阅读— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be careful with grammar (verb forms and articles), tighten the answer to 2–3 sentences, and add a brief specific example to sound natural. Use a clear topic sentence, then a supporting detail. Avoid redundancy ("good feeling" and "make me feel relaxed" convey the same idea).

範例: Yes, I enjoy reading. I read books and newspaper articles most days because it helps me relax after work; for example, I often read a short novel or a news column before bed.

建議: Correct word choice and grammar: use 'especially' and correct sentence structure. Combine ideas into one or two sentences and give a brief reason with a specific detail (e.g., Kindle's e-ink reduces glare). Avoid fragments like 'Advice.'

範例: I prefer reading on a screen, especially on a Kindle, because its e-ink display reduces glare and feels more like paper, which is easier on my eyes during long reading sessions.

建議: Fix grammar (use correct verb forms and articles), and make the contrast clear with linking words. State the two situations and give a concise reason for each. Replace vague phrases like 'something require focusing' with specific examples.

範例: I need to read carefully when I study scientific books or technical articles because I must understand complex ideas and remember details. In contrast, when I read novels for pleasure, I read more casually to enjoy the story rather than analyzing every sentence.

建議: Clarify and correct grammar ('save information in my memory', 'so I can use it later'). Keep to two sentences and explain briefly why detailed reading helps you, with a specific example of when you used retained information. Avoid unclear statements like 'I read all books.'

範例: I prefer detailed reading because it helps me remember important facts and ideas that I can use later, for example when writing essays or discussing topics at work. Therefore I take notes and reread key sections to reinforce my memory.

× I like reading books, newspaper articles every day because reading give me good feeling that make me feel relaxed.

✓ I like reading books and newspaper articles every day because reading gives me a good feeling and makes me feel relaxed.

Errors: subject-verb agreement with present tense verbs 'give' and 'make' (they should be 'gives' and 'makes' for singular subject 'reading'); missing conjunction 'and' between 'books' and 'newspaper articles'; missing article 'a' before 'good feeling'. Suggestion: Ensure the subject and verb agree in number in present tense (reading is singular), add necessary conjunctions to link noun phrases, and use articles correctly before countable singular nouns. Grammar problem type ID:6

× I prefer reading on a screen, specially by using a kindle. Advice. Kindle with the electronic ink protect eyes from tired.

✓ I prefer reading on a screen, especially using a Kindle. The Kindle's e-ink protects the eyes from fatigue.

Errors: 'specially' should be 'especially' (wrong word choice); 'a kindle' should be 'a Kindle' (proper noun capitalization) and article usage; sentence fragment 'Advice.' is incomplete; subject-verb agreement 'protect' should be 'protects' because 'e-ink' is singular; awkward phrase 'from tired' should be 'from fatigue' or 'from getting tired'. Suggestion: Use 'especially' for emphasis, capitalize brand names, combine fragments into complete sentences, match verb to singular subject, and use appropriate nouns for states (fatigue). Grammar problem type ID:13

× I need to read carefully when I read a scientific book or something require focusing.

✓ I need to read carefully when I read a scientific book or something that requires focusing.

Errors: Missing relative pronoun 'that' before the clause and incorrect verb form 'require' — it should be 'requires' to agree with singular 'something'. Suggestion: Insert 'that' to introduce the relative clause and use third-person singular verb form for singular subjects. Grammar problem type ID:8

× However, I when I read the novel, I don't need to read carefully.

✓ However, when I read a novel, I don't need to read carefully.

Errors: Extra word 'I' after 'However,' causing ungrammatical structure; use of definite article 'the' before 'novel' is unnatural unless referring to a specific novel—use 'a novel' for general preference. Suggestion: Remove the extra pronoun, and use 'a novel' for general statements. Grammar problem type ID:6

× I prefer detailed reading because I like to save my save information in my memory to utilize it when I need. Due to that I read all books.

✓ I prefer detailed reading because I like to store information in my memory to use when I need it. Therefore, I read all the books.

Errors: Repetition 'save my save information'; awkward phrasing 'store information in my memory' is clearer; 'to utilize it when I need' is awkward—use 'to use when I need it'; 'Due to that' is incorrect connector—use 'Therefore'; missing article 'the' before 'books' if referring to a set of books, or omit 'the' if meaning books in general. Suggestion: Remove repeated words, use clearer verbs like 'store' and 'use', use appropriate linking adverbs like 'therefore' and include articles correctly depending on meaning. Grammar problem type ID:26