阅读— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Improve grammatical accuracy, reduce repetition, and make the response more concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Fix verb tense and article errors and avoid repeating words.

範例: Yes, I do. Reading helps me relax after a long day of studying, and I especially enjoy novels because they introduce ideas and experiences I don’t get from my regular lessons.

建議: Make the contrast clearer and correct tense and word choice errors. Use linking phrases (for one thing, and for another) and keep sentences concise. Remove vague phrasing like 'on my own then so' and replace with a precise reason.

範例: I prefer reading on paper. For one thing, I enjoy the smell and feel of a new book, and for another, printed pages are easier on my eyes since I already spend a lot of time looking at screens.

建議: Clarify vocabulary and grammar (e.g., 'read the gist' not 'read the grasp'), fix verb forms, and structure the reply with a clear contrast using linking words like 'however' or 'but'. Be specific about examples of important documents.

範例: I skim material when I only need the gist, such as casual news articles, so I read quickly. However, I read carefully when it concerns important matters—for example, an admissions notice or exam instructions—to avoid missing crucial details.

建議: Avoid repetition and awkward phrasing. Provide one clear reason and one specific example, using linking words like 'because' and 'so'. Keep within 3–4 sentences and correct small errors (e.g., 'finish a book' and 'in most situations').

範例: I prefer scanning because it lets me grasp the main ideas quickly, so I can read more material and have time for other activities. For instance, when researching a topic, I scan several articles to find the most relevant information before reading one in detail.

× Definitely yes. It helped me relax after a whole day study and I I enjoy novel particularly because I can learn new knowledge which I can't learn from the regular lessons.

✓ Definitely, yes. It helps me relax after a whole day of studying, and I enjoy novels in particular because I can learn things I can't learn from regular lessons.

Mixed past and present tenses: The student is expressing a habitual preference, so present simple is required (helps, enjoy). 'Whole day study' is incorrect noun phrase; use 'a whole day of studying'. 'I I' is a duplication and removed. 'novel' should be plural 'novels' when speaking generally. 'new knowledge' is wordy; 'things' or 'new things' is more natural. Use 'from regular lessons' without 'the'.

× On paper, definitely. On the one hand I really enjoy the smell of new books and on the other hand it is better for my eyes.

✓ On paper, definitely. On the one hand, I really enjoy the smell of new books, and on the other hand, it is better for my eyes.

Punctuation and article usage: The sentence itself is grammatically acceptable, but needs commas after introductory phrases for clarity. No article error beyond that; correction adds commas to improve readability.

× I think my screen time was so long that I didn't want to spend more time on my own then so.

✓ I think my screen time is so long that I don't want to spend more time on my devices, so I prefer paper.

Tense mismatch: 'think' expresses present opinion, so subordinate clause should use present tense ('is', 'don't want'). 'on my own then so' is unclear and redundant; replaced with 'on my devices' or 'on screens' and 'so I prefer paper' to convey reason. 'then so' is ungrammatical and removed.

× When I read the grasp or just the casual news, I just want to get the main idea.

✓ When I read for general understanding or just casual news, I only want to get the main idea.

Incorrect phrase 'read the grasp' is ungrammatical; use 'read for general understanding'. 'casual news' is fine but needs 'casual news' no article. Use 'only' instead of repeated 'just' to avoid redundancy. Verb forms adjusted to match habitual action.

× So I usually read faster but when it come to the admission notice about a exam, I would like to read it carefully.

✓ So I usually read faster, but when it comes to an admission notice about an exam, I like to read it carefully.

'come' should be 'comes' to agree with third-person singular 'it'. Article errors: 'a exam' should be 'an exam'. 'would like to' is acceptable but 'like to' better matches habitual action. Added commas for clarity.

× Scanning, of course, because it can gain me a sense of satisfaction because I can finish finish a book quickly and I have more time to turn to other things.

✓ Scanning, of course, because it gives me a sense of satisfaction since I can finish a book quickly and have more time for other things.

'can gain me a sense' is unnatural; use 'gives me a sense'. Repeated word 'finish finish' removed. 'turn to other things' is acceptable but 'have more time for other things' is more natural. Removed redundant 'I' before 'have'.

× And in most of the situation I just need to grab the main idea of the article.

✓ And in most situations I just need to grasp the main idea of the article.

'in most of the situation' is ungrammatical; use 'in most situations' or 'in most of the situations'. 'grab the main idea' is informal but acceptable; 'grasp the main idea' is more appropriate. Added comma not necessary; kept concise.