阅读— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is clear and relevant with a good topic sentence and an example. To improve, make sentences more concise, correct minor mistakes ("not carefully" → "more carefully"), and add a linking phrase to show consequence (e.g., "therefore"). Also avoid repeating "read" and vary vocabulary (e.g., "study" or "go through").

範例: I don't usually enjoy reading because I struggle to concentrate unless I have a clear purpose. For example, during exam week I force myself to study textbooks more carefully, so I can understand the material and achieve good grades.

建議: Strong, natural response with specific reasons and examples. To push the score higher, tighten phrasing ("at a coffee" → "in a café"), add a brief contrast to paper reading, and vary sentence openings to avoid repetition of "I".

範例: I prefer reading on a screen because it's more convenient and usually faster. For instance, I can access books and articles on my smartphone on the subway or in a café, and features like adjustable font size and a built-in dictionary make reading more efficient compared with paper.

建議: Good structure and clear contrast between careful and casual reading. Improve by correcting the clipped ending (complete the word "com."), using linking words ("however"), and offering one concrete example of a technique you use to retain facts to increase specificity.

範例: When preparing for important exams, especially in the final week, I review textbooks and revision notes intensively so I can retain key facts. However, at other times I skim novels or read for cultural interest and enjoyment; for example, I usually make brief summaries or flashcards during exam study to help memory.

建議: Clear, concise and well-structured answer with appropriate contrast. To improve further, replace filler words like "actually," add a linking phrase ("on the other hand"), and include a short example of a detailed-reading technique to show depth.

範例: It depends on the situation. For novels I usually skim for enjoyment, but on the other hand, when preparing for exams I read in detail—for example, I annotate key passages and summarize each chapter to ensure I fully understand and retain the information.

× For example, during exam week I make myself read textbooks and not carefully so I can understand the material and achieve a good grade.

✓ For example, during exam week I make myself read textbooks and not read carefully so I can understand the material and achieve a good grade.

The original sentence omitted the verb 'read' after 'not', creating a past tense/contextual inconsistency and a sentence structure problem. Insert 'read' to complete the contrast ('read' vs 'not read') so the meaning is clear and grammatical. Also the context uses habitual present 'make myself read', so keep 'read' in base form.

× I can access many books and articles anywhere on my smartphone, in the subway, or at a coffee, and features like adjustable font size and a built-in dictionary make reading much easier and more efficient.

✓ I can access many books and articles anywhere on my smartphone, in the subway, or at a cafe, and features like adjustable font size and a built-in dictionary make reading much easier and more efficient.

The phrase 'at a coffee' incorrectly uses the noun 'coffee' instead of 'cafe'. Use the prepositional phrase 'at a cafe' to indicate a place. This corrects the preposition+noun collocation and clarifies the location.

× At other times, I tend to skim novels or read culturally for leisure, focusing on enjoyment rather than detailed com.

✓ At other times, I tend to skim novels or read casually for leisure, focusing on enjoyment rather than detailed comprehension.

The original contains 'read culturally' which is incorrect collocation and 'detailed com' is an incomplete word. Replace 'culturally' with 'casually' to convey informal reading and replace 'detailed com' with 'detailed comprehension' to complete the intended noun. This fixes word choice and sentence completeness.