阅读— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Nên trả lời trực tiếp, rút ngắn câu, tránh tiếng ấp úng và dùng từ chính xác. Ví dụ: bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng (Yes/No + reason), sau đó cho 1-2 chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ loại sách, thời gian). Tránh lặp từ và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp như “enjoy reading” thay vì “enjoying living”.

範例: I don't read much now because I'm very busy with work and studies. Instead, I usually watch book reviews or summaries online to save time, especially for long novels or non-fiction.

建議: Trả lời trực tiếp và ngắn gọn, tránh lỗi từ vựng và ums. Dùng lý do cụ thể và một ví dụ. Sửa lỗi như 'refer to read' -> 'prefer reading', 'I'm really lying to' -> 'I really like'. Nên dùng 2-3 câu, có liên từ để mạch lạc.

範例: I prefer reading on paper because it is easier on my eyes and I enjoy the smell and feel of physical books. For example, when I read novels at home, I find paper books more relaxing than screens.

建議: Phải trả lời rõ ràng: nêu tình huống cần đọc kỹ và tình huống không cần. Tránh lỗi ngữ pháp ('reach' -> 'read'), dùng linking words như 'when' và 'but' để rõ ràng. Thêm ví dụ cụ thể (ví dụ đọc hợp đồng vs đọc tin tức).

範例: You should read carefully when the text contains important information, such as contracts, instructions or academic articles. But for general news or social media posts, scanning for main points is usually enough.

建議: Nên đưa câu chủ đề rõ ràng (I prefer X because...), giải thích ngắn gọn và cho ví dụ. Tránh lặp và sửa từ vựng ('cereal'-> 'both', 'little reading'-> 'detailed reading'). Dùng linking words 'however' hoặc 'but' để so sánh.

範例: I think both scanning and detailed reading are useful, but I prefer scanning when I need information quickly. For example, when researching for an essay I first scan articles for relevant sections, then read those parts in detail.

× I'm not really enjoying living, umm, because, uh, I don't have the time to read all of the whole book and uh, I just want to, uh, umm, listen to the review of the, the book to, uh, read it.

✓ I don't really enjoy reading because I don't have time to read whole books; I prefer to listen to book reviews instead.

The student used present continuous 'I'm not really enjoying' incorrectly for a habitual preference; English uses the simple present for habits and general statements. Use 'I don't really enjoy reading'. Also streamline expressions and remove redundant words (e.g., 'all of the whole book'). Suggestion: use simple present for likes/dislikes and avoid fillers. (Grammar problem type ID: 6)

× For me, I refer to read on a paper because umm, I'm really lying to uh, I don't really like to umm, read in the screen because it can umm, uh, cause my eye and umm, I really love the umm, book smell smell.

✓ For me, I prefer reading on paper because I don't really like reading on a screen; it can strain my eyes, and I love the smell of books.

Several errors: 'refer to read' should be 'prefer reading' (verb + -ing). 'On a paper' should be 'on paper' (preposition and article). 'Lying to' is incorrect; likely meant 'lying' is wrong—use 'I don't really like'. 'Read in the screen' should be 'reading on a screen' (preposition and gerund). 'Cause my eye' should be 'strain my eyes' (idiomatic collocation and plural). 'Book smell smell' should be 'the smell of books'. Suggestion: use 'prefer' + gerund, 'on paper/on a screen' and correct collocations like 'strain my eyes'. (Grammar problem type ID: 11)

× From my perspective, I think, uh, you need to reach a carefully in the, uh, development and the overview of, uh, a book because it can you, you can easily to, umm, easily to, uh, know.

✓ From my perspective, you need to read carefully when studying the development and the overview of a book because then you can easily understand it.

Multiple structural errors: 'reach a carefully' is nonsensical—should be 'read carefully' (verb + adverb). 'In the development and the overview of a book' is awkward; use 'when studying the development and overview of a book'. 'It can you, you can easily to know' has wrong word order and unnecessary 'to'; correct to 'you can easily understand it'. Suggestion: use 'read carefully', place adverbs after verb, and use clear subject-verb-object order. (Grammar problem type ID: 26)

× Uh, from my perspective, I support that, uh, of, uh, both of, uh, cereal scanning and little reading is so is, uh, as same as important as same important as, but I think I really, I'm keen on, uh, scanning because it's gonna help me easy to.

✓ From my perspective, I believe both scanning and detailed reading are equally important, but I prefer scanning because it helps me read more quickly.

Errors include awkward conjunctions and redundancies: 'support that of both of' is incorrect—use 'believe both X and Y are equally important'. 'Cereal scanning and little reading' likely meant 'general scanning and detailed reading' or 'scanning and detailed reading'; corrected to 'scanning and detailed reading'. 'As same as important as' should be 'equally important'. 'It's gonna help me easy to' is grammatically wrong and informal; use 'it helps me read more quickly' or 'it helps me understand faster'. Suggestion: use 'both ... and ... are equally important' and avoid informal 'gonna'; use clear verbs and adverbs. (Grammar problem type ID: 16)