爱好— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence naming a few main hobbies, then give one brief detail or reason using a linking word. Avoid listing too many activities without elaboration.

範例: Yes. I enjoy singing and dancing, and I also like watching films in my free time. For example, I often practise singing for an hour each evening and go to local dance classes at the weekend.

建議: Correct grammar and use past tense consistently. Give one specific memory or detail to make the answer more vivid and use a linking word when adding details.

範例: Yes, I did. As a child I loved watching Barbie movies and reading e-books, and I often played games with my friends after school. For example, we used to act out scenes from the films, which helped me enjoy storytelling.

建議: Be specific and use simpler sentence structure. Mention one hobby you have kept since childhood and explain how it continued, adding a linking word to connect the idea.

範例: Yes, I have kept singing since I was a child. I used to sing at family gatherings, and I still practise regularly because it relaxes me and helps my confidence.

建議: Organise your response: give a direct topic sentence, then briefly compare your hobbies with your family’s using linking words. Avoid uncertain phrases like "I don't know"—be specific or omit. Correct grammar and reduce filler language.

範例: No, not really. My father and two brothers enjoy playing basketball, whereas my main interests are watching films, singing and dancing. My mother prefers gardening, so our hobbies are quite different.

× Yes, I have a hobbies when I was a child like watching Barbie movies, reading ebooks and playing with my friends.

✓ Yes, I had hobbies when I was a child, such as watching Barbie movies, reading e-books, and playing with my friends.

The noun 'hobbies' is plural but paired with 'a' which is singular; remove 'a' and use correct past tense 'had' to match 'when I was a child'. Also use 'such as' for examples and add commas for clarity. Use 'e-books' as standard form.

× Yes, the kind of hobby that still have in me since childhood is singing, dancing and watching good movies too.

✓ Yes, the kinds of hobby that I still have since childhood are singing, dancing, and watching good movies.

Subject-verb agreement and tense: 'that still have in me' is incorrect. Use 'that I still have' (correct object placement) and match plural 'kinds' with plural verb 'are' because multiple activities are listed. 'Since childhood' implies continuing to present, so present tense 'have' is appropriate.

× Well no, because I have a father and two brothers so they're all alike.

✓ Well, no. My father and two brothers are similar to each other.

The original 'they're all alike' is informal and ambiguous after starting with 'Well no'. Recast sentence to clearly state the meaning and avoid dangling reference. Use a full sentence for clarity.

× I mean they have same hobbies like playing basketball and my mother is that I don't know while mine is watching movies, singing and dancing.

✓ I mean they have the same hobbies, like playing basketball. As for my mother, I'm not sure, while my hobbies are watching movies, singing, and dancing.

Multiple problems: missing article 'the' before 'same hobbies', awkward clause 'my mother is that I don't know' is ungrammatical—rephrase to 'I'm not sure' about mother's hobbies. 'Mine is' should be 'my hobbies are' to match plural. Use commas and conjunctions to separate ideas for clarity.