阅读— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition and correct grammar (use subject-verb agreement and articles). Add one specific detail to support your reason and use a linking word if needed.

範例: Yes, I enjoy reading because it helps me relax. For example, I often read novels in the evening to unwind after work, and I usually finish one book every month.

建議: Give a clear direct answer in present tense and avoid filler words. Explain one specific reason clearly and use linking words to connect ideas. Correct grammar (e.g., ‘prefer paper’ not ‘preferred’, ‘it affects my eyes’ not ‘effect on my all eyes’).

範例: I prefer reading on paper because screens strain my eyes. For instance, after long periods reading on my phone I get headaches, so I usually choose paper books whenever possible.

建議: Answer directly with a topic sentence, avoid hesitation fillers, and give contrasting examples with linking words. Use plural/singular correctly and be specific about contexts where scanning is enough.

範例: I need to read carefully when dealing with important documents such as contracts, legal papers, or medical instructions. In contrast, I don't read fiction or news articles as closely because I read them mainly for enjoyment or general information.

建議: Give a concise topic sentence in correct grammar and reduce hesitations. Explain why with specific examples and use linking words to structure your reason and result.

範例: I usually prefer scanning because it helps me locate specific information quickly. For example, when I need a date or a name in an article, scanning lets me find it fast, so I can save time and move on to other tasks.

× It reduce my stress and sometimes I love to read novels so I like reading.

✓ It reduces my stress, and sometimes I love to read novels, so I like reading.

The subject 'It' (referring to reading) requires a verb in the third person singular present: 'reduces' not 'reduce'. Also add commas for clarity.

× Basically I preferred on the paper because when I read in the phones so it effect on my all eyes also.

✓ Basically I prefer paper because when I read on my phone it affects my eyes.

Mixed tense: 'preferred' (past) should be present 'prefer' to match general habit. Preposition errors: use 'on my phone' not 'in the phones'. Third person singular: 'it affects' not 'it effect'. 'My all eyes' incorrect phrase; use 'my eyes'.

× So basically I preferred paper.

✓ So basically I prefer paper.

General preference requires present simple 'prefer' rather than past 'preferred'.

× Uh, basically I usually, uh, need to read carefully, just like contract papers, legal documents and medical instruction also.

✓ Uh, basically I usually need to read carefully, for example contracts, legal documents, and medical instructions.

Plural and noun form errors: use 'contracts' and 'instructions' in plural for general items. 'Just like' can be replaced with 'for example' for clarity. Remove unnecessary filler words.

× So this type of, uh, documents I read carefully and other sites, umm, I did not, uh, read carefully like, uh, books and uh.

✓ I read these types of documents carefully, but I do not read other texts, like novels, as carefully.

Awkward word order and tense inconsistency: move verb after subject for natural English. 'Sites' is wrong word; use 'texts' or 'novels'. Use present tense 'do not read' for habitual action and add comparison structure 'as carefully'.

× Usually I prefer to scanning umm because it help to find a specific information and exact location quickly uh such as date names or any topic.

✓ Usually I prefer scanning because it helps me find specific information and the exact location quickly, such as dates, names, or other details.

After 'prefer' use gerund 'scanning' or 'to scan' (but not 'prefer to scanning'). Subject-verb agreement: 'it helps' not 'it help'. 'a specific information' is uncountable; use 'specific information' and 'dates' plural. Add 'me' after 'helps' for clarity.

× So it it help me to uh yeah it helped me to save my time.

✓ So it helps me to save time.

Inconsistent tense and subject-verb agreement: use present simple 'helps' for habitual action instead of 'help' and 'helped'. Remove duplicate 'it' and unnecessary fillers and 'my' before 'time' is optional; 'save time' is more natural.