阅读— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答をもっと自然で文法的に正しくし、詳細を一つか二つ加えて具体性を高めてください。短い文をつなぐ際は接続詞を使い、冗長な表現を避けます。例えば“a historical books”や“makes my ability improved”は誤りです。改善点： 1) 冠詞と単複数を正しく使う（a historical book / historical books）。 2) 文法的に正しい比較・結果表現を使う（It helps me relax and improves my knowledge/skills）。 3) 理由や具体例を一つ加える（どの時代や著者が好きか）。 4) 文の長さは最大5文に抑える。

範例: Yes, I enjoy reading, especially books on world history. I usually read a historical book every day because I find learning about past events fascinating. For example, I am particularly interested in 20th-century diplomatic history. Reading helps me relax and improves my understanding of global affairs.

建議: 文法と語順を直し、理由をより具体的に述べてください。“Before to read it on screen”のような表現は不自然です。代わりに現在の習慣や具体的な利点（持ち運び、検索機能、辞書機能など）を挙げます。接続詞（because, so）を使って論理的に繋げてください。

範例: I prefer reading on a screen because it is more convenient to carry many books on my tablet. I usually use reading apps that let me search for words and adjust the font size, so I can read comfortably anywhere.

建議: 文法（時制、助動詞、語順）を修正し、対比をはっきりさせてください。“I did books as my hobby”は意味不明なので“when I read books for pleasure, I don't read carefully”のように言い換えます。具体的な例（どんな法的書類か、趣味の本のジャンル）を一つ加えると説得力が増します。

範例: I need to read carefully when I deal with legal documents at work, such as contracts or policies, because small details matter. On the other hand, when I read novels or comics for pleasure, I usually skim and enjoy the story without focusing on every detail.

建議: 表現を自然にして理由や具体例を明確に述べてください。“I can know that many stories of”は不自然なので、“I can get the gist of many stories”に直します。スキャニングが向く場面（速く情報を得たい時、複数の作品を比較する時）と詳細読みが必要な場面も一言で触れるとバランスが良くなります。

範例: I prefer scanning because it lets me go through many books quickly and grasp the main ideas. For example, I often scan manga to catch the plot of several series in a short time, although I read more carefully when I want to study a particular book in depth.

× I like reading a historical books every day.

✓ I like reading historical books every day.

The article 'a' should not be used before a plural noun. Use no article or 'the' if specific. Remove 'a' before the plural 'books'. Suggestion: say 'historical books' or 'a historical book' if singular.

× It makes me relax and it makes my ability improved.

✓ It relaxes me and improves my abilities.

Two issues: verb choice and form. 'Makes me relax' is unnatural; use the simple transitive verb 'relaxes'. 'Makes my ability improved' incorrectly mixes 'make' with past participle. Use active present 'improves my ability' or better plural 'abilities'. Maintain parallel structure: 'relaxes me and improves my abilities.'

× Before to read it on screen because it is convenient to bring it everywhere.

✓ I used to read on a screen because it is convenient to carry it everywhere.

'Before to read' is incorrect; use 'used to' for past habit or 'before I read' for time clauses. Also 'bring it everywhere' sounds odd for a device; 'carry it everywhere' is natural. 'Read on a screen' is the usual collocation.

× I always view the books by my tablet by using apps.

✓ I always read books on my tablet using apps.

Use 'read on my tablet' instead of 'view the books by my tablet.' Preposition 'on' is correct for devices. 'Using apps' is sufficient; avoid 'by using apps.'

× When I read the legal documents in my work time, I read carefully.

✓ When I read legal documents at work, I read carefully.

'In my work time' is unnatural; use 'at work.' The rest is fine in present tense for habitual action.

× But I on the other hand I did books as my hobby.

✓ But on the other hand, I read books as a hobby.

Incorrect word order and verb form. 'I did books' is incorrect; use 'I read books.' Place 'on the other hand' at clause start or between commas: 'But, on the other hand, I read books as a hobby.' Also use 'a hobby.'

× I did not carefully.

✓ I do not read them carefully.

'Did not carefully' lacks an object and incorrect tense. The speaker contrasts habit, so present simple 'do not read them carefully' is appropriate. Include object 'them' referring to books and use adverb 'carefully' after the verb.

× I like scanning because I can read many books by scanning.

✓ I like scanning because I can read many books quickly.

Repeating 'scanning' is redundant. Use an adverb like 'quickly' to express speed. 'By scanning' is awkward after 'can read many books'; prefer 'quickly' or 'through scanning.'

× For example, I read many mangas quickly and I can know that many stories of.

✓ For example, I read many mangas quickly and can get to know many of the stories.

'Mangas' is acceptable but 'manga' is uncountable/plural same form; 'many manga' or 'many manga volumes.' 'I can know that many stories of' is ungrammatical. Use 'can get to know many of the stories' or 'learn about many stories.' Rearrange word order and use 'of the stories' after 'many.'