走路— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 注意发音与词汇的正确使用（例如“walk”与“work”容易混淆）。回答要直接且简洁，开头用主题句回答问题，然后用一两句细节支持。避免重复表达相同意思。可以补充频率或原因使内容更具体。

範例: Not really. I usually drive or cycle when I go out because it’s faster, but I try to walk more in warm weather for exercise and fresh air.

建議: 注意时态和语法一致（过去时用过去式），代词和词序要正确。回答要先用一句话直接肯定或否定，再用具体细节说明（例如地点、频率、感受）。避免用不准确或错误的短语。

範例: Yes, I did. My mother loved taking long walks after dinner, so we often went to the local park together, which helped me stay healthy and created good family memories.

建議: 回答要更自然和具体，使用连接词（for example, because）并说明具体原因（如安静、空气好、安全、景色）。注意词汇搭配（environment is good / beneficial to health），避免重复和语法错误。

範例: People like walking in parks because the air is fresher, the surroundings are peaceful, and paths are safe. For example, parks often have trees and benches that make walking pleasant and relaxing.

建議: 注意虚拟语气和语法（用“I would like to”后从句要正确），句子要完整且具体。说明原因要清晰（views, fresh air, calm atmosphere），避免不完整的结尾。

範例: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk along the seaside because the views are beautiful, the air is fresh, and walking on the beach is very relaxing.

建議: 使用正确的过去时并组织句子顺序（What happened, when, with whom, and why）。提供具体细节（哪个山、活动内容、感受）。避免直接翻译中文表达（e.g. "release our pressure under the hard life"），改为更自然的英语。

範例: I went for a walk on a mountain last weekend with my mother and some friends. We hiked along scenic trails, enjoyed great views, and it was a relaxing break from our busy daily lives.

× To be honest, I don't work a lot.

✓ To be honest, I don't walk a lot.

原句用詞錯誤，將“walk”寫成“work”。根據上下文（考官問是否常走路），應使用現在簡單時的動詞“walk”。建議注意同形近詞區分，並根據語境選詞。

× I often drive or ride a bike when I need to go out.

✓ I often drive or ride a bike when I need to go out.

此句語法正確，使用現在簡單描述習慣性行為，無需修改。

× But I think walking is very healthy so maybe I will work a lot when the weather is better.

✓ But I think walking is very healthy so maybe I will walk a lot when the weather is better.

原句將“walk”誤寫為“work”。要表達未來可能的習慣性行為，使用“will”+動詞原形或“might”更合適。此處只需把動詞改為“walk”。

× Yes I do, my mom was very like to go to a long walk after having dinner so when I was a child I often go to park and have a long walking journey with she.

✓ Yes, my mom really liked to go for a long walk after dinner, so when I was a child I often went to the park and took long walks with her.

句中多處時態和用詞錯誤： - “was very like to” 應改為過去式“really liked to”表示過去習慣； - “go to a long walk” 應改為“go for a long walk”或“take a long walk”； - “I often go to park” 時態錯誤，敘述過去用過去式“went to the park”； - “have a long walking journey with she” 代詞錯誤且用法不自然，應用賓格“her”並改為“took long walks with her”。 建議：說過去習慣時使用過去簡單時，注意介詞搭配（go for a walk, go to the park）及主賓格代詞區分。

× It really built my healthy.

✓ It really improved my health.

原句中“built my healthy”不符合英語表達。應使用名詞“health”或動詞短語“improved my health”。建議學習常見動詞與名詞搭配（improve health, keep healthy）。

× Firstly, because I think the environment in park is very good for walking more.

✓ Firstly, because I think the environment in the park is very good for walking.

問題有兩處： - 缺少定冠詞，應為“the park”； - “very good for walking more” 語序與表達不自然，應簡化為“very good for walking”。建議注意定冠詞用法及冗餘副詞刪除。

× Walking is a very good lifestyle which is beneficial to our health if you keep working in a pattern park.

✓ Walking is a very healthy lifestyle which is beneficial to our health if you keep it as a regular habit.

原句用詞混亂： - “very good lifestyle” 更自然為“very healthy lifestyle”； - “if you keep working in a pattern park” 完全不符合語意，推測想表達“如果你保持規律的習慣”，應改為“if you keep it as a regular habit”或“if you walk regularly”。建議表達習慣時使用“keep + noun/keep doing”或“regularly”。

× If I have a chance to take a long walk, I would like to take take a long walk beside a sea and on the beach because I think the view there is wonderful and there has fresh air and the weather must be.

✓ If I had the chance to take a long walk, I would like to walk beside the sea on the beach because I think the view there would be wonderful, there would be fresh air and the weather would be pleasant.

句中問題： - 條件句時態混用，與“would like”搭配應使用與現實相反或假設情況的過去式“If I had the chance”； - 重複“take take”刪除； - “a sea” 應為“the sea”或“the seaside”； - “there has fresh air” 語法錯誤，應為“there would be fresh air”； - “the weather must be” 不完整，改為“the weather would be pleasant”。 建議學習條件句時態配對（第二類條件句：If + past, would + 原形）。

× Where did you go for a walk lately?

✓ Where did you go for a walk recently?

原句“lately”雖可用，但在問過去某次行為時“recently”更常用且語感自然。此處可視為詞選建議而非嚴重語法錯誤。建議選用更自然的副詞表達時間。

× I go for a walk in a mountain.

✓ I went for a walk in the mountains.

時態和單複數及冠詞錯誤： - 敘述過去事件應用過去式“went”； - “a mountain” 不自然，常用複數“mountains”或“a mountain”視語境，但搭配“in the mountains”更常見； - 加入定冠詞“the”。建議注意時態一致性與地點名詞的單複數與冠詞搭配。

× Lately that was happened last weekend.

✓ That happened last weekend.

原句語法冗餘且時態用法錯誤： - “was happened” 不可與被動連用，happen為不及物動詞，應直接用過去式“happened”； - “lately”與“last weekend”重複表達時間，保留“last weekend”即可。建議學習不及物動詞的過去式用法，避免不必要的助動詞。

× I go to work on the mountain in my hometown with my friends and my mom.

✓ I went to the mountain near my hometown with my friends and my mom.

時態需用過去式“went”。此外，“go to work on the mountain” 含義不明，若是去山上遊玩應用“went to the mountain”或“went hiking in the mountains”。建議根據語意選擇正確動詞短語（go hiking, go to the mountain）。

× We enjoy a wonderful time together which help us release our pressure under the hard life.

✓ We enjoyed a wonderful time together which helped us relieve the stress of our hard lives.

問題包括： - 與敘述過去一致要用過去式“enjoyed/helped”； - “release our pressure” 表達不自然，應為“relieve the stress”； - “under the hard life” 不符合英語習慣，改為“of our hard lives”。 建議：注意時態一致，使用固定搭配（relieve stress, have a hard life）和可數形式（life → lives 如果指多人的生活）。