阅读— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be clearer and more concise. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct small grammar mistakes (e.g. "after a hectic day" not "of my"). Keep answers to no more than five sentences.

範例: Yes, I enjoy reading. After a hectic day I like to read because it helps me relax and learn about different places and cultures. For example, I often read travel essays at night which help me unwind and improve my general knowledge.

建議: State your preference in one clear sentence and then give two specific reasons with linking words (for example, 'because' and 'also'). Fix grammar (e.g. 'gives me a feeling' and 'paper-based books and journals'). Avoid vague phrases like 'emotions of physical things'.

範例: I prefer reading on paper because I can concentrate better and there are fewer distractions than on a screen. Also, paper books give me a pleasing tactile feeling, and I find it easier to remember what I read in a physical book.

建議: Answer the two parts directly: say when careful reading is needed and when a quick read is enough. Use contrasting linking words like 'when' and 'but' or 'however'. Be specific with examples and correct grammar (e.g. 'things which are written' or 'written material').

範例: I need to read carefully when the text contains important information, such as work emails or instructions, because mistakes could cause problems. However, I don’t read carefully when I’m skimming news headlines or social media posts for a general idea.

建議: Give a short clear topic sentence stating your preference, then explain with a specific reason and an example. Avoid fillers like 'uh' and clarify the grammar (e.g. 'because one word can change the meaning of a passage').

範例: I prefer detailed reading because one word can change the meaning of an entire passage, so careful reading helps me avoid misunderstandings. For example, when I study articles for university, I read them slowly and take notes to ensure I grasp the main points.

× Yes I do, I love reading after a hectic day of my.

✓ Yes I do, I love reading after a hectic day.

The phrase 'a hectic day of my' uses an incorrect preposition/possessive structure. The correct phrase is 'a hectic day' or 'a hectic day at work'. Remove 'of my' or replace with appropriate noun. Suggestion: say 'a hectic day' or 'a hectic day at work' to be clear.

× Also it's a great source of knowledge which helps me to move away and about the world and other places.

✓ Also it's a great source of knowledge which helps me learn about the world and other places.

The phrase 'move away and about the world' mixes incorrect verbs and prepositions. Use 'learn about the world' to express gaining knowledge. Keep verb 'helps' + base verb 'learn' (helps me learn about...). This is clearer and grammatically correct.

× I enjoy reading at night every day.

✓ I enjoy reading every night.

'At night every day' is redundant and awkward. 'Every night' correctly expresses the habitual action in present tense. Ensure present simple for routines: 'I enjoy reading every night.'

× For me reading on paper is more convenient than screen because I can concentrate properly on paper based books and journal.

✓ For me, reading on paper is more convenient than reading on a screen because I can concentrate properly on paper-based books and journals.

Missing preposition 'on' before 'a screen' and missing hyphen in 'paper-based'. 'Journal' should be plural 'journals' to match general meaning. Also add comma after introductory phrase. Use parallel structure 'reading on paper' vs 'reading on a screen'.

× Also it's give me a emotions of physical things and of.

✓ Also it gives me the feeling of having physical objects.

'It's' (it is) requires third-person singular verb 'gives' not 'give'. 'A emotions' is wrong: use singular 'feeling' or plural 'emotions' with correct article. The fragment 'and of' is incomplete and should be removed. Suggest: 'it gives me the feeling of having physical objects.'

× In my opinion, it's always necessary to read carefully to understand the things which written.

✓ In my opinion, it's always necessary to read carefully to understand the things which are written.

The relative clause 'which written' is missing the auxiliary 'are' to form the passive present simple. Use 'which are written' or 'that are written' to be grammatically correct.

× Also we have to focus carefully on reading which help me to understand things.

✓ Also we have to focus carefully when reading, which helps me to understand things.

Mismatch: subject 'we' and singular 'help me' is inconsistent. Use 'which helps me' because the clause refers to the act of focusing/reading (singular idea). Also improve preposition: 'focus when reading' sounds natural. Maintain tense agreement.

× As I mentioned earlier, uh, I prefer detailed reading because I just one word can change whole passage to understand properly.

✓ As I mentioned earlier, I prefer detailed reading because even one word can change the whole passage and affect understanding.

The original sentence has poor structure: extraneous filler 'uh' and misplaced words 'I just one word can change'. Correct structure uses 'even one word can change the whole passage' and links to 'affect understanding'. This keeps present simple and logical flow.

× I always prefer detailed reading.

✓ I always prefer detailed reading.

This sentence is grammatical. It uses present simple correctly to state a habitual preference. No change needed.