爱好— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 응답은 간단하고 이해 가능하지만 문법과 자연스러운 표현을 개선해야 합니다. 'Yes, I have' 대신 'Yes, I do'를 쓰고 취미를 나열할 때 병렬구조를 정확히 사용하세요. 또한 구체성을 더해 한두 문장으로 이유나 빈도(예: 얼마나 자주 연주하거나 굽는지)를 덧붙이면 점수가 올라갑니다.

範例: Yes, I do. I play the guitar and I also bake bread. I usually play the guitar for about an hour every evening, and I bake bread on weekends to relax.

建議: 답변이 단편적이고 문법·발음 오류가 있으며 의미 전달이 불분명합니다. 간단한 과거형 문장으로 직접 답하고, 악기 이름을 정확히 말하세요. 필요하다면 한두 개의 세부사항(언제 시작했는지, 얼마나 오래 했는지)을 덧붙이세요.

範例: Yes, I did. When I was a child I learned to play the piano for about three years, and I enjoyed practicing after school.

建議: 시제와 표현을 바로잡아야 합니다. 'I had' 대신 현재완료 또는 현재시제를 사용해 계속된 상황을 표현하세요. 또한 이유를 말할 때 자연스러운 표현(예: 'helps me relax' 혹은 'helps me recharge')을 사용하고 문장을 간결하게 만드세요.

範例: Yes, I have. I've been baking bread since I was a child, and I still bake because it helps me relax and recharge after a busy day.

建議: 문장이 매우 불분명하고 문법 오류가 많습니다. 가족과의 취미 차이를 말할 때는 간단하고 정확하게 부정문을 사용하세요. 예: 'No, my family members don't share my hobbies' 그리고 이유나 한 가지 예를 덧붙이면 더 자연스럽습니다.

範例: No, my family don't share my hobbies. For example, I enjoy baking and playing guitar, but my parents prefer watching TV and my sister likes sports instead.

× Yes, I have. I play the guitar and I bake some bread.

✓ Yes, I do. I play the guitar and I bake bread.

The student used 'I have' to answer a question about possession of hobbies; in English, the correct short answer uses the auxiliary 'do' for 'have' when it means 'have a hobby' (I do). Also, 'bake some bread' is not wrong but 'bake bread' is more natural when stating a habitual hobby. Suggestion: use 'Yes, I do.' for possession and 'I bake bread' for habitual actions.

× Yes, I had when I was young. I played a piano like. Attorney. Or.

✓ Yes, I did when I was young. I used to play the piano.

For past habits or past possession of hobbies, use 'did' as the auxiliary in short answers: 'Yes, I did.' 'I used to play the piano' correctly expresses a past habitual action. The original had fragmented and incorrect words. Suggestion: use 'used to' for past habitual activities and avoid unrelated words.

× Yes, I had. I baked some bread and I still baked bread because it helps me, helps to me recharge.

✓ Yes, I did. I used to bake bread and I still bake bread because it helps me recharge.

Short answer for past hobby should be 'Yes, I did.' The phrase 'I baked some bread and I still baked bread' mixes past and present incorrectly; for a hobby continued to present, use 'used to' for past and 'still bake' for present. Also 'helps to me recharge' is ungrammatical: correct is 'helps me recharge.' Suggestion: use 'used to' for past habits and 'helps me recharge' for correct verb-object order.

× Actually my family have not same hobbies as me my family. Really don't like. Bay.

✓ Actually my family do not have the same hobbies as me. They really don't like baking.

'My family' is a collective noun that in standard American English takes singular verb 'does not', but in many varieties 'family' as a group uses plural 'do not' when referring to individuals—either 'does not' or 'do not' must be used, while the original used 'have not same hobbies' which is incorrect word order and missing articles. Also 'Really don't like. Bay.' is fragmented and unclear; likely intended 'They really don't like baking.' Suggestion: use 'do not have the same hobbies as me' or 'does not have the same hobby as me' and express dislikes with a verb and object: 'They really don't like baking.'