阅读— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and structured: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and give a specific example. Also prefer precise wording (e.g., "fiction and nonfiction" then a specific favorite). Limit to 2–3 sentences.

範例: Yes, I enjoy reading, especially both fiction and nonfiction. For example, I love novels and nature-themed books about forests because they combine storytelling with vivid descriptions of wildlife.

建議: Begin with a direct answer, then give one clear reason using linking words. Correct grammar (subject-verb, tense) and avoid repetition. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

範例: I prefer reading on paper because screens strain my eyes and make it hard to read for long periods. Therefore I usually read novels and textbooks in print to avoid discomfort.

建議: Answer directly, then explain with one specific example and use linking words (e.g., "because", "however"). Fix negatives and remove hesitations. Keep it clear and concise.

範例: I need to read carefully when the material is about real events because I want to understand facts and details. However, when I'm reading light or fictional stories for fun, I tend to skim and focus less on every detail.

建議: Start with a short direct statement, then contrast the two modes with a clear linking word (e.g., "but"), and give a brief specific example. Remove fillers and fix grammar errors.

範例: Generally, I prefer detailed reading because I enjoy immersing myself in books. But when I need to find a specific fact or quote, I scan the page quickly to locate the information.

× Well yes, I do like reading especially books related to fiction and nonfiction stories.

✓ Well, yes, I do like reading, especially books related to fiction and nonfiction.

The phrase 'stories' after 'fiction and nonfiction' is redundant and awkward. Also add commas for clarity. Use of article not required here; main issue is article redundancy and wording. Suggestion: remove 'stories' to make phrase natural.

× And I'm I'm like I love to read book related to mostly forest stories.

✓ I love to read books, mostly stories about forests.

Original has singular 'book' but means general plural, so this is a singular/plural issue (use 'books'). Also phrasing 'related to mostly forest stories' is incorrect order. Suggestion: use plural 'books' and rephrase to 'mostly stories about forests' for natural English.

× When I like to read on paper, I don't like read on screen because that hurt my vision and that make strain on my eyes.

✓ I like to read on paper; I don't like reading on a screen because that hurts my vision and strains my eyes.

Problems: missing gerund after 'like' ('reading on a screen'), incorrect article 'a screen' preferred, subject-verb agreement 'that hurt' should be 'that hurts', and 'make strain' is incorrect collocation — use 'strains my eyes'. Suggestions: use gerund, correct agreement, and natural collocation 'strains my eyes'.

× So I cannot continue reading for hours on screen, but I can continue reading for hours on paper.

✓ So I cannot continue reading for hours on a screen, but I can continue reading for hours on paper.

Add article 'a' before 'screen' for natural collocation. Tense is fine; this fixes article use.

× When I when whenever I'm reading stories related to some real incidents then I always concentrate on that story and I read it carefully.

✓ Whenever I'm reading stories about real incidents, I always concentrate on the story and read it carefully.

Remove redundant 'When I when' and avoid unnecessary 'then'. Use 'about' rather than 'related to' for conciseness. Keep present continuous 'I'm reading' and simple present 'I concentrate' consistent.

× But whenever I'm reading random stories then I don't not concentrate on them.

✓ But whenever I'm reading random stories, I don't concentrate on them.

Double negative 'don't not' is incorrect; use single negation 'don't'. Remove 'then' which is unnecessary. Maintain comma for clarity.

× As I'm a bookworm, I my I prefer to read books in detail, but whenever I'm looking for something from a pair or from book that that time I usually scan the things whatever I have to find out from that passage.

✓ As I'm a bookworm, I prefer to read books in detail, but when I'm looking for something in a paper or a book, I usually scan the passage to find what I need.

Original contains hesitations ('I my I'), repetition ('that that'), wrong word 'pair' instead of 'paper', missing articles, and awkward clause 'scan the things whatever I have to find out'. Suggestions: remove hesitations, correct 'paper', add articles, and rephrase to 'scan the passage to find what I need' for clarity and correct structure.