阅读— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and fluent. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (uh, I), correct grammar ("it makes me relaxed"), and give one brief supporting reason with a linking word. Keep to no more than 3–4 sentences.

範例: No, I don’t particularly enjoy reading. I often get sleepy when I read, which makes it hard to finish books, so I prefer visual media like videos and films because they keep me engaged.

建議: Improve grammar and clarity. Use a clear topic sentence, correct article use and verb forms ("on the screen" → "on a screen" or "on my phone"; "it gives"), and add a short reason with a linking phrase such as "because" or "because of".

範例: I prefer reading on a screen, especially my phone, because it is convenient. For example, I often read short articles and news apps, which give me quick information and useful knowledge.

建議: Organize the answer with clear contrast using linking words ("when...but", "however"). Correct grammar ("during an exam", "you have to read the questions carefully", "if a book is not interesting you may skim it"). Provide one clear example for each situation.

範例: You need to read carefully during an exam because misunderstanding a question can lead to wrong answers. However, if a book or article is not interesting, you can skim it to get the main ideas rather than reading every detail.

建議: Be direct and avoid repetition. Use correct terminology ("scan" not "skin"), and structure: state preference, then give a reason and an example with linking words ("because", "for example"). Keep sentences concise and grammatical.

範例: I prefer detailed reading when the topic is interesting because I want to fully understand it and learn from it. For example, if an article covers a hobby I enjoy, I read slowly and take notes to remember important points.

× No, I do not, uh, I do not really like reading because when I start reading, I fall asleep and it's make me relax as well and I could finish reading.

✓ No, I do not. I do not really like reading because when I start reading, I fall asleep and it makes me relaxed, so I cannot finish reading.

The sentence has incorrect verb forms and tense consistency. 'it's make' is wrong: the correct third-person singular present is 'it makes'. 'make me relax' should be 'makes me relaxed' or 'relaxes me'. 'I could finish reading' is inconsistent with present tense and intended meaning; use 'I cannot finish reading'. Also run-on clauses were split for clarity.

× I, I like more, uh, visual things, watching things.

✓ I prefer visual things, like watching videos.

Awkward pronoun and phrasing: 'I, I like more' is repetitive; 'like more' should be 'prefer'. 'visual things, watching things' is redundant; replace with 'visual things, like watching videos' for clarity.

× Oh, I like to read in the screen, especially in my phone.

✓ Oh, I like to read on the screen, especially on my phone.

Use 'on' with 'screen' and 'phone' when referring to content displayed on a device. 'in the screen' and 'in my phone' are incorrect preposition choices.

× Sometimes I read small articles and it's it's gives me a lot of information and knowledge as well.

✓ Sometimes I read short articles and they give me a lot of information and knowledge as well.

'it's it's gives' is incorrect repetition and 'gives' does not agree with plural subject 'articles'. Replace with 'they give'. Also 'small articles' is better as 'short articles'.

× Well, I think you have to read carefully when you are in a maybe in exam, when you write in in the exam you had to read carefully your questions and but when when is not Maybe you read an article or book without interesting like a book so you don't have to focus on.

✓ Well, I think you have to read carefully when you are in an exam. When you write an exam, you have to read your questions carefully. But if you are reading an article or a book that is not interesting, you do not have to focus as much.

Multiple article and sentence-structure errors: use 'an exam' not 'in exam' or 'a maybe in exam'. 'Write in in the exam you had to' is incorrect tense and articles; use 'When you write an exam, you have to read your questions carefully.' Also add 'an' before 'article' and 'a book'. Fixed tense ('had to' -> 'have to') and clarified meaning.

× Sometimes I like skin. I mean I like detailed reading.

✓ Sometimes I like skimming. I mean I like detailed reading.

The student likely meant 'skim' or 'skimming', not 'skin'. Use the gerund 'skimming' or the verb 'skim' in context. Correcting to 'skimming' makes the contrast clear with 'detailed reading'.

× So if it is really interesting, I would like to focus on more reading and take more advance and knowledge from the reading.

✓ If it is really interesting, I would like to focus more on reading and gain more knowledge from it.

Awkward word order and incorrect word choice: 'focus on more reading' should be 'focus more on reading'. 'take more advance' is incorrect; use 'gain more knowledge'. Simplify and correct word order for natural English.

× So if it is really interesting, I detailed reading.

✓ So if it is really interesting, I do detailed reading.

Missing auxiliary verb for present simple: 'I detailed reading' is incorrect. Use 'I do detailed reading' or 'I read in detail'. Ensures correct present tense structure.