爱好— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be careful with grammar, word choice and sentence cohesion. Start with a clear topic sentence, use correct countable/uncountable forms (e.g., 'a few hobbies'), correct verb forms and articles, and avoid redundancy. Use linking words when listing hobbies and give brief specific details (e.g., favourite genres, examples of authors or shows). Keep answers to no more than 3–4 sentences.

範例: I have a few hobbies. I especially enjoy reading historical novels because they help me unwind after a long day and teach me about the past. I also like listening to relaxing music, and at weekends I sometimes watch adventure TV series on Netflix.

建議: Good content and specific details. Fix verb tenses and article use, and avoid repetition (e.g., 'near our village' and 'nearby river'). Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two supporting details connected with linking words (e.g., 'because', 'so').

範例: When I was a child, I often swam with my friends in a river near our village in Roseville. It was very memorable because we went almost every afternoon during the holidays and enjoyed racing and exploring the banks.

建議: Content is relevant but vocabulary and some phrases are unclear or incorrect (e.g., 'quantum barrier novels' likely wrong, plural/singular agreement). Be specific: name a clear genre or give a brief plot detail. Use correct verb forms and articles. Keep to 2–3 sentences and link ideas (e.g., 'because', 'for example').

範例: I've loved reading since childhood, and I particularly enjoy realistic family novels because they reflect everyday life and expand my understanding of other people's experiences. For example, I recently read a book about a family who moves to a new town and faces different challenges adapting to their new community.

建議: Clarify meaning and correct grammar: avoid unclear phrases like 'you don't sell the same hobby.' Use present simple for routines (e.g., 'My father enjoys gardening'). Begin with a direct response, then contrast with family members and add one linking sentence about shared activities. Keep to 2–3 sentences.

範例: No, I don't share the same hobbies as my parents. My father enjoys gardening and my mother likes cooking, while I prefer reading; however, we often spend time together sharing stories and discussing books.

× Yes, I have a few hobby.

✓ Yes, I have a few hobbies.

The noun 'hobby' is countable and the plural form 'hobbies' must be used after 'a few'. Use 'a few' with plural nouns. Suggestion: say 'a few hobbies' or 'a hobby' depending on intended meaning.

× I especially enjoy reading because it's helped me unwind after a long day at the office and I often choose historical novel to learn more about the past.

✓ I especially enjoy reading because it helps me unwind after a long day at the office and I often choose historical novels to learn more about the past.

Two errors: 'it's helped' (present perfect) is inconsistent with general habitual statement; use simple present 'it helps' for habitual effect. Also 'historical novel' should be plural 'historical novels' after 'choose' when speaking generally. Suggestion: use simple present for habits and plural for general choices.

× I also like listening to the music to relax and I sometime being a watch ATV series on Netflix at the weekend.

✓ I also like listening to music to relax and I sometimes watch ATV series on Netflix at the weekend.

Do not use the definite article 'the' before uncountable abstract 'music' when speaking generally. 'Sometime' is incorrect; use adverb 'sometimes'. 'Being a watch' is ungrammatical: use simple verb 'watch'. Suggestion: 'listening to music' and 'sometimes watch'.

× When I was a child, I often spend my time swimming with my friend in our nearby river near our village in Roseville.

✓ When I was a child, I often spent my time swimming with my friend in the nearby river near our village in Roseville.

The sentence refers to repeated past actions, so use past simple 'spent' not 'spend'. Also 'nearby river' needs an article 'the nearby river' when referring to a specific river. Suggestion: use past simple for habitual past actions and include appropriate articles.

× It was a lot of fun and very memorable experience because we swam there almost every afternoon during the holiday.

✓ It was a lot of fun and a very memorable experience because we swam there almost every afternoon during the holidays.

Countable noun 'experience' needs the article 'a'. 'Holiday' in this context (repeated or a period) should be plural 'holidays' or 'the holidays'. Suggestion: include 'a' before 'very memorable experience' and use 'holidays'.

× I have loved reading since I was a child.

✓ I have loved reading since I was a child.

This sentence is grammatically correct. It uses present perfect to describe an action that began in the past and continues to the present. No correction needed.

× I especially enjoy quantum barrier novels because they mirror everyday life and broaden my understanding of other people experience and viewpoints.

✓ I especially enjoy quantum barrier novels because they mirror everyday life and broaden my understanding of other people's experiences and viewpoints.

Possessive form 'other people's' is required to show ownership of 'experiences'. 'Experience' should be plural when referring to multiple people's experiences. Suggestion: use the possessive and plural form.

× For example, I recently read a book about a family that move into another towns.

✓ For example, I recently read a book about a family that moved into another town.

'Move' should be past simple 'moved' to match 'recently read' (past action). 'Towns' should be singular 'town' after 'another'. Suggestion: match past tense and use singular after 'another'.

× And now you don't sell the same hobby.

✓ No, we don't share the same hobbies now.

Original is ungrammatical and unclear. 'And now you don't sell the same hobby' wrongly uses 'sell' and second-person 'you'. The intended meaning is that family members do not have the same hobbies; use 'we don't share the same hobbies now'. Suggestion: rephrase to 'we don't share the same hobbies'.

× My father enjoyed gardening and my mother like cooking, while I prefer reading.

✓ My father enjoys gardening and my mother likes cooking, while I prefer reading.

If describing current habitual hobbies, use simple present 'enjoys' and 'likes'. 'My mother like' is subject-verb disagreement; for third person singular add -s. Suggestion: use present tense and correct agreement.

× But I often spend time together sharing story and discussing books.

✓ But we often spend time together sharing stories and discussing books.

Missing subject 'we' makes the sentence unclear; use plural 'stories' and include 'we' to indicate who spends time together. Suggestion: add subject and pluralize 'story'.