爱好— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct common errors: say "play cricket", "I'm good at playing cricket", and "I love singing". Avoid repetition and keep to 3–4 sentences.

範例: I have several hobbies, but the main ones are playing cricket and singing. I'm good at cricket and usually play with my friends every weekend, which keeps me fit and helps my teamwork skills. I also enjoy singing for pleasure, although I'm not trained, and it relaxes me after a busy day.

建議: Provide a clear topic sentence and explain briefly with specific details. Use correct expressions: "I used to enjoy" or "my hobby was". Avoid vague phrases and fix grammar and redundancy. Use a linking word to connect ideas.

範例: Yes, as a child my main hobby was pretending to be a wrestler and play-fighting with my siblings. I was a big fan of WWE, so I would practice simple wrestling moves on my brothers, which was fun but sometimes caused scrapes.

建議: Answer directly and finish the sentence. Use clear reasons with linking words like "because" and give a specific example of how life changed. Avoid incomplete sentences and grammatical errors.

範例: No, I don't still have any childhood hobbies because as I grew older my priorities changed. For example, I used to build model cars as a child, but now I spend most free time on study and part-time work, so I rarely have time for that hobby.

建議: Give a clear topic sentence and add a specific contrast with a linking word such as "for example" or "however". Correct grammar: "different interests", "I'm never good at drawing", "I would give the drawing to my sister". Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

範例: No, my hobbies are different from my family's. For example, my sister loves drawing and is very talented, so at school I would often give her any drawing assignments because I'm not good at art.

× I love to play cricketer with my friends.

✓ I love to play cricket with my friends.

The phrase 'play cricketer' is incorrect because 'cricketer' is a noun meaning a person who plays cricket. The correct collocation is 'play cricket' using the verb 'play' + noun for the sport. Use 'play cricket' to describe playing the sport.

× I'm really good in playing cricket and we used to play like every weekend and also I am I am good.

✓ I'm really good at playing cricket, and we used to play almost every weekend.

The correct preposition with 'good' is 'good at', not 'good in'. 'Used to' indicates a past habitual action; pair it with the base verb: 'used to play'. Remove filler 'like' or replace with 'almost' for frequency. Eliminate repeated 'I am I am' and the redundant 'and also I am good.'

× I am love to singing but I am not a good in singing but still I like sing songs for myself.

✓ I love singing, but I am not good at it; still, I like to sing songs to myself.

Use 'love singing' (verb + -ing) or 'love to sing'. Do not say 'I am love'. 'Not a good in singing' is incorrect; use 'not good at it'. Use 'sing songs' with the base verb 'sing' or 'to sing', and 'to myself' is the correct prepositional phrase.

× Yes, when I was a child I used to hobby, hobby of fighting with my siblings because I was a fan of wrestling.

✓ Yes, when I was a child I used to fight with my siblings because I was a fan of wrestling.

'Used to hobby' is not grammatical; 'hobby' is a noun. Use the verb phrase 'used to fight' to express a habitual action in the past. Remove the repeated word 'hobby' and restructure to 'used to fight with my siblings'.

× So I used to try new different moves of WWE on my brothers so.

✓ So I used to try different new WWE moves on my brothers.

Word order for adjectives: use 'different' or 'new' before the noun; 'new different moves' is redundant—prefer 'different WWE moves' or 'new WWE moves'. Place 'WWE' as a modifier before 'moves'. Remove trailing 'so'.

× No, I don't have any hobby currently that I was had in my childhood because when we grew up we sometime forgot about our childhood because of the faster life currently we have.

✓ No, I don't have any hobby now that I had in my childhood because when we grew up we sometimes forgot about our childhood due to the faster pace of life we have now.

Use 'had' (simple past) to refer to childhood hobbies: 'that I had in my childhood'. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' (adverb). 'Because of the faster life currently we have' is awkward; use 'due to the faster pace of life we have now'. Keep present 'don't have' for current state.

× So currently I.

✓ So currently I don't have any of those hobbies.

The sentence fragment 'So currently I.' lacks a verb and is incomplete. Complete the thought by adding the appropriate verb phrase: 'I don't have any of those hobbies' to match previous context.

× No, everyone has the different interest.

✓ No, everyone has different interests.

'The different interest' is incorrect: 'different' should modify a plural noun here because 'everyone' implies multiple people with multiple interests: 'different interests'. Omit the definite article 'the'.

× For example my sister used to love drawing but I I never good at drawing.

✓ For example, my sister used to love drawing, but I was never good at drawing.

Add comma after introductory phrase. Use 'used to love drawing' is fine; for the speaker's skill in the past use 'was never good at drawing' (past tense). Remove repeated 'I'.

× So in my school time whenever I got any picture to draw I give it to my sister.

✓ So in my school days, whenever I got any picture to draw, I gave it to my sister.

Use 'school days' or 'at school' for the time expression. 'Whenever I got' indicates past; the main clause should also be past: 'I gave it'. Maintain past tense consistency.

× So we usually have different interests.

✓ So we usually have different interests.

This sentence is grammatically correct. It uses present simple to describe a general truth; no change needed.