阅读— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and organize your response: start with a clear topic sentence, give one or two specific supporting details, and avoid unfinished fragments. Use linking words (for example, 'because' or 'so') and correct tense/word forms.

範例: Yes, I enjoy reading. It helps me learn new facts and gives me ideas to improve my writing, especially for exams, so I read regularly to build my vocabulary and knowledge.

建議: Clarify your reasons with specific examples and correct grammar. Use linking words to connect points and finish sentences. Avoid hesitation sounds and incomplete endings.

範例: I prefer reading on a screen because I can easily look up unfamiliar words and highlight important points. For instance, when I read online articles I can use a dictionary extension to translate words instantly, which saves time.

建議: Give a clear contrast between situations requiring careful reading and casual reading. Use complete sentences and specific examples. Replace vague phrases with precise reasons.

範例: I need to read carefully when studying for exams because I must understand key facts and remember examples. In contrast, I read less carefully when I'm relaxing, such as listening to music while skimming news headlines.

建議: State your preference clearly, then give specific reasons and an example to support it. Reduce fillers and repeat words; use linking words like 'because' and 'for example.'

範例: I prefer detailed reading because it helps me understand ideas and learn facts thoroughly. For example, when I study a textbook in detail I can remember concepts better and apply them in essays.

× Yes, I definitely prefer reading because reading is an activity that I usually do.

✓ Yes, I definitely prefer reading because it is an activity I usually do.

The original repeats 'reading' and uses an awkward relative clause. Use 'it' to refer back to 'reading' and simplify to present simple 'is' for habitual action. Suggestion: replace redundant noun with pronoun and use concise clause structure.

× I would say it's always helped me to improve my knowledge.

✓ I would say it has always helped me improve my knowledge.

The original mixes conditional 'would' with 'it's' meaning 'it has' and places 'always' incorrectly. Use present perfect 'has helped' to show an action continuing to present. Remove 'to' before 'improve' for natural verb complement. Suggestion: use 'it has always helped me improve...'

× And yes I always get some idea to improve my writing in the writing test as well.

✓ And yes, I always get ideas to improve my writing for the writing test as well.

Use plural 'ideas' (quantifier issue) and preposition 'for' instead of 'in' when referring to purpose. Also add necessary commas. Suggestion: pluralize countable noun and choose correct preposition.

× Also reading I would.

✓ Also, I would read.

Original is fragmentary and has incorrect word order. Put subject before verb and include object or complete idea. Suggestion: form a complete clause: 'Also, I would read.'

× Well, I prefer reading on screen rather than a paper because I'm reading on screen would allow me, uh, to know more idea.

✓ Well, I prefer reading on a screen rather than on paper because reading on a screen allows me to get more ideas.

Use article 'a' with 'screen' and omit article before uncountable 'paper' (or say 'on paper'). Remove incorrect modal 'would' and use present simple 'allows' for general preference. Replace 'know more idea' with 'get more ideas.' Suggestion: correct article usage and verb tense; use plural 'ideas.'

× I mean, I get a more important point rather than the paper.

✓ I mean, I get more important points than from paper.

Verb 'get' is fine, but comparative phrasing is incorrect. Use 'more important points' (plural) and 'than from paper' or 'than when I read on paper.' Suggestion: use correct comparative structure and pluralize.

× Additionally, it would make me feel more convenient, umm, to translate any word that I.

✓ Additionally, it makes it more convenient for me to translate any word that I don't know.

Original uses 'feel more convenient' (incorrect adjective use) and ends abruptly. Use 'it makes it more convenient for me' and complete the clause with 'that I don't know.' Change 'would' to present 'makes' for general truth. Suggestion: use 'convenient' as predicate adjective with 'make' construction and finish the clause.

× Well, I would say I need to read carefully when I want to focus on the exam.

✓ Well, I would say I need to read carefully when I want to focus on the exam.

This sentence is correct in tense and structure; no change needed. Explanation: Present simple 'need' and 'want' correctly express habitual or general situations. (No correction required.)

× I mean, reading carefully would allow me to remember the main idea, the information and even the idea to use in the exam.

✓ I mean, reading carefully allows me to remember the main ideas, the information, and even ideas I can use in the exam.

Replace conditional 'would' with present simple 'allows' for general truth. Pluralize 'main ideas' and 'ideas' for natural expression, and use 'I can use' to clarify purpose. Suggestion: use present simple for habitual/general statements and plural nouns where appropriate.

× But when I'm not just waiting for any music.

✓ But when I'm not, I might just listen to music.

Original is a fragment without clear meaning. Complete the thought: contrast careful reading with casual situations like listening to music. Suggestion: provide a full clause conveying the intended contrast.

× I prefer detail reading because umm, detail reading would provide umm, the different of umm, information uh, because uh, we would learn from it and get any idea from our reading.

✓ I prefer detailed reading because detailed reading provides different kinds of information; we can learn from it and get ideas from our reading.

Use adjective 'detailed' (not noun 'detail') to modify 'reading.' Replace 'would provide' with present simple 'provides' for general preference. 'The different of information' is incorrect — use 'different kinds of information.' 'Any idea' should be 'ideas.' Suggestion: use correct adjective forms, present simple for habitual statements, and proper noun phrases.

× So that's why umm, I prefer those type of reading rather than the scanning.

✓ So that's why I prefer those types of reading rather than scanning.

Use plural 'types' to match 'those' (singular/plural issue) and drop the definite article before 'scanning.' Also remove filler words. Suggestion: ensure noun number matches demonstrative determiner and use gerund without article.