阅读— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make your answer more natural and grammatically correct, avoid repetition, and keep it concise (max 5 sentences). Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Correct verb forms and article use.

範例: Yes, I really enjoy reading. I mainly read comedies and dramas because their humour and emotional stories help me relax after a long day. For example, a funny short story can make me laugh and forget stress, while a touching drama helps me feel connected to the characters.

建議: Make sentences more fluent and avoid repeating phrases like 'I want to read on paper.' Use linking words and give a specific example of how paper helps comprehension. Keep it within 3–4 concise sentences.

範例: I prefer reading on paper because it helps me concentrate and understand the text more deeply. For example, turning pages and annotating with a pen makes it easier for me to follow characters’ emotions and remember important details.

建議: Clarify the time references and correct grammar (use present tense and clear contrasts). Give a concrete example of 'important documents' and explain a realistic situation when you skim. Use linking words to contrast the two cases.

範例: I read carefully when the material is important, such as legal documents, work reports, or exam instructions, because mistakes could cause problems. By contrast, I skim articles like news summaries or casual blog posts when I just need the main idea and don’t have much time.

建議: Improve clarity and grammar, avoid unclear abbreviations ('UMM'), and use linking words to contrast scanning vs detailed reading. Give a precise example of how you scan in an exam and how you read in-depth for understanding.

範例: It depends on the purpose. For instance, during the IELTS reading test I use scanning to find keywords and answers quickly, which saves time. However, when I study a novel or a research article, I read in detail to understand meanings, themes, and nuances.

× Yes, I really enjoy reading. I often read comedy and drama is often helps me to reduce stress and cheer me up.

✓ Yes, I really enjoy reading. I often read comedies and dramas; they often help me reduce stress and cheer me up.

The original contains a run-on and subject-verb issues. 'Comedy and drama is often helps' combines two clauses incorrectly and uses singular verb forms with plural nouns. Change 'comedy and drama' to the plural 'comedies and dramas' to match the plural subject, replace the faulty clause with 'they often help me' to provide a clear subject and correct verb form, and remove the extra 'to' before 'reduce'. Use a semicolon or separate sentences to avoid a run-on. Suggestion: split into two sentences or use a conjunction and ensure subject-verb agreement.

× Firstly, I want to read on paper because it helps me to understand deeply the content and sympathize with the emotions.

✓ Firstly, I want to read on paper because it helps me understand the content more deeply and empathize with the emotions.

Use of 'to' before 'understand' is unnecessary; 'understand deeply' is more natural as 'understand the content more deeply'. 'Sympathize with the emotions' is awkward: 'empathize with the emotions' or 'empathize with the characters' is better. Also swap word order to place the adverb 'more deeply' after the object. Suggestion: place adverbs after objects and choose 'empathize' for emotional connection.

× Also, it helps me to more concentrate on the content.

✓ Also, it helps me to concentrate more on the content.

The adverb 'more' should modify the verb phrase 'concentrate' and is placed after the verb ('concentrate more') rather than between 'to' and the verb. Move 'more' after 'concentrate'. Alternatively remove 'to' and write 'helps me concentrate more'.

× I often read not carefully when I was weekly or lately.

✓ I often don't read carefully when I am reading something quickly or when I'm short on time.

The original mixes past tense 'was' with time adverbs 'weekly' and 'lately' and contains unclear phrases. The question asks about general habits so use present tense. 'Not carefully' is better rephrased as 'don't read carefully'. Replace 'was weekly or lately' with clear reasons such as 'when I am reading something quickly' or 'when I'm short on time'. Suggestion: use present tense for habitual actions and give clear time expressions.

× I think it depends on situation. For example when UMM do reading on IELTS exam, I will use scanning because it's more convenient and helps me to get a high score.

✓ I think it depends on the situation. For example, when I do reading tasks on the IELTS exam, I use scanning because it's more convenient and helps me get a high score.

Missing definite article 'the' before 'situation' is needed. 'When UMM do reading on IELTS exam' contains wrong subject and verb form; replace 'UMM' with 'I' and use 'do reading tasks' or 'do the reading section'. Use present tense 'use' for habitual strategy rather than future 'will use'. Remove unnecessary 'to' in 'helps me to get'. Suggestion: include articles where required and match subject-verb forms and tense to habitual actions.

× But when I want to understand the content I will read it more detailing.

✓ But when I want to understand the content, I will read it in more detail.

'Detailing' is the wrong form; the correct noun phrase is 'in more detail' or the adverb 'more carefully' or 'more thoroughly'. Place a comma before the subordinate clause ending and use 'in more detail' to indicate depth of reading. Suggestion: use 'read it in more detail' or 'read it more carefully' for clarity.