走路— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答は話題に触れていますが、質問「Do you walk a lot?」に直接的で簡潔なトピック文が必要です。また、意味の通った理由や具体例を短く整理して述べると良いです。不要な情報（過去のサッカーの詳細など）は簡潔にまとめ、接続語（because, so, therefore, however）を使って論理的に繋げてください。発音や文法の誤り（"work a lot"は不適切、"I often walk a lot"など）にも注意を払ってください。文は最大5文以内に収めましょう。

範例: Yes, I walk regularly, especially in the evenings, because I enjoy staying active. For example, after work I usually walk for 30 minutes around my neighborhood to relax and use my energy. This habit helps me stay fit and clear my mind.

建議: 回答は過去の習慣を述べていますが、時制と文法（"I didn't use to"または"I didn't used to"）に注意が必要です。トピック文を明確にし、理由を一つか二つの具体例で支えると良いです。接続語（however, because, so）を用いて流れを良くし、冗長な表現（"just walking"の繰り返し）を避けてください。文は5文以内に保ちます。

範例: No, I didn't use to go for walks often when I was a child. I preferred playing football and hanging out with friends because those activities were more exciting. However, I've started walking more now for exercise and relaxation.

建議: 回答は理由を挙げていますが、文法と語彙の選択が不正確です（"while working"は文脈に合わない、"in the park makes" の主語一致の誤り）。理由を2つ程度に絞り、具体的な説明や結果を付け加えて接続詞でつなぐと良いです。最後の文が未完了なので、完全な文で終えるようにしてください。

範例: People like walking in parks because the greenery and open space help them relax and reduce stress. Also, parks provide a pleasant place to chat with family or friends, which strengthens social bonds and makes exercise more enjoyable.

建議: 答えが具体性を欠き、混乱した表現や文法の誤りが多いです（"in the airport in Switzerland"は不自然、"may that will makes me feel"は意味不明）。行きたい場所を正確に特定し、理由を一つか二つの明確なポイントで述べ、感情や期待される効果を簡潔に説明してください。接続語と文法（主語と動詞の一致、時制）を整える必要があります。

範例: I would like to take a long walk in the Swiss Alps because the mountain scenery is breathtaking. Walking there would let me enjoy fresh air and peaceful views, and I think it would make me feel refreshed and inspired.

建議: 回答は具体的で直接的ですが、いくつかの文法的な修正が必要です（"I didn't take a walk for five days"は自然だが"a lot of job"は不可）。理由と計画（なぜ歩かなかったか、いつ歩くつもりか）を明確に述べ、接続語（because, so, however）でつなげるとよいです。文は簡潔に保ってください。

範例: I haven't walked for five days because I've been busy submitting job applications and finishing homework. However, I'll go for a long walk tomorrow since I have more free time and want to relax.

× Yes, I often work a lot 'cause I love working.

✓ Yes, I often walk a lot because I love walking.

The student used 'work' where context requires 'walk'. This is a lexical choice rather than a grammatical tense error; replace 'work' with 'walk' to match the question about walking. Also avoid colloquial contraction 'cause' in formal answers and use 'because'. Be mindful of vocabulary accuracy; read the question carefully and use the verb that matches the topic.

× When I was a kid I played football, umm, very, very hard.

✓ When I was a kid I used to play football very, very often.

The original 'played ... very, very hard' is grammatically acceptable but 'hard' can imply intensity rather than frequency. To express a habitual action in the past, use 'used to' or 'often'. Use 'used to play' or 'played ... often' for clarity. Also remove filler 'umm' in a polished response.

× So I have stamina now.

✓ So I have stamina now.

This sentence is grammatically correct. It uses present simple appropriately to describe a current state. No change needed; keep concise.

× And also I don't often play football now, so I have a lot of energy and I would like to use it.

✓ Also, I don't often play football now, so I have a lot of energy and I would like to use it.

Use 'also' at the beginning without 'and' for smoother style. The tense and verbs are appropriate: 'don't often play' (present simple negative) and 'would like to use' (polite desire). Remove redundant 'And' and tighten phrasing.

× Actually, when I was a kid, I don't used to walk a lot.

✓ Actually, when I was a kid, I didn't use to walk a lot.

When referring to past habits, use 'used to' in affirmative and 'didn't use to' in negative. 'Don't used to' mixes present tense auxiliary with past participle and is incorrect. Use 'didn't use to' for past negative habits.

× I prefer hanging out with my friend or playing football with them because it was more enjoyable than walking, just walking.

✓ I preferred hanging out with my friends or playing football with them because it was more enjoyable than just walking.

Consistency of tense: speaker is describing past preference, so 'preferred' fits. Use plural 'friends' if 'them' is used; otherwise change pronoun. 'Just walking' should come after 'more enjoyable than' for clarity. Ensure pronoun-number agreement: 'friends' with 'them'.

× But now I am walking.

✓ But now I walk more.

Use present simple to describe habitual action: 'I walk more' or 'I go for walks now.' 'I am walking' suggests an action happening at this moment. Choose a form that matches intended meaning of a current habit.

× I say people often enjoy landscapes and chatting with their family or friends while working.

✓ I think people often enjoy the scenery and chatting with their family or friends while walking.

Use 'think' instead of 'say' for opinion. 'Landscapes' is better expressed as 'scenery' in this context. 'While working' is incorrect contextually; the intended activity is 'walking'. Also add 'the' before 'scenery' is optional but natural. Ensure preposition 'while' is followed by the correct -ing verb.

× I think in the park makes people feel relaxed and.

✓ I think being in the park makes people feel relaxed.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and a trailing 'and'. Use 'being in the park' or 'being at the park' as the subject, followed by 'makes people feel relaxed.' Remove the stray 'and' and ensure complete clause structure.

× I'd like to take a long walk in the airport in Switzerland because these landscapes are so beautiful.

✓ I'd like to take a long walk in the Alps in Switzerland because the scenery is so beautiful.

'A long walk in the airport' is illogical; choose a location like 'the Alps' or 'the countryside.' Use 'scenery' instead of 'landscapes' for natural views. 'These' should match a mentioned noun; use 'the scenery' for general reference. Ensure vocabulary fits context.

× I guess so I couldn't stop walking because I'd like to see more and more landscapes that may that will makes me feel.

✓ I guess I couldn't stop walking because I'd like to see more and more scenery that makes me feel relaxed.

Multiple issues: remove redundant 'so', use 'I guess' not 'I guess so' here, and 'that will makes' mixes modal and subject-verb agreement. Use 'that makes' (singular 'scenery' or 'that make' if plural). Also complete the idea with 'feel relaxed' or another adjective. Keep verb forms consistent.

× Actually, I didn't take a walk for five days because I had a lot of job like submitting job applications and some homework assignments.

✓ Actually, I haven't taken a walk for five days because I had a lot of work, like submitting job applications and some homework assignments.

If five days extends to the present, use present perfect 'haven't taken'. 'A lot of job' is incorrect; use 'a lot of work' or 'many jobs' depending on meaning. Use 'work' for tasks like applications and homework. Keep tense consistency: present perfect for a period continuing to present.

× But tomorrow I would like to go for a walk because I have plenty of time.

✓ But tomorrow I'd like to go for a walk because I'll have plenty of time.

Use 'I'll have' to indicate a future condition. 'I would like' is polite but could be 'I'd like'; keep 'I'll have' to explain why tomorrow is suitable. Ensure the time reference is future for the reason.