阅读— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng hơn, ngắn gọn và tự nhiên; tránh cấu trúc tiếng mẹ đẻ (e.g. “comes in handy, especially my academic knowledge one day”) và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp. Thêm một câu minh họa cụ thể để làm rõ lý do bạn thích đọc. Hạn chế độ dài tối đa 3–4 câu và dùng liên từ hợp lý.

範例: Yes, I enjoy reading. I read mostly academic articles and textbooks because they help me understand my field better. For example, last month I read a review article that clarified a key concept for my thesis.

建議: Cần sửa ngữ pháp và chọn từ chính xác (ví dụ "From your own perspective" không đúng). Nên nêu rõ ưu và nhược điểm của cả hai lựa chọn và kết luận preference. Dùng liên từ như "however" hoặc "but" để nối ý.

範例: I usually prefer reading on paper because I find it easier to concentrate and take notes, but I also use screens when I need convenience or to access online articles.

建議: Câu trả lời lẫn lộn liên từ (both "while" và "however") và có nhiều lỗi từ vựng/đánh máy (e.g. "articles journals", "relating my own thesis", "bruising" sai từ). Nên tách thành hai phần rõ ràng: khi nào cần đọc kỹ và khi nào không, dùng ví dụ cụ thể và câu hoàn chỉnh, sửa ngữ pháp.

範例: I need to read carefully when I'm reviewing journal articles for my thesis because I must understand methods and results precisely. In contrast, I skim social media posts or headlines when I just want a quick update.

建議: Câu trả lời chưa hoàn chỉnh (bị ngắt quãng) và cấu trúc ngữ pháp yếu ("I refer them depends on situation"). Cần hoàn thành ý, nêu rõ khi nào dùng scanning và khi nào detailed reading, dùng liên từ như "when" hoặc "because" và đưa ví dụ cụ thể.

範例: It depends on the situation. I scan texts when I surf the internet or look for specific facts, but I use detailed reading when studying for exams or writing assignments because I need to remember and analyze information.

× Absolutely yes. I have an avid interest in reading because I believe it comes in handy, especially my academic knowledge one day.

✓ Absolutely yes. I have an avid interest in reading because I believe it will come in handy for my academic knowledge one day.

The sentence uses 'it comes in handy' with unclear reference; 'my academic knowledge one day' is awkward. Use future 'will come in handy' to express later benefit and preposition 'for' to link benefit to 'my academic knowledge'. Also reorder phrase to sound natural.

× From your own perspective, reading on paper documents easily address me, although reading through a screen is more convenient nowadays.

✓ From my perspective, reading from paper documents appeals to me, although reading on a screen is more convenient nowadays.

'From your own perspective' is wrong for the speaker; use 'my perspective'. 'Address me' is incorrect — use 'appeals to me'. Use preposition 'from' or 'on' with 'paper' and 'on a screen' for clarity.

× While reading carefully appears necessary when submitting some articles journals relating my own thesis, however, this really not a need to read detail when bruising news on Facebook.

✓ Reading carefully is necessary when submitting articles or journals related to my thesis; however, it is not necessary to read details when browsing news on Facebook.

Original has redundant subordinators 'while' and 'however' and missing verbs. Fix sentence structure: use 'is necessary', correct noun forms 'articles or journals', preposition 'related to', 'it is not necessary', and correct verb 'browsing' and 'details'.

× I refer them depends on situation. As regards scanning, I just do it when I have been surfing on the Internet. Detail reading happens when I.

✓ I decide based on the situation. As for scanning, I do it when I am surfing the Internet. Detailed reading happens when I need to understand something thoroughly.

'I refer them depends on situation' is ungrammatical; use 'I decide based on the situation'. 'I have been surfing' is unnecessary present perfect continuous; 'I am surfing' fits general habit. 'Detail reading' should be 'detailed reading' (adjective form) and complete the sentence with purpose. Also avoid sentence fragments.