions: separate into two sentences or use commas between list items; use 'cooking' instead of 'food' to show the hobby; use 'playing football' and 'training at the gym' with preposition 'at'.

× When I was child, I really love playing football.

✓ When I was a child, I really loved playing football.

Errors: missing article 'a' before 'child' (article error) and tense mismatch: speaking about past time 'When I was a child' requires past tense 'loved' not present 'love'. Suggestions: add 'a' and change verb to past tense.

× I play football every day with my friends and I also like reading books, especially simple books.

✓ I played football every day with my friends, and I also liked reading books, especially simple ones.

Error: tense inconsistency. The sentence refers to childhood (past time) so present simple 'play' and 'like' should be past 'played' and 'liked'. Also 'simple books' is repetitive; 'simple ones' is more natural. Suggestions: match verb tenses to the time frame.

× Yeah, absolutely. Uh, I can't say still, uh, about my hobbies and that playing football and reading books is uh, they my favorite hobbies from childhood.

✓ Yeah, absolutely. I can't say exactly about my hobbies, but playing football and reading books have been my favorite hobbies since childhood.

Errors: unclear phrasing 'I can't say still', awkward clause 'and that playing football...', incorrect pronoun 'they' and wrong tense/form. Suggestions: simplify and clarify: 'I can't say exactly about my hobbies' or omit; use present perfect 'have been' to indicate a hobby continuing from childhood; remove unnecessary filler words.

× Yes, definitely. My sister also really love reading books like, uh, me.

✓ Yes, definitely. My sister also really loves reading books like me.

Errors: subject-verb agreement 'sister... love' should be 'loves' (third person singular) and awkward placement of 'like, uh, me.' Suggestions: remove filler 'uh' and ensure verb agrees with singular subject; phrase 'like me' is natural.