阅读— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is enthusiastic but unclear and contains many grammatical and vocabulary errors. Be direct: state whether you like reading, give one or two specific reasons or examples, and avoid unnecessary phrases. Use correct verb forms and simpler, accurate vocabulary. Keep it within 2–4 sentences.

範例: Yes, I enjoy reading. I especially like biographies of celebrities because their life stories motivate me and give practical examples of how they achieved success.

建議: Your preference is clear but the answer has grammatical mistakes and repetitions. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give a concise reason and a brief supporting detail. Use correct tense and avoid repeating words.

範例: I prefer reading physical books. I enjoy the smell and texture of paper, and holding a book helps me concentrate so I can easily continue to the next chapter.

建議: Your idea is appropriate but the expression is confused and full of errors. Answer directly: say when careful reading is necessary and when casual reading is fine. Give clear reasons and one specific example. Use correct articles, verb forms, and avoid filler words.

範例: I need to read carefully when I study academic journals or sources that affect my grades, because I must understand facts and cite them accurately. For leisure reading, such as celebrity biographies, I read more casually and often skim parts I find less interesting.

建議: You have the right idea but grammar and clarity need improvement. Start with a clear statement about when you scan and when you read in detail. Use linking words (for example, because, whereas) and correct verb forms. Give one concrete example of each reading type.

範例: It depends on the purpose: I scan newspaper articles for general ideas but read academic journals in detail because I need accurate information and quotes for my essays.

× Yes, why not lower? I guess no one can resist the charming for reading.

✓ Yes, why not? I guess no one can resist the charm of reading.

The phrase used 'charming' (an adjective) where the noun 'charm' is required, and the preposition 'for' is incorrect; use 'of' with 'charm'. Also 'why not lower?' is likely a misuse; corrected to 'why not?'. Suggestion: use nouns after verbs like 'resist' ('resist the charm') and pair nouns with correct prepositions ('charm of reading').

× I love reading some stories about the celebrities.

✓ I love reading stories about celebrities.

Use of the determiner 'the' before 'celebrities' is unnecessary here and 'some' is redundant. 'Celebrities' is a plural noun; use without 'the' for general reference. Suggestion: remove unnecessary determiners for general statements.

× I can replicate their stories and move to success.

✓ I can learn from their stories and move toward success.

'Replicate their stories' implies copying exactly, which likely isn't intended; 'learn from' fits meaning. 'Move to success' is awkward; use 'move toward success' or 'achieve success'. Suggestion: choose verbs and prepositions that convey intended meaning ('learn from', 'toward').

× Well, I would say I've definitely reading on a physical book because physical books had a has a magic I can smell from the physical book, which is fascinating and I can indulge myself and continue within the next chapter.

✓ Well, I would say I definitely prefer reading physical books because they have a certain magic I can smell, which is fascinating, and I can lose myself and continue to the next chapter.

Multiple issues: 'I've definitely reading' mixes present perfect and -ing form; use 'I definitely prefer reading' or 'I definitely read'. 'On a physical book' should be 'physical books' or 'in a physical book'; 'had a has a' is redundant and wrong tense; use present 'have'. 'Indulge myself' is acceptable but 'lose myself' is more natural; 'continue within the next chapter' is incorrect preposition and article use—use 'continue to the next chapter'. Suggestion: maintain consistent tense, remove redundant words, and use correct prepositions.

× So especially when we are waiting in a very important scholarly journal that may can impact your essays score.

✓ Especially when we are reading a very important scholarly journal that may affect your essay score.

'Waiting in a very important scholarly journal' is incorrect verb choice; use 'reading'. 'May can' is a double modal; use one modal ('may' or 'can'). 'Essays score' lacks possessive or singular agreement; use 'essay score'. Suggestion: avoid double modals and ensure noun phrases are correctly formed.

× I will definitely read in very detail for but for leis leisure purpose, like reading a biography for of the celebrities, I will definitely uh lost my concentrations, but.

✓ I will definitely read in great detail for academic purposes, but for leisure, like reading a celebrity biography, I will definitely lose my concentration.

Errors: 'read in very detail' should be 'read in great detail' or 'read very carefully'. 'for leis leisure purpose' misspelled and wrong order; use 'for leisure' or 'for leisure purposes'. 'Biography for of the celebrities' has wrong prepositions and plural; use 'a celebrity biography' or 'biographies of celebrities'. 'Lost my concentrations' mixes past tense 'lost' with future intent and uses plural 'concentrations'; use 'lose my concentration'. Suggestion: choose correct adverbials ('in great detail'), correct prepositions, and match tense with intent.

× Well, it's quite depending on what times, what times of reading I gonna to read.

✓ Well, it depends on the time and the type of reading I am going to do.

'It's quite depending' is incorrect; use 'it depends' (verb + dependent noun) or 'it's quite dependent on' (adjective). 'What times, what times of reading' is redundant and ungrammatical; rephrase as 'the time and the type of reading'. 'I gonna to read' is nonstandard colloquial 'gonna' plus extra 'to'; use 'I am going to read' or 'I am going to do'. Suggestion: use correct verb forms ('depends'), avoid colloquial contractions in formal speech, and simplify redundant phrases.

× If you are reading in a scholar journal, I will definitely put 100% concentrations on that because it is something related with my essay score.

✓ If you are reading a scholarly journal, I will definitely put 100% concentration into that because it is related to my essay score.

'Scholar journal' should be 'scholarly journal' (adjective form). 'Put 100% concentrations' uses plural 'concentrations' incorrectly; use singular 'concentration'. 'Related with' is incorrect preposition; use 'related to'. Suggestion: use correct adjective forms, singular noun for uncountable 'concentration', and proper prepositions.

× I use the score for references.

✓ I use the scores as references.

'The score' is vague; likely plural 'scores' or 'the score' depending on context. 'For references' is awkward; 'as references' is more natural. Suggestion: choose correct number (singular/plural) to match context and use preposition 'as' for role.