阅读— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make your answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details with correct grammar and varied vocabulary. Avoid redundancy (e.g. don’t repeat ‘book’ unnecessarily) and fix grammar (plural nouns and article usage). Use a linking word when adding the second detail.

範例: Yes, I enjoy reading. I usually read in the early morning, mostly science-fiction novels because I like imaginative stories; occasionally I read nonfiction to learn about real events.

建議: Improve grammar and coherence. Begin with a clear preference sentence, then give one specific reason and a linked example. Correct collocations (say “my eyes feel comfortable” or “my eyes get dry”) and remove duplicate words. Use a linking word like ‘because’ or ‘for example’.

範例: I prefer reading on paper because it’s easier on my eyes. For example, when I read on a screen for a long time my eyes get very dry and I feel uncomfortable.

建議: Be more concise and use natural phrasing. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give specific categories and contrast them using a linking word like ‘whereas’ or ‘but’. Use correct collocation ('important information', 'junk mail') and avoid redundancy (‘read’ repeated many times).

範例: I need to read carefully when the information is important — for example, school textbooks or business emails — whereas I skim junk mail because it isn’t important.

建議: Make the sentence grammatically correct and slightly more natural. Use a clear topic sentence then give a concise reason and an example. Replace awkward phrases like ‘any detail on information’ with ‘any important details’ and avoid repetition.

範例: I prefer detailed reading because I don’t want to miss important details, especially in important emails or official documents.

× I often read science fiction novels and also sometimes read nonfiction book.

✓ I often read science fiction novels and also sometimes read nonfiction books.

The noun 'book' should be plural to match 'novels' and the quantifier 'sometimes' implying unspecified multiple instances; use 'books' for general statements about types of reading.

× I prefer to read a book on paper because it is more convenient and my eyes are comfort.

✓ I prefer to read a book on paper because it is more convenient and my eyes are comfortable.

The adjective 'comfortable' should be used to describe the state of 'my eyes.' 'Comfort' is a noun and cannot directly follow 'my eyes are.' Use the adjective form to describe sensation.

× For example, when I read a book on a screen, my eyes are very dry and and I feel discomfort.

✓ For example, when I read a book on a screen, my eyes are very dry and I feel uncomfortable.

There is a duplicated 'and' which is a typo. 'Discomfort' is a noun; to describe a feeling use the adjective 'uncomfortable' or say 'I feel discomfort' but parallel structure is better as 'my eyes are very dry and I feel uncomfortable.'

× I need to read carefully when I read extremely important information, such as my school texts or my business mail, and I don't need to read carefully when I read a junk mail.

✓ I need to read carefully when I read extremely important information, such as my school texts or my business mail, and I don't need to read carefully when I read junk mail.

The expression 'junk mail' is an uncountable or mass noun in this context and does not require the indefinite article 'a.' Removing 'a' makes the phrase natural.

× I prefer detailed reading because I don't want to miss any detail on information, especially very important mail.

✓ I prefer detailed reading because I don't want to miss any details in information, especially very important mail.

Use the plural 'details' when referring to multiple pieces of information. The correct preposition is 'in information' (or better 'in the information') rather than 'on information.' For natural phrasing, 'in the information' or 'in important messages' may be used.