阅读— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and clear. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Avoid unclear or incorrect word choices (e.g. "constituency", "bundle of the knowledge") and grammatical errors. Use linking words like "because" or "for example" to connect ideas and keep answers under five sentences.

範例: Yes, I enjoy reading because it helps me improve my vocabulary and understand different cultures. For example, I recently read a travel memoir that taught me about daily life in Japan and inspired me to try new foods. Reading also relaxes me after a busy day.

建議: Give a clear preference then support it with specific reasons. Correct repetition ("prefer prefer") and grammatical mistakes. Use linking words such as "however" and "when" to contrast situations. Mention a concrete example to make the answer more convincing.

範例: I usually prefer reading paper books because they are easier on my eyes and I enjoy the feel of the pages. However, when I'm in a hurry or traveling, I read on my phone for convenience. For instance, last month I finished a novel on my e-reader during a long flight.

建議: This answer is unclear and off-topic. Start by directly answering when you need to read carefully (e.g. studying, work documents) and when scanning is fine (e.g. messages, simple news). Use clear examples and correct grammar. Keep sentences short and logical with linking words like "when" and "but".

範例: I need to read carefully when I study for exams or read important work documents because I must understand details and avoid mistakes. But I usually skim emails or social media posts when I'm short on time, since they only require a general idea.

建議: Answer directly with a brief reason and give a specific supporting example. Avoid vague phrases and repetition (e.g. "source of the knowledge"). Use linking words like "because" and "for example" to structure the response and correct grammar mistakes.

範例: I prefer detailed reading because it helps me fully understand complex ideas and retain information. For example, when I read textbooks or research articles I take notes and reread difficult sections to make sure I grasp the main arguments.

× Of course, I like reading because it is a good way to enhance reading skills and learn about more the world.

✓ Of course, I like reading because it is a good way to enhance reading skills and learn more about the world.

The preposition 'about' was misplaced before 'more the world'. Correct phrase is 'learn more about the world'. Also 'the' should be before 'world' only. Suggestion: use the fixed word order: 'learn more about the world.'

× However, it offers a constituency and the practice which makes man perfect to read something easily without any hesitation for the long hours.

✓ However, it offers consistency and practice, which help a person become better at reading for long periods without hesitation.

The student used incorrect words and quantifiers: 'constituency' is wrong; likely meant 'consistency'. 'The practice' is awkward; use the uncountable 'practice' or 'practice opportunities'. 'Man' is generic and can be replaced with 'a person'. 'For the long hours' should be 'for long periods'. Suggest replacing inaccurate nouns and adjust quantifiers for natural English.

× So it's really bundle of the knowledge for me.

✓ So it's really a bundle of knowledge for me.

Missing indefinite article 'a' before 'bundle' and 'the knowledge' should be 'knowledge' (uncountable) without 'the'. Use 'a bundle of knowledge' to be grammatically correct.

× Well, I prefer both but most of the time I prefer prefer paper book because it is more convenient rather than the screen.

✓ Well, I prefer both, but most of the time I prefer paper books because they are more convenient than screens.

Pluralization and agreement: 'paper book' should be plural 'paper books' to match 'most of the time' general reference. 'It is' should be 'they are' to agree with plural. Also 'prefer... rather than' is awkward; use 'more convenient than'. Removed duplicate 'prefer'.

× Apart from this, it is beneficial for the eyesight and the physical health.

✓ Apart from this, it is beneficial for eyesight and physical health.

Unnecessary definite articles: 'the eyesight' and 'the physical health' are unnatural here. Use uncountable nouns without articles: 'eyesight' and 'physical health'.

× On the other hand side, when I am hurry, I do not carry with my paper book I often use.

✓ On the other hand, when I am in a hurry, I do not carry my paper book; I often use my phone.

Problems: 'On the other hand side' is redundant; 'in a hurry' requires 'in' and an article. 'do not carry with my paper book' is incorrect word order and auxiliary; use 'do not carry my paper book'. The clause was run-on; separate ideas with a semicolon or period. Added plausible completion 'I often use my phone' to make sense.

× Well, when I feel more uncomfortable and my mind doesn't work well and couldn't adapt to the things, I feel more nervous and stressed on the situations.

✓ Well, when I feel uncomfortable and my mind doesn't work well or cannot adapt to things, I feel more nervous and stressed in those situations.

Redundant 'more' before 'uncomfortable' and 'nervous'. 'Couldn't' should be present 'cannot' to match 'when I feel' (present). 'Adapt to the things' should be 'adapt to things'. Preposition 'on the situations' is wrong; use 'in those situations'.

× I did not concentrate on my reading carefully and learn more about not the things.

✓ I do not concentrate on my reading carefully and do not learn much from the material.

Tense: 'did not' (past) conflicts with present description; use present 'do not'. 'Learn more about not the things' is ungrammatical; replace with 'do not learn much from the material' for clarity and correct collocation.

× So it's not the.

✓ So it's not effective.

Fragment: 'So it's not the.' is incomplete. Provide a completing adjective like 'effective' to convey meaning. Suggest avoiding sentence fragments and ensuring a noun or adjective completes 'it'.

× Yes, I prefer detailed reading because it is the way I collect the knowledge and books are also a good source of the knowledge and the world what type of the situations surrounded us.

✓ Yes, I prefer detailed reading because it is the way I collect knowledge, and books are also a good source of information about the world and the situations that surround us.

Unnecessary definite articles ('the knowledge'); use 'knowledge' or 'information'. 'the world what type of the situations surrounded us' is ungrammatical: rephrase to 'about the world and the situations that surround us'. Use present simple 'surround' to match general truth.

× Books also teach us the difficulty time lessons which is a crucial for us.

✓ Books also teach us lessons from difficult times, which are crucial for us.

Word order and form: 'difficulty time lessons' should be 'lessons from difficult times'. 'Which is a crucial' wrong number and article: use plural 'which are crucial'. Ensure noun-verb agreement 'lessons... are'.