走路— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Give a direct, grammatically correct short answer first, then add one or two clear supporting details. Use correct verb forms (present simple for habits) and avoid redundancy. Keep it within 2–3 sentences and use linking words like "but" or "however."

範例: No, I don't walk much at the moment because I recently left my job and spend most days at home. However, I sometimes go to a nearby park with a lake for a short walk because it is a beautiful and calming place.

建議: Start with a clear past-tense topic sentence, then give specific examples. Use correct past tense forms and linking words like "for example" or "sometimes". Keep sentences concise (max 3).

範例: Yes, I did. For example, I often played outside with my friends after school, and sometimes my parents and I went for a walk after dinner to relax and enjoy the fresh air.

建議: Provide a clear main idea and then two specific reasons with correct grammar and linking words (e.g., "because," "also"). Avoid repetition and incorrect noun/verb forms ("fresh air" is uncountable, use "refreshing").

範例: People like walking in parks because they are attractive and peaceful. For example, parks have many flowers and trees that create a pleasant atmosphere, and the fresh air and open space help people feel refreshed and energetic.

建議: Answer the hypothetical clearly using conditional forms, then add a brief reason. Use correct verb forms (would + base verb) and avoid trailing conjunctions. Limit to 2–3 sentences with linking words like "because" or "so."

範例: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk in the city park with the big lake because the path around the water is peaceful. I often walk there with friends when I have spare time, and it helps us relax.

建議: Give a direct past-time answer and add one or two specific details in past tense. Use consistent past tense (e.g., "made me feel happy") and avoid repetition. Keep it to 2–3 sentences and use linking words like "during" or "where."

範例: Last month I went for a walk in the park by the lake. During my visit I saw many fishermen along the shore, which made the trip pleasant and relaxed.

× No I don't because I quit my job and I stayed at home for the whole day.

✓ No, I didn't because I had quit my job and stayed at home for the whole day.

The speaker is talking about a past situation; 'don't' is present negative and conflicts with 'quit' and 'stayed'. Use past tense 'didn't' and past perfect 'had quit' to show the quitting happened before staying at home. Also add a comma after 'No'. Suggestion: Use consistent past-tense forms; use past perfect when referencing an action that occurred before another past action.

× I don't went out to work but sometimes I would went out to a park with a lake that was a beautiful place.

✓ I didn't go out to work, but sometimes I would go to a park with a lake that was a beautiful place.

Mixing present auxiliary 'do' with past main verb 'went' is incorrect. For past negative use 'didn't' + base verb 'go'. For habitual past conditional use 'would' + base verb 'go', not 'went'. Also add commas for clarity. Suggestion: Use 'didn't go' for past negatives and 'would go' for habitual past actions.

× When I was a child I'd like to went out to play with my friends or sometimes I after dinner I would went out with my parents to have a walk.

✓ When I was a child I liked to go out to play with my friends, or sometimes after dinner I would go out with my parents to have a walk.

'I'd like' (would like) is not correct for past habitual; use 'liked' for past. 'Went' should be base form after 'to' (to go) and after 'would' use base form 'go'. Also reposition 'after dinner' and add commas. Suggestion: Use simple past 'liked' for past preferences and 'would go' or 'went' for habitual past actions; use base form after 'to' and 'would'.

× It will helps us to feel relaxed and happy.

✓ It helped us to feel relaxed and happy.

Context refers to past events, so use past tense 'helped'. Also 'helps' does not agree with auxiliary 'will'—if talking about future, use 'will help' (not 'will helps'). Here past is appropriate. Suggestion: Maintain consistent tense; use 'helped' for past actions or 'will help' for future, and with 'will' use base verb.

× Yes I did. When I was a child I'd like to went out to play with my friends or sometimes I after dinner I would went out with my parents to have a walk.

✓ Yes, I did. When I was a child I liked to go out to play with my friends, or sometimes after dinner I would go out with my parents to have a walk.

Same sentence repeated; needed past tense 'liked' and base form 'go' after 'to' and 'would'. Also add commas for clarity. Suggestion: See earlier suggestion on using simple past and base verb forms.

× Well, because parks are very beautiful. There are a lot of different flowers and trees.

✓ Well, because parks are very beautiful. There are a lot of different flowers and trees.

Sentence is acceptable; no grammatical correction needed. (Included to confirm no change.) Suggestion: None.

× There are fresh air that makes people feel refreshment and and, and it will makes people feel alive.

✓ There is fresh air that makes people feel refreshed, and it makes people feel alive.

'Air' is uncountable and uses singular 'is', not 'are'. 'Refreshment' (noun) is incorrect here; use adjective 'refreshed'. Remove duplicate 'and' and use 'makes' (not 'will makes') since general statements take present simple 'makes'. Suggestion: Use 'there is' with uncountable nouns, use appropriate adjective forms (refreshed), and maintain subject-verb agreement ('it makes').

× That will makes us feel happy and relaxed and.

✓ That will make us feel happy and relaxed.

After modal 'will' the verb must be base form 'make', not 'makes'. Also remove trailing 'and'. Suggestion: Use base verb after modals and avoid dangling conjunctions.

× When I have spare time I would went there to walk around the lake sometimes with my friends.

✓ When I had spare time, I would go there to walk around the lake sometimes with my friends.

Context is past habitual: change 'have' to past 'had'. After 'would' use base verb 'go' not 'went'. Add comma after the time clause. Suggestion: Use consistent past forms for past habitual actions: 'When I had..., I would go...'.

× Where did you go for a walk lately?

✓ Where did you go for a walk recently?

The examiner's sentence uses 'lately' which is acceptable but 'recently' is more natural with past simple 'did you go'. This is a style suggestion rather than strict grammar. Suggestion: Use 'recently' with past simple for natural phrasing.

× That would be last month. I went to the park with the lake.

✓ That was last month. I went to the park with the lake.

Referring to a past time, use simple past 'was' rather than conditional 'would be'. Suggestion: Use simple past when stating when something happened.

× There are a lot of fishermen.

✓ There were a lot of fishermen.

Context refers to a past event ('last month'), so use past 'were' with 'there'. Suggestion: Match tense within the narrative.

× I I saw they were fishing and that trip makes me feel happy.

✓ I saw they were fishing, and that trip made me feel happy.

Remove duplicate 'I'. For reported past events use past 'made' rather than present 'makes' to keep past tense consistent. Add comma for clarity. Suggestion: Avoid repetition, maintain past tense consistency, and use correct conjunction punctuation.