走路— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make your answer more concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct minor grammar (e.g., 'at the weekend', 'go for a walk', 'after meals we choose to walk').

範例: Yes, I walk quite a lot. At the weekend I usually go for a walk in the park with my parents in the evening, and sometimes we walk after meals to help digestion.

建議: Be specific and correct vocabulary/grammar. Give a clear reason and a brief example. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' correctly and replace incorrect words ('work' → 'walking' or 'exercise').

範例: Yes, I walked outside a lot as a child because my parents and grandparents believed regular exercise helps you stay healthy. For example, we would walk to the nearby park every Sunday.

建議: Avoid hesitation words and repetition. Answer directly, then give two specific reasons with linking words. Use correct phrasing ('walk in parks', 'reduce stress').

範例: People walk in parks because the green environment helps reduce stress and improve mood, and walking there is also good exercise that benefits physical health.

建議: Use a clear topic sentence and a specific example, and avoid awkward phrasing. Replace 'in the nature' with 'in nature' and connect ideas with 'for example' or 'such as'.

範例: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk in nature, for example around a lake in a park or along the seaside, because these places relax me and make me happy.

建議: Correct word choice and be concise. Use past tense consistently and avoid confusing verbs (use 'walked' not 'worked'). Provide one clear time reference and a brief reason if needed.

範例: I recently walked in a park with my parents. For example, just last night after dinner we felt full, so we went for a short walk around the park.

× I like walking.

✓ I like to walk.

After the verb like, both the gerund and infinitive are possible, but in this context 'to walk' is more natural when describing a habitual activity. Use 'to walk' to sound more fluent.

× at weekend I usually go for walking with my parents in the evening or sometimes after meals we will choose to walk in the park.

✓ on weekends I usually go for a walk with my parents in the evening, or sometimes after meals we choose to walk in the park.

Use the preposition 'on' with 'weekends' and pluralize 'weekend' to 'weekends' for habitual actions (Grammar problem types: 11 and 1). 'Go for walking' is incorrect; use 'go for a walk'. Remove future 'will' when describing habitual actions; use simple present 'choose'.

× Yes, I often went for a walk when I was a child because my parents and my grandparents thought that work every day will make you live longer and have a better physical condition.

✓ Yes, I often went for a walk when I was a child because my parents and my grandparents thought that working every day would help you live longer and have better physical health.

When reporting past beliefs, use past tense 'would' rather than 'will'. 'Work every day' should be the gerund 'working' to express the action in general. 'Physical condition' is better phrased as 'physical health'.

× I think maybe work in parks can relax your mood and relieve your stress from work.

✓ I think maybe walking in parks can relax your mood and relieve your stress from work.

The subject should be the activity 'walking', not 'work'. Use the gerund 'walking in parks' to describe the action that relaxes mood.

× I think I would walk in the nature, such as around a lake in the park or beside the sea, which will relax my mood and let me feel happy.

✓ I think I would walk in nature, such as around a lake in a park or beside the sea, which would relax my mood and make me feel happy.

Use 'in nature' (no article). After a conditional 'would' in the main clause, use 'would' consistently in the result clause ('would relax') to match mood. 'Let me feel happy' is awkward; use 'make me feel happy'.

× I recently worked in a park with my parents.

✓ I recently walked in a park with my parents.

'Worked in a park' means employed, but context requires 'walked'. Use the past simple 'walked' or present perfect for recent actions; 'recently walked' is appropriate here.

× after we finished our dinner, we felt full so we chose to walk beside the park.

✓ after we finished our dinner, we felt full so we chose to walk around the park.

Use 'around the park' to indicate walking within/around the park area. 'Beside the park' means next to it, which likely is not intended. 'After we finished our dinner' is correct past sequence.