走路— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific details using linking words. Avoid filler words and repetition and correct verb forms and prepositions (e.g., "as part of my daily routine", "1 to 2 kilometres", "sometimes I walk with my parents at night").

範例: No, I don't walk a lot. As part of my daily routine I usually walk about one to two kilometres, and sometimes I go for a walk with my parents at night.

建議: Use past tense consistently and make sentences clear. Begin with a direct answer, then give a reason with linking words (e.g., "because"), and avoid repetition. Correct pronouns and verb forms ("when I was a child", "they worked in the evening").

範例: Yes, I often went outside with my parents when I was a child because they worked in the evenings, so I spent time with them during the day.

建議: Give a clear, relevant reason with specific supporting details. Use linking words like "because" and "for example." Avoid unclear phrases and hesitations. Mention benefits (fresh air, safety, scenery) and give a brief example.

範例: People like to walk in parks because they offer fresh air and pleasant scenery. For example, parks usually have flat paths and fewer cars, so walking there feels safer and more relaxing.

建議: Answer directly, then add one or two clear reasons. Use correct word order and prepositions ("take a long walk in a garden", "along the side of the garden"). Complete your ideas instead of trailing off.

範例: I would like to take a long walk in a botanical garden because the paths are quiet and well maintained. Walking there would let me enjoy flowers and peaceful scenery.

建議: Use the past simple for recent events and be specific about time and place. Start with a clear sentence ("Recently I went to...") and give one detail why you chose that place. Remove fillers and repeated words.

範例: Recently I went for a walk along a nearby road beside a food park. I like that route because the footpath is quiet and I can walk peacefully.

× No, I don't walk a lot, but as your routine daily life, I have to walk around to 1 to 2 kilometers and and at the sometimes I walk with my parents at the uh night. So always with 8/10/10.

✓ No, I don't walk a lot, but in my daily routine I have to walk about 1 to 2 kilometers, and sometimes I walk with my parents at night. Usually about 8 out of 10 times.

The student mixed present-simple usage and incorrect time expressions. 'As your routine daily life' is unnatural; use 'in my daily routine'. 'Walk around to 1 to 2 kilometers' should be 'walk about 1 to 2 kilometers'. 'At the sometimes' is incorrect; use 'sometimes'. 'At the uh night' should be 'at night'. Also 'So always with 8/10/10' is unclear; changed to 'Usually about 8 out of 10 times' to convey frequency. Suggestion: use simple present consistently for habitual actions and common adverbs of frequency in correct positions (before the main verb or after be).

× Yes, when I was child I often go outside with my parents because my parents she always work at the evening so I have to I always want to the work with them.

✓ Yes, when I was a child I often went outside with my parents because my mother always worked in the evening, so I always wanted to go with them.

Multiple tense and article errors: 'when I was child' needs the article 'a child'. Habitual past requires past simple 'went' not 'go'. 'My parents she' mixes subjects; use 'my mother' or 'my parents'. 'Always work at the evening' should be past 'always worked in the evening' and preposition 'in the evening'. 'I always want to the work with them' should be past 'I always wanted to go with them'. Suggestion: use past simple for past habits and correct articles and prepositions.

× People like to walk in parks because of the because of the parking area are the level of the level of the earth. There is the no chit check, uh, type roads and then there is the park. So no one can.

✓ People like to walk in parks because parks have flat, paved areas and quiet paths, so it is safe and pleasant to walk there.

Original sentences are fragmented and unclear. 'Because of the because of the parking area are the level of the level of the earth' is ungrammatical and repetitive. 'There is the no chit check' is meaningless. The correction clarifies intended meaning: parks offer level ground and quiet paths. Suggestion: express reasons with clear clauses and avoid repetition; make subject and verb agree and complete the thought.

× I would like to long walk in the gardens now gardens are a separate path from The Walking hard walking so I would like to walk in the at the side of the garden so I can see the.

✓ I would like to take a long walk in the gardens because they have paths separate from busy streets, so I could walk along the side of the garden and enjoy the view.

Problems include incorrect verb collocation 'long walk' (use 'take a long walk'), run-on sentence, missing articles, and incomplete ending. 'The Walking hard walking' is unclear. The correction uses natural collocations and completes the idea. Suggestion: use 'take a walk' for the action, include articles like 'the' or 'a' where needed, and avoid run-on sentences by using conjunctions or splitting sentences.

× If I have to work lately then I I have I have went to the uh nearby my nearby the road and there is the food park so I can walk on the footpath peacefully.

✓ Recently, when I had to go to work nearby, I went along the road near my home, and there is a park so I could walk on the footpath peacefully.

Tense and verb form errors: 'If I have to work lately' mixes conditional and present; use 'recently' and past simple. 'I have went' is incorrect; use past participle 'have gone' or past simple 'went'. Article and word order issues: 'my nearby the road' incorrect — use 'the road near my home'. 'There is the food park' likely 'a park' or 'the park'. Suggestion: use past simple for completed recent actions and correct past participle forms; simplify word order.