阅读— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more specific, concise and use natural phrasing. Start with a clear topic sentence, give one or two specific supporting details (why the book helped), and avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect ideas and correct minor grammar (e.g., say ‘a book called…’ or ‘the TV series’ if it’s ambiguous).

範例: Yes, I enjoy reading. For example, a book I read three years ago called Breaking Bad had practical life lessons that changed how I manage my time, so I’ve reread it two or three times.

建議: Organize the answer: give a clear preference, then two concise, specific reasons with linking words. Fix grammar (use ‘paper’ or ‘print’ not ‘papers’; ‘main reason’ singular). Avoid absolute words like ‘very awful’.

範例: I prefer reading on paper. Firstly, printed pages are easier on my eyes, especially during long reading sessions; secondly, reading print feels more comfortable and familiar, so I find it more convenient.

建議: Remove filler words, use a clear topic sentence and contrast with linking words (e.g., ‘however’). Be more specific about what ‘careful’ means (e.g., checking facts, understanding instructions). Correct small grammar issues and plural forms.

範例: It depends on the situation. For example, when I read a newspaper at home I don’t read every word carefully; however, during an exam or when reading legal documents I read very carefully to understand instructions and avoid mistakes.

建議: Give a clear topic sentence and one or two specific reasons with better vocabulary and fewer repetitions. Correct vocabulary errors (‘I prefer detailed reading’, not ‘Add preferred’ or ‘tax’ → likely ‘text’). Use linking words and be concise.

範例: I prefer detailed reading because it allows me to analyze tasks thoroughly and extract all essential information from a text, which is important when accuracy matters.

× There is a book called Breaking Bad and I read that book about 3 years ago that was so helpful for my life and it's so good that I have read it again and again 2-3 times.

✓ There was a book called Breaking Bad that I read about three years ago; it was very helpful for my life, and it is so good that I have read it two or three times.

The speaker mixed present and past existence: use 'there was' to refer to a book read in the past. Also improved punctuation and wording for clarity (use 'that' to link relative clause, spell out numbers in formal speech). Use 'two or three times' for natural phrasing. Grammar problem type ID: 3

× it's so good that I have read it again and again 2-3 times.

✓ it is so good that I have read it again and again two or three times.

Use consistent formality and correct quantifier expression: write 'two or three times' instead of '2-3 times.' Also expand 'it's' to 'it is' for clarity in formal answers. Grammar problem type ID: 14

× If I had to choose one, I'd definitely pick papers because screens are very awful for our eyes.

✓ If I had to choose one, I'd definitely pick paper because screens are very bad for our eyes.

Use uncountable noun 'paper' for the general medium rather than plural 'papers.' 'Awful' is acceptable but 'very bad' is more natural here. Also 'pick paper' aligns with the question about medium (paper vs screen). Grammar problem type ID: 17

× That is one of the main reason.

✓ That is one of the main reasons.

With 'one of the' the noun should be plural ('reasons') because it refers to one item in a group. Singular 'reason' is incorrect in this construction. Grammar problem type ID: 27

× And the another reason would be reading in paper is so convenient for us.

✓ Another reason would be that reading on paper is very convenient for us.

Do not use 'the' with 'another.' Use 'reading on paper' (preposition 'on' with 'paper') and include 'that' to introduce the clause. 'Very convenient' is more idiomatic than 'so convenient.' Grammar problem type ID: 17

× It has become a habit. So I'd prefer papers.

✓ It has become a habit, so I'd prefer paper.

Maintain consistency with singular uncountable 'paper' for the medium. Using 'papers' suggests multiple documents rather than the medium of reading. Grammar problem type ID: 12

× I think it, uh, depends on the situation, because for example, if I am at home and I'm reading some newspapers, I can be careless, you know, But if I'm at exam, reading at question papers, I should really be careful.

✓ I think it depends on the situation. For example, if I am at home and I'm reading newspapers, I can be careless; but if I'm at an exam reading exam papers, I should really be careful.

Removed filler 'uh' and corrected article usage: 'at an exam' requires 'an.' 'Reading newspapers' (no 'some' needed) and 'exam papers' is clearer than 'question papers.' Capitalization and punctuation fixed; 'but' should not be capitalized mid-sentence. Grammar problem type ID: 17

× If I'm at exam, reading at question papers, I should really be careful.

✓ If I'm at an exam, reading exam papers, I should really be careful.

Use the article 'an' before 'exam' and use 'exam papers' (no preposition 'at') to refer to the test questions. This fixes the article error and the awkward preposition. Grammar problem type ID: 17

× Add preferred detailed reading because detailed reading will really help for detailed analysis of the given tasks and it provides the essential information about the tax. So I'd prefer detail.

✓ I prefer detailed reading because it helps with careful analysis of given tasks and provides essential information about the text, so I'd prefer detail-oriented reading.

The original sentence has incorrect word 'Add,' awkward repetition and a wrong word 'tax' likely intended as 'text.' Restructured sentence for clarity and corrected vocabulary. Use 'text' not 'tax' and avoid repetitive 'detailed.' End with a natural expression 'detail-oriented reading.' Grammar problem type ID: 26