阅读— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetitions and filler words, and give one or two specific supporting details. Use linking words (for example, because, so) to make the answer coherent.

範例: Yes — I enjoy reading, especially at the library because it’s quiet and has many books. For example, I often spend an hour there researching topics for my studies and discovering new authors, which helps me learn a lot.

建議: Fix pronunciation and grammar mistakes, remove fillers, and give a specific reason. Use one linking phrase to connect idea and an example to support your preference.

範例: I definitely prefer reading on paper because it’s easier on my eyes and I enjoy the tactile feeling. For instance, when I study, I can quickly annotate and flip through pages, which helps me remember information better.

建議: Structure the answer clearly: state the situations for careful reading and for casual reading. Correct grammar and use linking words (but, however, while) and provide specific examples of each type.

範例: I read carefully when the material is technical or related to my major, such as architecture textbooks because I need to understand details. However, I read casually when I read comics or light fiction, since I read them mainly for fun.

建議: Make the contrast clear with linking words and correct grammar. Give one clear reason for preferring scanning and one example of when you switch to detailed reading. Keep it to two or three sentences.

範例: I prefer scanning because it saves time and helps me find relevant information quickly. However, if I come across an important concept or a complex section, I switch to detailed reading to fully understand it.

× I especially I like to go to the library to read the books.

✓ I especially like to go to the library to read books.

This sentence has a redundancy ('I especially I') and an article issue with 'the books'. Remove the repeated subject and use the plural noun without 'the' because it refers to books in general. Suggestion: delete the extra 'I' and write 'read books'. Id: combines types 26 and 22

× So, uh, it's really meaningful time for me to get many information from the books.

✓ So, uh, it's really a meaningful way for me to get a lot of information from books.

'Meaningful time' is unnatural; 'a meaningful way' or 'a meaningful experience' fits better. 'Information' is uncountable so use 'a lot of information' not 'many information'. Also drop 'the' before 'books' when speaking generally. Suggestion: use 'a meaningful way' and 'a lot of information'. Id:22

× I definitely prefer to lead in uh, paper because it is really easier to read the books and also I like to umm.

✓ I definitely prefer to read on paper because it is much easier to read books, and I also like the feel of paper.

The verb should be 'read' not 'lead'. Use the preposition 'on paper' not 'in paper'. 'It is really easier' is less natural than 'much easier' or 'easier'. Drop 'the' before 'books' when general. The trailing 'I like to umm' is incomplete; clarify as 'I also like the feel of paper.' Suggestions: correct verb spelling, use proper preposition, remove unnecessary articles, complete the clause. Id:11

× Not uh, when I read the specific topics books like architecture or some my major related to my measure, I read books really carefully, but what I read is some comics I don't carefree.

✓ Not usually. When I read books on specific topics, like architecture or subjects related to my major, I read very carefully, but when I read comics I don't care much.

Sentence has multiple errors: 'Not uh' is unclear — use 'Not usually.' 'specific topics books' should be 'books on specific topics'. 'some my major related to my measure' is incorrect word order and word choice; use 'subjects related to my major'. 'I read books really carefully' is fine but 'really'->'very'. The final clause 'I don't carefree' is ungrammatical; use 'I don't care much' or 'I don't read them carefully.' Suggestions: reorganize sentence, correct word order, use correct verb phrase 'don't care'. Id:26

× I prefer scanning because I want to, uh, save time for for leading. But when I find some important things I read detailed.

✓ I prefer scanning because I want to save time for reading. But when I find something important I read in detail.

'Leading' is a misspelling of 'reading'. Remove duplicate 'for'. 'Some important things' is better as 'something important' or 'important information'. 'I read detailed' should be 'I read in detail' (adverbial phrase). Suggestions: correct spelling, remove duplicates, use 'in detail' to modify the verb. Id:8