阅读— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Говоря на экзамене, постарайтесь быть конкретнее и логичнее: начните с краткого тематического предложения, затем добавьте одно-два уточняющих предложения с подробностями. Избегайте заполнителей («uh») и повторов, используйте связанные слова (for example, because, so) для связности. Работайте над точной формулировкой эмоций и целей (например: “it helps me relax” вместо «it tells me to feel good»).

範例: I like reading because it improves my knowledge and helps me relax. For example, when I feel nervous I read to calm down, and I also enjoy taking a book to a park or café to unwind.

建議: Формулируйте ответ чётко и избегайте повторов. Начните с прямого утверждения (I prefer...), затем приведите 1–2 конкретные причины, используя связки (because, for example, therefore). Избегайте обращения к собеседнику («for you») — говорите о своём опыте. Уберите лишние «uh» и повторы слов.

範例: I prefer reading on a screen because it is more convenient. For example, I can carry a tablet and access many books while travelling, and I can adjust the font size for easier reading.

建議: Стройте предложение ясно: сначала ответьте прямо, затем поясните причину с конкретным примером. Уделяйте внимание грамматике и последовательности мыслей (кто/что, когда, почему). Избегайте неясных выражений («eastern», «main size») и старайтесь использовать подходящие слова (plot, spoilers, characters).

範例: I need to read carefully when I read detective novels because their plots contain clues and twists. I pay attention to details so I don't miss important information about the characters or events.

建議: Начните с прямого ответа, затем объясните причину и приведите пример, чтобы ответ был связным и конкретным. Избегайте тавтологии («detail every part of the every…») и ненужных вводных слов («yeah»). Улучшите формулировки глаголов (I enjoy analysing characters, not I enjoy to detail).

範例: I prefer detailed reading because I like analysing characters and scenes. For instance, when I read a novel I focus on motivations and how events develop to understand why things happen.

× Yes, I really enjoy everything because it helps me to improve my knowledge and also in nervous situations it tells me to feel good, to relax and uh, I really like to take some books to some good places and read them and just relax.

✓ Yes, I really enjoy reading because it helps me improve my knowledge, and in nervous situations it helps me feel good and relax. I also like to take books to pleasant places and read.

The original sentence uses unclear and incorrect pronouns and verbs: 'it tells me to feel good' is unnatural; 'everything' is too vague. Use 'reading' as the subject and 'it helps me' for clarity. Combine clauses and use parallel verbs ('helps me feel' not 'tells me to feel'). Replace 'some good places' with 'pleasant places'. Suggestions: identify the subject clearly, use 'helps' with the verb bare infinitive (feel), and avoid vague pronouns.

× Mostly, I prefer to read uh, with a screen on a screen, because reading on a screen uh, is much more comfortable and convenient for you because you can take your tablet or laptop with you uh, worldwide and you can read any books uh, with your screen.

✓ Mostly, I prefer reading on a screen because it is more comfortable and convenient: you can take a tablet or laptop with you and read books anywhere.

Problems: redundant phrases ('with a screen on a screen'), incorrect article use ('any books' should be 'books'), and awkward pronouns ('for you' unnecessary). Use gerund 'reading', remove redundancy, use indefinite article 'a tablet' and plural 'books' without 'any' in this context. Suggestions: simplify, avoid repeating nouns, and use correct articles.

× For eastern when I read some detective books or some like novels which have intrigues are really carefully to not keep any parts any new parts of like most of main characters and main size.

✓ For example, when I read detective novels that have complex plots, I read very carefully so I don't miss any parts or important events involving the main characters.

This sentence has major sentence structure problems and unclear word choices ('For eastern' likely 'For example', 'novels which have intrigues', 'main size'). Reorder into clear clauses: time phrase, condition, purpose. Use 'read carefully' and 'so I don't miss' to express intention. Suggestions: use clear connectors ('for example', 'when'), correct vocabulary ('plot' not 'intrigues'), and keep subject-action-purpose order.

× Mostly I prefer a detailed reading because I really enjoy to detail every part of the every character and every scene of it, like how this happened or how the character that read the things. Yeah, and I really enjoy the detailed reading.

✓ Mostly I prefer detailed reading because I really enjoy examining every part of each character and every scene, thinking about how events happened and how characters perceive things. I really enjoy detailed reading.

Errors: incorrect verb form 'enjoy to detail' should be 'enjoy detailing' or 'enjoy examining' (verb + -ing). Redundant phrases ('the every character') should be 'each character'. 'How the character that read the things' is ungrammatical; replace with 'how characters perceive things' or similar. Suggestions: use 'enjoy' followed by gerund, avoid redundancy, and use clear verbs like 'examine' or 'think about'.