走路— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and correct minor grammar and word choice errors. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition (e.g., "I like").

範例: Yes, I walk a lot. I usually walk to university and explore nearby streets when I have free time, so walking helps me discover new cafés and save money on transport.

建議: Fix grammar and fluency issues and combine fragments into a single coherent sentence. Use a linking phrase to give a specific example or reason.

範例: Yes, we went outside almost every day when I was a child because my parents encouraged outdoor play, so we often explored parks and rode bikes together.

建議: Improve clarity and vocabulary, correct errors, and use linking words to structure the answer. Give specific reasons and an example rather than repeating phrases.

範例: People walk in parks mainly to relieve stress and get light exercise; moreover, the fresh air and greenery improve mood, so many go there to relax after work.

建議: Remove hesitations and repetitions, and add a specific detail about where or why to make the answer more vivid. Use a concise topic sentence plus one support sentence with a linking word.

範例: I would like to take a long walk in New York City because I enjoy its lively neighborhoods; for example, I loved walking across Central Park and exploring different boroughs when I visited.

建議: Combine short sentences for fluency and add sequencing words to make the narrative smoother. Include a brief reflection or result to enrich the content.

範例: Lately I went to the biggest park in my city with friends; we walked for about four hours, enjoyed the scenery, and even bought a few souvenirs from small shops afterward.

× Yes, I do walk a lot because I like to stroll around the city.

✓ Yes, I walk a lot because I like strolling around the city.

The auxiliary 'do' is unnecessary in affirmative present simple statements; use the simple present 'I walk'. Also, when describing general enjoyment of an activity, the gerund 'strolling' is more natural after 'like'. Suggestion: use simple present for habits and 'like' + gerund for activities ('I walk' and 'I like strolling').

× I like to commute to new places by walking.

✓ I like commuting to new places by walking.

Both 'like to commute' and 'like commuting' are acceptable, but in conversational English 'like commuting' (gerund) fits better with 'by walking'. Suggestion: use 'like' + gerund for habitual preferences to sound more natural.

× For example, I usually walk to university and the way out.

✓ For example, I usually walk to university and around the surrounding area.

The phrase 'the way out' is unclear and ungrammatical in this context. The sentence needs a clear object or phrase describing where you walk. Suggestion: replace the unclear phrase with a meaningful noun phrase like 'around the surrounding area' or 'back home'.

× Yes, my family and I were very active and we were going outside almost every day to. Walk around.

✓ Yes, my family and I were very active and we went outside almost every day to walk around.

The original uses 'were going' unnecessarily; simple past 'went' is correct for repeated past actions. Also the sentence was split incorrectly with a stray period. Suggestion: use simple past for habitual actions in the past and keep the verb phrase together ('went outside to walk around').

× I think people stroll in parks mainly to relieve the stress and fall light exercises and I think it ha it helps them.

✓ I think people stroll in parks mainly to relieve stress and do light exercise; I think it helps them.

'Relieve the stress' should be 'relieve stress' (no article). 'Fall light exercises' is incorrect; use 'do light exercise' or 'get some light exercise'. Also 'ha it helps' appears as a typo; correct to 'I think it helps them.' Suggestion: remove unnecessary articles, use correct verb collocations ('do exercise'), and fix typos.

× If I had a chance I would love to visit and walk around in New York City.

✓ If I had the chance, I would love to visit and walk around New York City.

Use 'the chance' (definite article) in this conditional and include a comma after the conditional clause. 'Walk around in New York City' is acceptable, but 'walk around New York City' is more natural. Suggestion: add 'the', include comma after the conditional, and omit extra preposition.

× I've been there couple times and uh, always enjoyed my strolls.

✓ I've been there a couple of times and have always enjoyed my strolls.

'Couple times' needs the article 'a' and often 'of' ('a couple of times'). Also 'always enjoyed' should be linked to the present perfect 'have always enjoyed' to match 'I've been'. Suggestion: use 'a couple of times' and maintain consistent perfect tense ('have always enjoyed').

× Lately I've been to the biggest park in my city.

✓ Lately I've been to the biggest park in my city.

This sentence is grammatically acceptable. No correction needed. Explanation: 'I've been to' correctly uses the present perfect for a recent experience when the exact time is not specified.

× I've been there with my friends.

✓ I went there with my friends.

Although 'I've been there with my friends' is possible, in response to 'Where did you go for a walk lately?' the question uses past simple 'did' so simple past 'I went' is more appropriate and consistent. Suggestion: match the past simple question with past simple answer for tense consistency.

× We walked around 4 hours, enjoyed our stroll, bought some souvenirs in small shops.

✓ We walked for about four hours, enjoyed our stroll, and bought some souvenirs in small shops.

When expressing duration, use 'for' + duration ('for four hours') and write out numbers under ten in conversation. Also add 'and' to join clauses. Suggestion: use 'for' with time periods and include coordinating conjunctions for fluency.