阅读— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cải thiện câu trả lời bằng cách nói rõ ràng, ngắn gọn và dùng cấu trúc chủ đề + lý do + ví dụ. Tránh tiếng lấp đầy (umm, hmm) và lặp từ. Thêm một câu ví dụ cụ thể để làm cho câu trả lời tự nhiên và đầy đủ trong tối đa 3–4 câu.

範例: No, I don't really enjoy reading. I prefer watching the news on TV because I find it easier to follow when I can see visuals and hear explanations. For example, I watch evening news to catch up quickly on current events without having to sit and read long articles.

建議: Trả lời chưa đúng trọng tâm — câu hỏi hỏi về đọc trên giấy hay màn hình, nhưng bạn trả lời về xem tin tức. Sửa lại để trả lời trực tiếp: nêu lựa chọn (paper/screen), lý do cụ thể và một ví dụ. Loại bỏ lỗi ngữ pháp như "not who not who doesn't" và giữ tối đa 3 câu.

範例: I prefer reading on a screen rather than on paper because I can adjust the font size and access many articles quickly. For instance, I often read news on my laptop or phone since it's more convenient when I'm commuting.

建議: Cần tổ chức câu rõ ràng: nêu hai tình huống khác nhau và giải thích ngắn gọn cho mỗi tình huống. Tránh lỗi ngữ pháp (e.g., "an important information" nên là "important information") và loại bỏ tiếng lấp đầy. Bổ sung một ví dụ cụ thể cho mỗi trường hợp để rõ ràng hơn.

範例: I read carefully when I need to find important information, such as instructions or legal details, because I don't want to miss anything. But when I'm reading for general pleasure or to get the main idea of a novel, I often skim to save time.

建議: Câu trả lời ngắn nhưng lặp và có nhiều tiếng lấp đầy. Nên mở rộng bằng 1–2 câu để giải thích lý do và đưa ví dụ. Sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp: 'detailed reading' là tốt nhưng nên viết đầy đủ: 'detailed reading' và tránh lặp từ 'detailed' quá nhiều.

範例: I prefer detailed reading because I don't want to miss important information, especially for study or work-related texts. For example, when I read research articles or manuals I read slowly and take notes to fully understand the content.

× Because I'm not a person who can concentrate on reading.

✓ Because I'm not a person who can concentrate on reading.

No change needed. Sentence is correct. The relative clause 'who can concentrate on reading' correctly refers to 'a person'. Suggestion: None.

× So I choose watching.

✓ So I choose to watch.

Original uses verb form 'watching' incorrectly after 'choose'. After 'choose' the infinitive 'to watch' is standard in English. Use 'to watch' to indicate preference of an action. Suggestion: say 'I choose to watch' or 'I prefer watching' if using the -ing form intentionally.

× I prefer watching news on a screen because I'm a person who not who doesn't concentrate on reading.

✓ I prefer watching news on a screen because I'm a person who doesn't concentrate on reading.

The original contains redundant and incorrect pronoun/word sequence 'who not who doesn't'. Remove the extra 'not' so the relative clause correctly negates 'concentrate'. Suggestion: use 'who doesn't concentrate on reading'.

× So I choose watching news on TV or laptop.

✓ So I choose to watch news on TV or on my laptop.

As above, use the infinitive 'to watch' after 'choose'. Also include the article or possessive with 'laptop' ('my laptop') or use 'a laptop'. Suggestion: 'on TV or on my laptop'.

× When I need to find an important information, I will read carefully because I don't want to miss uh, any details umm.

✓ When I need to find important information, I read carefully because I don't want to miss any details.

'Information' is an uncountable noun so it should not use the article 'an'. Also, use present simple 'I read' for habitual actions rather than 'I will read'. Remove filler words 'uh/umm' in prepared speech. Suggestion: 'When I need to find important information, I read carefully because I don't want to miss any details.'

× But when I read a book ranro understanding I will uh skip or.

✓ But when I read a book for understanding, I skip parts I don't need.

Original contains gibberish 'ranro' and incomplete clause 'I will uh skip or.' Use 'for understanding' to express purpose and present simple 'I skip' for habitual action. Complete the sentence with a clear object: 'parts I don't need.' Remove fillers. Suggestion: 'But when I read a book for understanding, I skip parts I don't need.'

× I prefer detail reading because uh, I don't want to miss uh, any detailed information, uh, I think important, umm.

✓ I prefer detailed reading because I don't want to miss any important information.

Use the adjective 'detailed' before 'reading' or better 'detailed reading'. 'Any detailed information' is wordy and 'I think important' is misplaced; instead use 'any important information'. Remove fillers. Suggestion: 'I prefer detailed reading because I don't want to miss any important information.'