阅读— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be concise and directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence (e.g., “Yes, I enjoy reading.”). Avoid repetition and correct grammar: use past tense appropriately and simpler structures. Add one or two specific supporting details using linking words (e.g., because, so) and keep answers under five sentences. Focus: revise awkward phrases ("when I was afraid") to a clearer idea (e.g., "when I was lonely or anxious").

範例: Yes, I enjoy reading. I often read when I feel anxious because books help me relax and distract me. For example, novels and self-help books taught me new ideas and improved my vocabulary.

建議: Begin with a clear topic sentence stating your preference ("I prefer reading on a screen"). Improve grammar (use present simple: "I prefer to read on a screen") and avoid repeated phrases. Give a specific reason and an example using linking words (because, so, for example). Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

範例: I prefer to read on a screen because I can easily access news and articles from other countries. For example, I use news apps and websites to follow events abroad, so I can stay updated quickly.

建議: Start with a clear topic sentence answering both parts (when to read carefully and when not). Fix grammar and word order ("When I take exams, I need to read carefully"). Use linking words to contrast the situations (e.g., "however, for casual news I skim"). Add one concrete example for each case and avoid fragmented sentences.

範例: When I take exams or read legal documents, I need to read carefully to avoid mistakes. However, for everyday news or social media posts I usually skim headlines because I only need the main idea.

建議: Answer directly: "I prefer detailed reading." Improve grammar and remove repetition. Explain why with a specific reason and an example, using linking words such as "because" or "so that". Keep it concise and within 2–4 sentences.

範例: I prefer detailed reading because it helps me understand ideas deeply and remember facts. For example, when studying for exams I read textbooks carefully and take notes so I can recall information later.

× Yes, definitely I like reading books because of when I when I was afraid that time I'm always prefer reading the books. Because of when I was reading the book that time I did acquired a lot of knowledge from the reading books.

✓ Yes, I definitely like reading books. When I was afraid, I often preferred to read books because reading helped me feel better. When I read, I acquired a lot of knowledge from the books.

Original contains repeated words, incorrect tense forms, wrong use of 'because of', and awkward sentence structure. Break into clear sentences, use past tense consistently for past habits (was afraid -> I often preferred), use 'prefer to read' not 'prefer reading the books' in that context, and use simple past 'acquired' (not 'did acquired'). Avoid 'because of' before a clause; use 'because' instead.

× I'm always a preferred read this screen because of I can. I can found a lots of knowledge and news others country with the help of a screen. That's why I'm always a preferred the read a screen.

✓ I always prefer reading on a screen because I can find a lot of information and news about other countries with the help of a screen. That's why I usually prefer to read on a screen.

Errors: incorrect use of article 'a' with 'preferred', wrong verb forms 'can found' (should be 'can find'), pluralization 'a lots' -> 'a lot' or 'lots of', 'others country' -> 'other countries'. Use 'prefer' (not 'am preferred'), and consistent prepositions 'on a screen' or 'on screens'. Use present simple for habitual actions.

× When do you need read carefully? That time when when you sit in the exam? That time you you need to read carefully. Question the answer after that. If I talk about do you not read the carefully? That is a lots of news.

✓ You need to read carefully when you sit an exam. At that time, you should read the questions and then answer them. If I am not reading carefully, I might miss a lot of information.

Original has incorrect word order ('need read' -> 'need to read'), repeated words, wrong article use ('a lots' -> 'a lot'), and unclear sentences. Use 'sit an exam' or 'take an exam', include infinitive 'to', and use conditional structure for hypothetical: 'If I am not reading carefully, I might miss a lot of information.' Choose consistent tense and clear clause order.

× I'm always a preferred detailed reading because of because of I'm always detailed reading with the help of I can acquire lots of knowledge when I when I was detailed reading books.

✓ I always prefer detailed reading because I can acquire a lot of knowledge when I read books in detail.

Original misuses 'preferred' and articles, repeats phrases, and mixes tenses. Use 'prefer' (present simple) for habit, 'detailed reading' is fine but better phrase 'read in detail' or 'read books in detail'. Use 'acquire' with present simple for general truth, and correct pluralization 'a lot of knowledge'.