阅读— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Исправьте грамматические ошибки и упростите фразы, чтобы звучать естественнее. Используйте связующее предложение, затем 1–2 конкретных детали. Например, исправьте ‘absolutely yes’ на ‘Yes, I do’, ‘immerse myself with reading’ на ‘immerse myself in’, и добавьте артикль и согласование: ‘a useful skill which helps people’. Максимальная длина ответа — 3–4 предложения. Также замените обобщения конкретными примерами: какие книги вы читаете и почему.

範例: Yes, I do. I enjoy reading in my spare time, especially historical novels about European history. Reading helps me relax and learn new facts, for example, I recently read a biography that improved my understanding of World War II.

建議: Сократите и исправьте лексику: вместо ‘on a paper’ — ‘on paper’; ‘face to face experience’ неуместно — скажите ‘tactile’ или ‘physical experience’. Уточните причину и приведите конкретный пример, используйте связующее слово (for example, because). Старайтесь не превышать 3 предложений.

範例: I prefer reading on paper because the physical feel of a book helps me concentrate. For example, when I study for exams I find it easier to remember facts from a printed textbook than from my phone.

建議: Упростите структуру и исправьте грамматику: используйте прямой ответ, затем объяснение с примером. Избегайте общих формулировок типа ‘might be better’. Напишите: ‘I need to read carefully when…’, объясните причину с логичным связующим словом (because, so) и приведите конкретную ситуация. Максимум 3–4 предложения.

範例: I need to read carefully when studying or reading technical material because missing a sentence can change the meaning. For example, when I read scientific articles I slow down and take notes, but I skim light fiction for enjoyment.

× I try to immerse myself with reading different types of historical novels and broaden my horizon.

✓ I try to immerse myself in reading different types of historical novels and broaden my horizons.

Incorrect preposition and noun form: 'immerse oneself in' is the correct collocation, not 'with'. Also 'horizon' should be plural 'horizons' in this context. Suggestion: use 'immerse myself in' and pluralize 'horizons' when referring to expanding one’s perspectives.

× Reading is really useful skill which help people.

✓ Reading is a really useful skill which helps people.

Missing article and subject-verb agreement: 'skill' needs the indefinite article 'a'; the relative clause subject 'skill' is singular so the verb must be 'helps'. Suggestion: include the article and use third person singular verb form.

× I prefer reading on a paper rather than on a screen since the face to face experience is more cosier and convenient when you read the book in person.

✓ I prefer reading on paper rather than on a screen since the face-to-face experience is cosier and more convenient when you read a book in person.

Articles and phrasing: 'on paper' is the normal expression (no article). 'Face-to-face' needs hyphens as a compound adjective. 'Cosier' can be used but 'more cosier' is incorrect (double comparative); use 'cosier' and place 'more convenient' after. Also 'the book' implies a specific book; use 'a book' for general statements. Suggestion: remove unnecessary articles, hyphenate compound adjectives, avoid double comparatives, and use appropriate article for general nouns.

× This helps you to memorize and find out the details of the book.

✓ This helps you memorize and find the details of a book.

Unnecessary 'to' after 'helps' and awkward 'find out the details' phrasing. Also use 'a book' for a general statement. Suggestion: use 'helps you memorize' and 'find the details' for natural English.

× It might be better if a person is carefully concentrated on what they're reading, since when you pass any sentences or phrases in the text, you may not understand the continuation.

✓ It is better if a person concentrates carefully on what they are reading, because if you skip sentences or phrases in the text, you may not understand what comes next.

Tense and verb form issues: use simple present 'concentrates' for general statements instead of 'is carefully concentrated'. Use 'skip' rather than 'pass' for skipping text. 'Continuation' is awkward; use 'what comes next'. Suggestion: use active simple present and more natural verbs for clarity.

× For example, me personally, read all the details carefully and try to understand the whole.

✓ For example, I personally read all the details carefully and try to understand the whole text.

Incorrect pronoun order and missing subject-verb agreement: start with subject 'I' not 'me personally'. Add the object 'text' after 'whole' for clarity. Suggestion: use 'I personally' and include the noun 'text' to complete the idea.