阅读— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and avoid repetition; use a clear topic sentence then two specific supporting points. Correct grammar (e.g., "helps me to understand" -> "helps me understand") and use consistent verb forms ("I have studied" not "I've been studied"). Limit to 3–4 sentences and add a linking word to connect ideas.

範例: Yes, I enjoy reading, especially novels and non-fiction about anthropology. For example, novels move me emotionally, while anthropology books help me understand historical ways of life. Moreover, I studied shamanism at university, so I find those topics particularly fascinating.

建議: Start directly (avoid answering 'Yes' to a preference question) and correct singular/plural and article use ("research papers"). Use one linking phrase to explain reasons and give a specific short example. Keep to 2–3 sentences.

範例: I prefer reading printed books because they make it easier to follow long arguments and see the logical structure. For example, when I read research papers on anthropology in print, the physical thickness helps me remember where key points are located.

建議: Good structure and clear contrast. Improve by using a linking word (e.g., "whereas") and tighten phrasing ("scan the news" -> "scan news articles"). Avoid redundancy like "precisely" after "main points." Keep to two sentences and give one specific example of research reading.

範例: I read carefully when doing research because I need exact quotations for my papers, whereas I usually scan news articles to capture only the main points. For instance, when writing about shamanism I read sources closely to extract accurate dates and quotes.

建議: Good answer with clear reason and example. Improve grammar and fluency: use articles and natural phrasing ("depends on the material and time available"). Use linking words ("first... then...") and avoid awkward phrasing like "start article scanning" and "1st" — say "first paragraphs." Keep to 2–3 sentences.

範例: It depends on the material and time available, but I usually prefer scanning to get an overview first. For example, I first read headlines and the first paragraph, then I read in detail only the sections that interest me.

× Yes, I like reading books because I enjoy being alone and I'm usually moved by literature such as novels and it helps me helps me to understand historical lives and I also enjoy non fictions about anthropology because I've been studied shamanism.

✓ Yes, I like reading books because I enjoy being alone and I'm usually moved by literature such as novels, and it helps me understand historical lives. I also enjoy non-fiction books about anthropology because I have studied shamanism.

The original contains run-on structure and repetition ('helps me helps me'), incorrect noun form ('non fictions') and wrong verb tense/auxiliary ('I've been studied'). Break into two sentences to improve clarity, remove duplicated words, use the correct noun form 'non-fiction books', and use present perfect active 'I have studied' rather than passive 'I've been studied'.

× Yes, I would rather read printed books because it is much easier to follow long arguments and find logical structures, especially in research paper.

✓ Yes, I would rather read printed books because it is much easier to follow long arguments and find logical structures, especially in research papers.

The phrase 'research paper' should be plural here because the speaker refers to research papers in general; using the definite article is unnecessary. Use plural 'research papers' to match the general meaning and maintain subject-verb agreement with 'structures'.

× Umm, physical thickness helps me to remember the structure and the way I've been working on.

✓ Umm, the physical thickness helps me remember the structure and the way I have been working.

Add the definite article 'the' before 'physical thickness' for specificity, remove unnecessary 'to' after 'helps' (helps + base verb), and change word order for naturalness. Keep present perfect continuous 'I have been working' to indicate ongoing relevance.

× I read attentively when I do research because I have to take accurate quotations and I don't really read as closely when I scan the news since I only want the main points precisely.

✓ I read attentively when I do research because I have to take accurate quotations, and I don't read as closely when I scan the news since I only want the main points.

The adverb 'precisely' is redundant after 'main points' and sounds awkward; removing it makes the sentence clearer. Also add a comma and conjunction for proper sentence structure and flow.

× My reading depends on the purpose of materials.

✓ My reading depends on the purpose of the material.

'Materials' is plural while 'the purpose' is singular; better to use 'the material' or 'the materials'' purpose. Using 'the material' makes the sentence sound natural when referring to the content being read. Alternatively, 'the purpose of the materials' could be used if keeping plural, but adjusting to singular is more natural here.

× It really depends on material and time available, but I usually prefer scanning because I would like to get an overview of the structure and then I read only the parts I need.

✓ It really depends on the material and the time available, but I usually prefer scanning because I would like to get an overview of the structure, and then I read only the parts I need.

Add definite articles 'the' before 'material' and 'time' for specificity. Insert a comma and conjunction to join clauses properly. This fixes pronoun/ determiners usage and improves sentence flow.

× For example, I start article scanning headlines and 1st paragraphs and then go on details that I am interested.

✓ For example, I start by scanning article headlines and the first paragraphs, and then I go on to the details that I am interested in.

The original misses prepositions and articles: use 'start by scanning', 'article headlines', 'the first paragraphs', and 'go on to the details'. Also replace numeric '1st' with 'first' and add the preposition 'in' at the end for correct idiomatic expression.