阅读— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Give a direct, well-formed topic sentence and then add one or two clear supporting details. Use correct tense and simpler grammar: avoid repeating the examiner's question, fix word order, and use appropriate articles and plural forms. Keep it natural and within 2–3 sentences. For example, state that reading is your hobby, mention when you started, and why you enjoy it.

範例: Yes, I enjoy reading and it is one of my main hobbies. I have liked reading since I was a child because it helped me learn new words and explore different cultures.

建議: Answer directly, use clear reasons linked with a linking phrase (because/so), and correct grammar (prefer + -ing or prefer X to Y). Avoid repetition and keep sentences concise (max 3). Mention a specific example of distraction to be more concrete.

範例: I prefer reading on paper rather than on a screen because I get distracted by apps and notifications on my devices. For instance, when I read on my phone I often switch to social media, so paper helps me concentrate better.

建議: Start with a clear topic sentence describing both situations, then use linking words (when/while/whereas) and give a specific example of “tough” and “casual” reading. Avoid hesitations and finish your casual example. Keep to 2–3 short sentences.

範例: I read carefully when I study difficult subjects, such as technical articles or textbooks, because I need to understand concepts precisely. On the other hand, I skim light materials like news or short blog posts when I only want the main idea.

建議: Give a confident topic sentence and use linking words to explain reasons. Replace fillers like “umm” with a short pause or continue fluently. Provide a specific outcome of detailed reading (e.g., better retention) to strengthen your answer and keep it within 2–3 sentences.

範例: I prefer detailed reading because it helps me retain information and understand all the arguments in a book. For example, when I study for exams I read chapters carefully so I do not miss important points.

× Do you like reading? Yes, of course reading is my hobby. Hobbies I like to. I like readings when I was young from now since I was know a lot of words.

✓ Yes, of course; reading is my hobby. I also like other hobbies. I have liked reading since I was young because it helped me learn many words.

This response has several sentence structure issues and incorrect verb forms. 'Hobbies I like to' is a fragmented and incorrectly ordered phrase; rewrite as 'I also like other hobbies.' 'I like readings when I was young from now since I was know a lot of words' mixes tenses and uses incorrect noun/verb forms ('readings' is incorrect here; use the gerund 'reading' or the uncountable noun 'reading'). Use present perfect 'have liked' to express an action that began in the past and continues to the present, and simplify the reason clause: 'because it helped me learn many words.' Suggestion: keep sentences clear and maintain consistent tense (present perfect for actions continuing to now).

× For me I would I more prefer to read on paper because these are different apps on the screen so I would be distracted that I cannot focus on my books. So I would like to reading on the papers.

✓ For me, I prefer to read on paper because there are many apps on the screen that distract me, so I cannot focus on my books. Therefore, I prefer reading on paper.

The original has pronoun and word-order problems: 'these are different apps' is awkward; use 'there are many apps' to introduce existence. 'I would I more prefer' is redundant and incorrect; use 'I prefer'. 'that I cannot focus' is a wrong connector; 'so I cannot focus' is natural. 'reading on the papers' uses incorrect article and noun form; use 'reading on paper' (uncountable). Maintain concise structure and correct pronoun/reference ('that' vs 'so').

× I think it's very dependent when I need to, uh, learn some tough knowledge that is very hard to, I mean, that is very hard to understand for me. I need to read carefully and focus. But if it's casual, it's.

✓ I think it depends. When I need to learn difficult material that is hard for me to understand, I need to read carefully and focus. But if it is casual, I do not need to read carefully.

The phrase 'it's very dependent' is incorrect; use 'it depends'. Repetition 'that is very hard to, I mean, that is very hard to understand for me' is redundant and ungrammatical; simplify to 'difficult material that is hard for me to understand.' Ensure tense consistency (present simple) when stating general habits: 'I need' and 'I do not need.' Complete the final clause rather than leaving it unfinished. Use clear connectors and avoid filler words.

× I prefer UMM. From my experience, detailed reading is more suitable for me because I don't want to miss any topic and any information of the books, so I don't like scanning reading.

✓ From my experience, detailed reading suits me better because I do not want to miss any topics or any information in the books, so I do not like scanning.

'Detailed reading is more suitable for me' is acceptable but can be streamlined to 'detailed reading suits me better.' 'Any topic and any information of the books' uses incorrect preposition and coordination; use 'topics or any information in the books.' 'Scanning reading' is incorrect; use 'scanning' or 'skimming.' Avoid filler 'UMM' in formal answers. Maintain parallel structure ('topics or information').