阅读— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời tự nhiên và giàu nội dung, nhưng có thể rút ngắn để tránh dài dòng, loại bỏ từ ngữ không cần thiết và kết cấu rõ ràng hơn (một câu chủ đề + 1-2 câu hỗ trợ). Nên dùng từ nối nhẹ để chuyển ý mượt mà.

範例: Yes, I do. I'm a voracious reader and usually read a book every night. Reading helps me broaden my horizons and relax after a busy day.

建議: Nội dung có ý tốt nhưng chứa lỗi từ vựng/ngữ pháp và câu bị bỏ dở. Cần sửa lỗi (preference, ad readers → e-readers), hoàn chỉnh câu cuối và tránh nói lan man. Dùng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng và một câu giải thích cụ thể.

範例: I prefer physical books because I enjoy the smell of paper and turning pages. However, I understand why friends use e-readers since they are lightweight and can store many titles.

建議: Ý tưởng rõ ràng nhưng có vấn đề về phát âm/hesitation (uh) và một vài lỗi nhỏ về mạo từ/độ chính xác (sleeping → flipping; a fashion magazines → fashion magazines/a fashion magazine). Nên tránh tiếng ngập ngừng và dùng ví dụ cụ thể, ngắn gọn hơn.

範例: It depends on my purpose. I read carefully for legal contracts or academic research to avoid misinterpretation. By contrast, I skim magazines or comics for entertainment and don't focus on every detail.

建議: Nội dung hợp lý nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc (refer detail reading, any in information, would have to). Cần sửa các lỗi đó, dùng linking words ngắn gọn (e.g., however, so) và giữ tối đa 2 câu.

範例: I used to prefer detailed reading because I didn't want to miss information. However, since starting my business I now often scan texts to extract key takeaways quickly and save time.

× Personally, I have a strong reference of physical books because I love the smell of paper and the feeling of turning pages.

✓ Personally, I have a strong preference for physical books because I love the smell of paper and the feeling of turning pages.

The word 'reference' is incorrect here; the appropriate noun is 'preference'. Use 'preference for' to indicate liking something. Suggestion: replace 'reference of' with 'preference for'.

× In contrast, many of my tech savvy friends prefer reading on ad readers like Kindles because of their portability and the ability to carry an.

✓ In contrast, many of my tech-savvy friends prefer reading on e-readers like Kindles because of their portability and the ability to carry them.

Multiple issues: 'tech savvy' should be hyphenated as 'tech-savvy' when used as a compound adjective; 'ad readers' is incorrect — correct term is 'e-readers'; sentence ends with 'carry an.' which is incomplete; use the pronoun 'them' to refer to 'Kindles'. Suggestion: use 'tech-savvy', 'e-readers', and complete the object with 'them'.

× In contrast, many of my tech savvy friends prefer reading on ad readers like Kindles because of their portability and the ability to carry an.

✓ In contrast, many of my tech-savvy friends prefer reading on e-readers like Kindles because of their portability and the ability to carry them.

The fragment 'the ability to carry an.' shows missing article/pronoun and a truncated word. Use 'the ability to carry them' to correctly refer to plural devices. Suggestion: ensure referents are explicit and pronouns agree in number.

× It really depends on the purpose of reading. I need to read intensively when I'm dealing with legal contracts or academic research to avoid, uh, any misinterpretation.

✓ It really depends on the purpose of reading. I need to read intensively when I'm dealing with legal contracts or academic research to avoid any misinterpretation.

The comma after 'avoid' is unnecessary and interruptive. Remove filler 'uh' in formal speech. Suggestion: omit extraneous pauses and punctuation that breaks the verb-object relationship.

× Conversely, when I'm just sleeping through a fashion magazines or comic book, I tend to read more for pleasure and don't pay too much attention.

✓ Conversely, when I'm just skimming through a fashion magazine or a comic book, I tend to read more for pleasure and don't pay too much attention.

Errors: 'sleeping through' is wrong verb choice; correct is 'skimming through'. 'a fashion magazines' mixes singular/plural and wrong article — use 'a fashion magazine'. Also add article 'a' before 'comic book'. Suggestion: use appropriate verb collocations and ensure articles match singular/plural nouns.

× In contrast, many of my tech savvy friends prefer reading on ad readers like Kindles because of their portability and the ability to carry an.

✓ In contrast, many of my tech-savvy friends prefer reading on e-readers like Kindles because of their portability and the ability to carry them.

Original ended with 'an' which is incorrect for referring to plural 'Kindles'. Ensure pronoun 'them' agrees in number with plural noun. Suggestion: match singular/plural forms and pronouns.

× In the past I used to refer detail reading for everything because I didn't want to miss any in information.

✓ In the past I used to prefer detailed reading for everything because I didn't want to miss any information.

Multiple errors: 'refer detail reading' is incorrect; correct is 'prefer detailed reading'. 'Detailed' is adjective modifying 'reading'. 'any in information' contains stray preposition 'in' which should be removed: 'any information'. Suggestion: use 'prefer' with noun phrase 'detailed reading' and remove unnecessary prepositions.

× However, since I started my own business, I would have to master the art of scanning to quickly filter out irrelevant data and focus only the key takeaways to save time.

✓ However, since I started my own business, I have had to master the art of scanning to quickly filter out irrelevant data and focus only on the key takeaways to save time.

Using 'would have to' is inappropriate for an action that became necessary in the past continuing to present. Use present perfect 'have had to' to show necessity from past to present. Also insert preposition 'on' before 'the key takeaways'. Suggestion: use 'have had to' for ongoing obligations and include 'on' in 'focus on the key takeaways'.