阅读— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one specific reason and a short example. Reduce repetition (films/movies, visual learner) and fix subject-verb agreement and article usage.

範例: I don’t enjoy reading much because long paragraphs make me lose interest. For example, I find it hard to concentrate on long novels, so I usually watch films instead because visual storytelling keeps me engaged.

建議: Answer directly with a single clear sentence, then add one specific supporting detail using a linking word. Remove unclear fragments like “Help me understand.” Correct grammar (plural/singular) and sentence flow.

範例: I prefer reading on a screen because digital articles often include pictures, color and videos. For example, online news stories usually have diagrams and clips that help me understand complex topics more easily.

建議: Good content and relevant details. Improve coherence by grouping similar items and using linking words. Correct minor word choice issues (e.g., “articles” vague, “gossip” singular/plural). Keep sentences concise.

範例: I read carefully when it involves medical instructions, official forms or workplace guidelines because small mistakes can cause serious problems. However, I skim social media posts or casual gossip since accuracy is less important there.

建議: Provide a clear topic sentence stating your general preference, then give one specific example. Fix grammar (use gerunds and articles correctly) and avoid repetition (“article” used twice). Use linking words like “however” or “for instance.”

範例: It depends on the purpose: I usually scan casual content but read in detail for important material. For instance, I read medical information or work instructions carefully because accuracy matters.

× I have disliked reading since I was a child because long paragraphs often makes me lose interest.

✓ I have disliked reading since I was a child because long paragraphs often make me lose my interest.

Subject-verb agreement with plural subject 'paragraphs' requires the base verb 'make' not 'makes'; the present perfect 'have disliked' is acceptable but less natural here—consider 'have disliked' if the feeling continues. Added 'my' to clarify what is lost.

× I prefer watching films or movies because I am a visual learner and it holds my attention better and I enjoy watching.

✓ I prefer watching films or movies because I am a visual learner, they hold my attention better, and I enjoy watching them.

Run-on coordination and pronoun reference errors: 'it holds' is incorrect because the subject should be plural 'they' referring to 'films or movies'; use commas and 'and' to join clauses and add 'them' to avoid vague reference.

× I prefer reading on screen because I'm a visual learner and digital text often include pictures, color or multimedia content that it makes it more engaging.

✓ I prefer reading on a screen because I'm a visual learner and digital text often includes pictures, color, or multimedia content, which makes it more engaging.

Subject-verb agreement: 'digital text' is singular, so use 'includes'. The clause 'that it makes it more engaging' is ungrammatical; use a relative pronoun 'which' and remove redundant 'it' to form 'which makes it more engaging'. Added article 'a' before 'screen'.

× For example, articles that have videos or diagrams. Help me understand.

✓ For example, articles that have videos or diagrams help me understand.

Fragment: the original is two fragments; join them into one complete sentence with a subject and verb. Removed the period and combined clauses so 'articles ... help me understand' is a full sentence.

× I read carefully if it's about articles, medications, forms, and some guidelines because small mistakes can cause harm or lead to errors.

✓ I read carefully if it's about articles, medications, forms, or guidelines because small mistakes can cause harm or lead to errors.

List coordination: use parallel items and 'or' to indicate alternative categories; 'some guidelines' is acceptable but 'or guidelines' is more natural here. No major tense or verb errors.

× For casual gossips or light social post, I usually skim.

✓ For casual gossip or light social posts, I usually skim.

Count noun and pluralization: 'gossip' is uncountable here, so use singular 'gossip'; 'post' should be plural 'posts' to match 'social' items. Also added comma placement is fine.

× I think it depends on what article or what I'm reading.

✓ I think it depends on which article or what I'm reading.

Use 'which' with a choice among articles; original 'what article' is awkward. Maintain present tense 'depends' and 'I'm reading'.

× For example, if it's an information about an article or a medical situation, I usually detailed reading or any instructions and articles that related to my work.

✓ For example, if it's information about an article or a medical situation, I usually do detailed reading, especially for any instructions and articles that are related to my work.

Multiple issues: 'an information' is incorrect—'information' is uncountable so no article; 'detailed reading' needs a verb phrase 'do detailed reading' or 'read in detail'; 'that related to' requires 'are related to' for correct verb form. Rearranged sentence for clarity and correct verb forms.