阅读— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Вы даёте понятный ответ и хорошую информацию о предпочтениях, но стоит убрать междометия («uh»), сделать предложение более сжатым и естественным, использовать связку для перечисления и одно-два конкретных примера. Также избегайте неточной фразы «romance from for example Dostoevsky» — лучше назвать жанр и автора корректно.

範例: Yes, I enjoy reading, especially popular science books. I also love classic novels, for example works by Dostoevsky and other famous Russian authors.

建議: Ответ ясный и непосредственно отвечает на вопрос, но формулировки надо сделать более естественными: убрать артикль перед «paper», исправить словосочетания («sense the pages wrapping it») и добавить одно связующее слово для плавности. Можно также привести краткую причину или пример.

範例: I prefer reading on paper rather than on a screen because I enjoy the feel and smell of the pages, especially when I open a new book.

建議: Ответ содержит полезную противопоставляющую идею, но структура и язык слабые: исправьте вопрос-форму в начале, уберите повторяющиеся «uh» и тавтологию («concentrate on it and focus on it»). Добавьте связующее слово для контраста и приведите конкретный пример, что именно вы делаете при внимательном чтении (например, делаете заметки).

範例: I need to read carefully when studying scientific texts or exam materials because I have to understand details and sometimes take notes. In contrast, I read novels or poetry more casually, mainly for pleasure.

× Yes, I like reading very much, especially scientific popular literature. And also I love novels and, uh, romance from for example Dostoevsky and uh, other famous Russian writers.

✓ Yes, I like reading very much, especially popular science literature. I also love novels and, for example, romances by Dostoevsky and other famous Russian writers.

The phrase 'scientific popular literature' is awkward; 'popular science literature' or 'popular science' is correct. 'Romance from for example Dostoevsky' uses incorrect preposition and order; English uses 'romances by Dostoevsky' or 'romances written by Dostoevsky'. Also use 'I also' instead of 'And also' for smoother style.

× I prefer to read in a paper rather than a screen because I like to sense the pages wrapping it and touching it, especially if it's a new book.

✓ I prefer to read on paper rather than on a screen because I like to feel the pages and touch them, especially if it's a new book.

Use 'on paper' and 'on a screen' rather than 'in a paper' or 'rather than a screen'. 'Sense the pages wrapping it and touching it' is incorrect; use 'feel the pages and touch them'. Article and preposition choices were wrong.

× Will I need to read something more attentively When I read, uh, scientific books or books for preparation for exams, I need to concentrate on it and uh, focus on it, while if it's uh, any other kind of literature like poems or novels, they don't need much attention.

✓ I need to read more attentively when I read scientific books or books for exam preparation; I have to concentrate and focus on them, while other kinds of literature, like poems or novels, do not require as much attention.

The original begins with 'Will I need' which incorrectly uses future/modal question form for a statement; here present simple is appropriate because the speaker is describing a habitual situation. Use 'books for exam preparation' instead of 'books for preparation for exams'. Replace 'concentrate on it and focus on it' with 'concentrate and focus on them' to match plural 'books'. Use 'do not require as much attention' for clarity.