阅读— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (umm), and give one specific reason or example to support your answer. Use correct grammar (e.g., “reading is my main way of learning” not “core style”). Limit to about 2–3 sentences.

範例: Yes, I enjoy reading because it is my main way of learning new things. For example, I often read articles and books to improve my knowledge for my studies.

建議: Answer directly and use accurate vocabulary (paper vs screen). Avoid unrelated phrases (e.g., “relaxing on the skin”). Give a short reason with one clear supporting detail and a linking word like “because” or “so”.

範例: I prefer reading on paper rather than on a screen because paper is easier on my eyes. For example, when I read printed books I can read longer without feeling tired.

建議: Provide a clear topic sentence and a specific example. Use correct tense and grammar (e.g., “When I have an exam, I read carefully because mistakes lower my score”). Avoid fillers and redundancy; keep to 2–3 sentences and use a linking word like “because” or “so”.

範例: I need to read carefully when I prepare for exams because even small mistakes can lower my score. However, I don’t read carefully when I skim news headlines for a quick update.

建議: Be clearer and use precise vocabulary (scanning vs detailed reading). Start with a direct answer and explain when you switch to detailed reading, using linking words such as “but” or “however.” Avoid unclear phrases like “scare us” or “rating.”

範例: I prefer scanning because it helps me get the main idea quickly. However, if the text contains important or technical details, I switch to detailed reading to understand everything accurately.

× Yes, I like reading because I think reading is umm is my core style, is my core study and I love to learn and reading skill.

✓ Yes, I like reading because I think it is my main way of learning, and I love to improve my reading skills.

The original sentence misuses adjectives and nouns (core style, core study) and has awkward repetition. Replace 'core style'/'core study' with 'main way of learning' and change 'reading skill' to plural 'reading skills' for natural English. Also remove filler words and repeated 'is' to make a clear sentence.

× Actually, I prefer leading on paper than skiing because for me it's a real and natural and comfortable on my eyes when I'm reading and I feel relaxing on the skin.

✓ Actually, I prefer reading on paper to reading on a screen because for me it feels more natural and comfortable for my eyes, and I feel more relaxed.

Several preposition errors: use 'prefer A to B' rather than 'prefer A than'. 'Leading' and 'skiing' are incorrect word choices; use 'reading' and 'screen'. Also use 'comfortable for my eyes' not 'comfortable on my eyes' and avoid 'relaxing on the skin' — say 'feel more relaxed' instead.

× For me, uh, when I reading, when I have a exam examinal, I read carefully because uh, it's made me when make me wrong, I get the score too low, right?

✓ For me, when I am reading or when I have an exam, I read carefully because if I make mistakes, my score will be too low.

Errors include incorrect verb form 'when I reading' (needs present continuous 'when I am reading'), article error 'a exam' (should be 'an exam'), and awkward clause 'it's made me when make me wrong' replaced with conditional 'if I make mistakes, my score will be too low.' Tense consistency and correct article use are applied.

× I prefer scanning because I seem overall the rating, but sometimes I have to scare us not scan because it's a A cause, a hating or important detail, just S.

✓ I prefer scanning because I can get an overall idea of the text, but sometimes I have to read more carefully because there are important details.

The original contains many incorrect words and adverb/adjective misuse ('seem overall the rating', 'scare us', 'a hating'). Replace with natural phrases: 'get an overall idea' and 'read more carefully' and 'important details.' This corrects word choice and clarifies meaning.