阅读— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cấu trúc câu và ngữ pháp cần rõ ràng hơn; tránh lỗi từ loại số ít/ số nhiều và diễn đạt không tự nhiên. Nên trả lời trực tiếp rồi bổ sung 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể (thể loại yêu thích, tần suất). Hạn chế câu quá dài và sửa các lỗi như “novel” cần số nhiều ở một số ngữ cảnh, “flip myself down” không tự nhiên — dùng “lie down” hoặc “curl up”.

範例: Yes, I do. I'm a big fan of reading, especially fiction novels. When I have free time, I usually pick a book and lie down on my bed to read for an hour or two, because it helps me relax.

建議: Nội dung lộn xộn và nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp; cần câu chủ đề rõ ràng và liên kết lý lẽ với từ nối. Tránh câu chưa hoàn chỉnh như “reading on the screen is.” Hãy so sánh rõ ưu và nhược điểm của cả hai lựa chọn, dùng danh từ số nhiều/động từ phù hợp và sửa “informations” thành “information”.

範例: I'm torn between the two. I prefer paper for long novels because the pages are easier on my eyes, but I also use screens for articles and study materials since they're more convenient and searchable.

建議: Cần trả lời trực tiếp; loại bỏ cụm từ vô nghĩa như “Spilled beans.” Sử dụng cấu trúc rõ ràng để phân biệt lúc nào đọc kỹ (ví dụ: học, làm việc) và lúc nào đọc lướt (ví dụ: giải trí). Chú ý ngữ pháp: “could brings” → “could bring”; “in my mood” → “in the mood”.

範例: I read carefully when I'm studying or preparing for exams, because I need to understand every detail. But when I'm relaxing, I usually skim articles or read light fiction just for entertainment.

建議: Ý tưởng tốt nhưng ngữ pháp và phát triển câu cần cải thiện; sửa các lỗi như “informations” → “information”, thì động từ “gave” → “gives” hoặc “has given”. Nên mở rộng bằng một ví dụ ngắn giải thích tại sao detailed reading giúp mở rộng vốn từ và cách bạn áp dụng từ vựng đó.

範例: I prefer detailed reading because it provides specific information and helps me learn new vocabulary. For example, reading scientific articles has introduced me to technical terms that I later use in my essays.

× I am a big fan of reading, especially novel.

✓ I am a big fan of reading, especially novels.

Incorrect or missing article and noun number: 'novel' should be plural 'novels' because the speaker refers generally to novels in general; alternatively 'a novel' could work if referring to a single book. Use plural to match 'especially' indicating a category. Suggestion: say 'especially novels' or 'especially a novel' depending on intended meaning.

× If I have a leisure time, I would choose a random novel, flip myself down on the bed, immerse myself in that novel.

✓ If I have leisure time, I choose a random novel, lie down on the bed, and immerse myself in it.

Tense and word choice issues: conditional 'If I have' should be followed by present simple result 'I choose' for real present conditions; 'a leisure time' is uncountable so use 'leisure time'; 'flip myself down' is incorrect collocation — use 'lie down' or 'flop down'; use 'and' to connect verbs; avoid repeating 'that novel' by using 'it'. Suggestion: use present simple for habitual actions and correct collocations.

× If I am in my mood or is enabled, I will read the reading part of a text.

✓ If I am in the mood or feeling motivated, I will read the reading section of a text.

Preposition and phrase errors: 'in my mood' is unidiomatic — say 'in the mood' and 'is enabled' is incorrect; use 'feeling motivated' or 'motivated'. Also 'reading part' is better as 'reading section'. Suggestion: use idiomatic expressions 'in the mood' and 'feeling motivated' and correct noun phrasing.

× But reading on the screen is.

✓ But reading on a screen is convenient.

Incomplete sentence: 'But reading on the screen is.' is a sentence fragment lacking a complement. Add an adjective or clause to complete it, e.g. 'is convenient.' Suggestion: always include the adjective or phrase that completes 'is'.

× On the other hand, it's convenient and have more specifics informations for me to read.

✓ On the other hand, it's convenient and has more specific information for me to read.

Subject-verb agreement and word form errors: 'it's' (it is) requires singular verb 'has' not 'have'; 'specifics informations' is incorrect — use uncountable 'information' and adjective 'specific' not 'specifics'. Suggestion: use 'has more specific information'.

× Spilled beans.

✓ I spilled the beans.

Fragment and incorrect noun phrase: 'Spilled beans.' is a fragment and unclear. Likely intended to say 'I spilled the beans' (idiom) or 'spilled beans' needs subject and context. Suggestion: use full sentence with subject and correct article if literal.

× I prefer reading when I am alone or when I am in my mood.

✓ I prefer reading when I am alone or when I am in the mood.

Idiom and article use: 'in my mood' is unidiomatic; use 'in the mood'. Tense is fine. Suggestion: use 'in the mood' for habitual preference.

× I could read more than five reading practice tests, but if I am not in my mood, I will turn away to find something could brings entertainment for me.

✓ I can read more than five practice tests, but if I am not in the mood, I will turn away to find something that could bring me entertainment.

Modal and agreement issues: 'could' vs 'can' — for ability use 'can' for present habitual; 'reading practice tests' is redundant, use 'practice tests'; 'in my mood' -> 'in the mood'; relative clause 'something could brings' is ungrammatical: modal 'could' followed by base verb 'bring' (not 'brings'); place object 'me' after verb. Suggestion: use 'can' for present ability and correct relative clause structure.

× Of course, I prefer detailed reading because it has so many specific informations and it gave me enormous vocabulary for me to practice it to the reality world.

✓ Of course, I prefer detailed reading because it has so much specific information and it has given me a large vocabulary to practice in the real world.

Article, count/uncount and tense errors: 'informations' is uncountable 'information'; use 'so much' with uncountable nouns; 'it gave me' should be present perfect 'it has given me' to link past effect to present; 'enormous vocabulary' is okay but 'a large vocabulary' is more natural; 'practice it to the reality world' is incorrect — use 'practice in the real world'. Suggestion: use correct uncountable noun phrases and appropriate tense (present perfect) for present relevance.